| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 16:08 CDT
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This is a really interesting story and I can't wait to read more. Do keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: EriK aka Poe On: July 04, 2005 02:07 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this tale; which is odd, only for the fact that I (normally) don't enjoy yaoi with Goku in them. Are you planning on writing more, soon? I ask, because it's been awhile since you last wrote a chapter and I'm beginning to become impatient. *laugh* I'd hate to make a bother of myself, by leaving reviews every day, harassing you to write more on this tale. *wink*
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Title: TOO GOOD
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AS USUAL THIS STORY IS STILL ONE OF TEH BEST I HAVE READ. MY HENTAI MIND HAS KICKED IN AND ALL I'M THINKING ABOUT IS A ORGY WITH GOKU/GOJYO/HAKKAI/SANZO I CAN'T HELP IT!!! PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER SO I THESE NASTY , BUT PLEASURABLE, IMAGES WILL SUBSIDE AND MY CALM SIDE OF MY MIND WILL KICK IN. CONTINUE PLEASE I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!!!!! YOU WILL HEAR MORE OF ME!!! ~MANGACHILD420 PS: YOU CAN GIVE ME A HINT JUST EMAIL ME I WON'T TELL A SOUL!!!! LOL!!! I'M JUST KIDDING!!!!
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Reviewed By: wda_yagi-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
W00t! I love this fic! Your writing is really awesome. All of the characters are almost exactally in-character, and the story itself is just amazing. I'm really bad at reviews, but... yeah! Awesome fic! Evil sorta'-cliff hanger, but that just makes me want to read the next part even more! So... yeah. Again, I love your fic! XD
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Title: Yaoi is ok wif me!
Reviewed By: coffeebeanchild On: June 11, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! THis fanfic is really cul! At first I saw the yaoi warning and i was like NOT ANOTHER ONE! But I'm not against gays and a little voice in my head said if you're not against gays then what have you got against yaoi fanfics! Cool or what eh? Anyway you've really set this out really gud (reads story agen and nods at all da slushy parts!) unfortunately there is only a ten rating on mediaminer cause it's definately much higher in my opinion! Hope u update soon! One thing mention Hakai and Sanzo a bit more I know this story is based on Gojyo and Goku but it would be nice if we could see the whole party together saying that still have the little ahem private times (god that sounds so perverted! :P) with gojyo and Goku!!! ANd maybe throw in a chapter where Hakkai and Sanzo talk about what's going on and what they think also brng up the issue of Hakkai kissing Gojyo....THAT'LL BRING SUM REAAAAL CONFLICT!!!! Bye and plez update soon also email me wen you have im at Highoncaffiene@hotmail.com K bye!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 18:28 CDT
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Awesome, hot, interesting, and I'm out of adjectives. Talk about stopping when hot and bothered! But still, it was so cute, and seeing those two as close to gushy as they can get is adorable! Please try to update relatively soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you for writing this story. This is the best and pretty much the ONLY Goku x Goyjo fic I could find. You don't how happy I was to find this. Good writing, good plot, and nice steamy scenes to boot. -sniffles- I just really love that. I found this fic two days ago and I wouldv'e reviewed then, but it was nearly 4 in the morning and my fingers weren't coherent enough to type. ^^;; Please continue this, and know that I'm rooting you on!
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Reviewed By: Sayge On: June 01, 2005 15:14 CDT
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OMG!! You HAVE to update! This is soooo good!!!
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Title: Jeda
Reviewed By: Jeda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 03:31 CDT
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I don't read much of GokuxGojyo but there are some coming up recently. I like how you potray them both. Lovers? Goku claiming Gojyo? That was someting new! And finally somebody agreed that he's not a kid but a 500 year old 'person'. Ha! The way you move the stories, I'm not surprise to see GokuxSanzo and HakkaixGojyo. But whatever it is, just love your stories. Keep going! :-)
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Reviewed By: Kiba-chan not logged in On: May 07, 2005 06:35 CDT
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Ooooh, what a great new chapter! I LOVE Gojyo's confrontation with Sanzo. Now you almost have me hoping for this to end up SanzoxGoku and GojyoxHakkai. Almost. You have Hakkai's character down so well, he's all mysterious and stuff. ;) I love that. Don't worry about OOC, I thought everyone was particualrly IN character in this chapter. The only thing I want to mention is pronoun confusion. I run into this problem too; when you're writing about four men, you tend to have a lots of 'he' and 'him' and 'his' in your paragraphs, and sometimes it's hard to figure out who you're talking about. My trick is to think up creative alternates to use instead of pronouns. (the kid, the boy, the youth, the golden-eyed youth, the monkey, the ape, the brunette, the child etc.) Just something to mention. It sure bugs me in my stories, so I know it's hard, but it's not impossible to fix. Anyway, I can't wait to see where you're going with this. You almost have me thinking the pairings might change entirely by the end of the story. I really don't care who ends up with who, your writing is such that I'm simply enjoying the ride. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 20:28 CDT
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Oi. Well, for starters, really, really, really hot. Sanzo/Hakkai never occurred to me, but it makes sense. For a yaoi author, you did a good job of putting the girls in. I like how you characterized everybody, and the little details you put in spiced it up. (Hakkai a mother hen! haha, that is too good...) Goku is...perfect. Everything. And that last bit, the "declaration," was so in character, hilarious, and...well lot's o' things. Don't you dare leave us hanging!
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Reviewed By: Devil_n_blue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
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Poor Goyjo what's a poor water sprite to do. *giggles* I love it and can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: kiba-chan not logged in On: April 26, 2005 15:57 CDT
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Nice :) I liked the scene where Gojyo was buying the condoms. XD
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 11:20 CDT
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Nice :) I usually don't like Goku in any of the sex, but you've done it pretty well. He still seems a bit... young, but not bad at all. I can't wait to see what Sanzo does to Gojyo... Update soon!
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Title: Sanzo goin to kill Gojyo.
Reviewed By: Jeda On: April 14, 2005 07:57 CDT
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A fun ride! Keep it goin! Sanzo better do something or Goku gonna fall for Gojyo. Hee! Hee!
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