| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Title: Still going good
Reviewed By: WigInABox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! :) Since I am actually signed on, I'm reviewing. I really like this story. It's always awesome when there is a well-written Saiyuki romance branching off from the typical pairings. This is interesting, without being melodramatic or overly angsty, the tension slowly building between all of them is suspenseful. I can't wait to see what happens. Please continue, I for one would love to see how this ends. :)
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Jessi V On: July 25, 2006 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed the series so far. It has it's humor, sex and angst all mixed into one. The story keeps you coming back for more. I hope that you continue the story. I look forward to reading more.
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Title: chap 17
Reviewed By: sokasato On: June 18, 2006 19:04 CDT
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Once again I have not been dissapointed (not that I thought I ever was going to be) you're writing rocks! I have been waiting forever for a new chapter. I loved it very much. I can't wait for an update. I salute you!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: ~PeachLove~ On: June 13, 2006 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deary me, I do think that that entire chapter was almost completely sex. Not complaining, just complimenting!
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Title: aw
Reviewed By: yukitok On: June 10, 2006 10:55 CDT
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T.T poor hakkai. I have to let you know that I was not a believer in this fic when it started, just because of the pairning, but this is getting interesting...*thinks*. I like, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: June 08, 2006 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that's right you tell him, goku! i'm just waiting for some girl or unlucky demon to push their luck with gojyo so that goku can go all long-hair-and-claws (when his power limiter is off) on their ass and be like 'he's mine, stay the freak away.'(^__^) i'm surprised gojyo didn't figure it out but i guess it'll be clear to him now. and the little show of posessiveness (sp?) was too hot. this chapter totally made my night. hope everything is good where you are. you're going to a-kon! i was gonna go there but now i'm going to Anime expo. i'm gonna cosplay as Eagle and maybe Ferio from MKR.you have a great time and come back home safe, kay?
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 14:35 CDT
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The monkey deserves to be with his pervy water sprite. Not even a homicidal blonde and a sweet smiling Hakkai should come between that. *takes up her katana ready to fight for goku and goyjo* gojyo: who the hell are you? dnb: Um... I'm... *katana droops before she starts to blush* goku: wait... why are you blushing so hard? dnb: Well you see I saw... and then you two... and... ahahaha goyjo and goku: ... do you mean... dnb: yeah
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Reviewed By: dark vixen On: May 26, 2006 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally hot! ya NEED to up date soon! I love this pairing, Sweet, perverted Goku... Hot, sexy Gojyo...Ahahah! Fuckin' love it!
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Title: Chapter 15 &16
Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: April 28, 2006 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I found you. I think I'll stick to reviewing here instead of waiting for AFF to get its stuff together. How ya been? Good, I hope. Anyway, great work as usual. Chapter 15 was sweet. Master Shou was a character. The comment about Hakkai not putting out was hilarious. But the part when Sanzo asked Gojyo what Goku sees in him was priceless. I liked how Gojyo responded but his confidence about their relationship still needs some work. the fact the he was in awe when Sanzo said that he makes Goku happy and the fact that he went to ask Goku later, helps to prove that observation. I loved the GojyoXGoku in this chapter. The part with the kissing when Goku said 'This isn't sharing. This is me kissing you.' just made me wanna melt and squeal at the same time. Now for Chapter 16. What is there not to like about Chapter 16? It had a bit of everything. drama, pervyness(sp?), male bonding, drunkeness and hot sex. What more could you ask for? When Hakkai start lecturing Gojyo, it kinda put me in a pissed mood for a mintue there. I was, all, WTF? But I got happy again when reading the part with Goku being a HORNY demanding little shit. The phrase 'pervy monkey' instantly came to mind. But after reaching the end of the chapter, my mind had slipped into a fully catatonic state. I'll be thinking about this all day at work with this stupidly happy grin on my face. And when asked the question of 'was it good?' my answer will be 'Yes, Yes, it was.' LOL! But I gotta go. So until next time, ja! ~Devious
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Reviewed By: Fuzzubunnytoo On: April 20, 2006 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have missed you so much since AFF went into hideing anad I found you and am so happy. Your so good and your story is so hot. I love it.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: April 20, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect as always!! Can I be cheeky and ask about Bits and Pieces - coz that's just as good as this!
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: April 18, 2006 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter! They're always worth waiting for.
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Reviewed By: bahnona On: April 03, 2006 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated! I've been thinking all month, "But it's March! Where's this month's update?" Now it's April, so again, I say, "Where's this month's update?" But then I also want you to update your parallel Sanzo/Hakkai fic too! I guess I'll have to take what I can get. Everytime the withdrawal gets too bad, I just re-read from the beginning again! BTW, I really liked that Sanzo acknowledged to Gojyo that Gojyo is making Goku happy. We need to get Gojyo's self-image up there where it belongs! Thanks, and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Sokasato On: March 31, 2006 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best GokuxGojyo fanfic I've ever read and really well written. It's one of those stories you can't wait for to be updated!
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: February 12, 2006 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every chapter you find another way to turn my insides into mush! Thank you!!
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