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Reviewed By: Goatchild On: September 14, 2008 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic since almost the beginning (how many years has it been now? XD) and I think I even reviewed once or twice before. I love this fic to death. It's actually the only Saiyuki fic I read. No other fic compares! Anyway, I've always wondered about this, and since you asked for songs, I might as well say it now: Every time I read this fic, I get the song Pretty Baby by Vanessa Carlton stuck in my head, for obvious reasons. XD Besides the title, the lyrics of the song actually do fit Gojyo's and Goku's relationship in this fic pretty well. It fits so well in fact that I've often wondered if the song inspired you in any way. So that's my song suggestion, assuming it wasn't already a driving force in this fic. ^^ I look forward to the next chapter, no matter how long it may take to get here! Especially with that ending! I've been waiting for Hakkai to stir things up again. XD Can't wait~!
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Reviewed By: monkeyking2089 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter...I was slightly confused at the beginning, but I still enjoyed it. I'm anticipating the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: monkeyking2089 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I began reading this fic a while back and I have to say that I enjoy your writing style and the originality of the story itself. I believe we can see your writing technique mature and it's wonderful to be a par of that experience. I very much look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Teaching Goku
Reviewed By: jessiedark [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 19:43 CST
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I would have rated but I was suddenly not sure if 10 was best or worst. I love this story and I was thrilled to see another chapter.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looooove this fic. This was such a great chapter; you are totally forgiven for the wait if we have work like this after every break. Loved seeing the way Gojyo both wants to fuck Goku into the mattress without the condom and "coddle" him by wearing one. Great stuff! Can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: jiele On: December 03, 2007 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*almost fell off her bed in excitement when she saw that this fic had been updated* ^^ <333333333333
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Reviewed By: Windy-- windwhisprer On: September 22, 2007 17:42 CDT
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Wow. That's all I have to say. A friend of mine told me to read this, and I'm glad I did. Now, I do not like GojyoGoku (Or vice versa) by any extent of the imagination. But oh wow, I love what you're doing. Your characterization is amazing, the plot is wonderful, and your smut is delicious. I wasn't planning on reviewing, however I do want to say this. You've weaved an interesting story, and it seems like you can't find yourself a happy ending. If Gojyo and Goku stays together, then they're sacrificing Sanzo and Hakkai's happiness. However, if they break off into their respective 39, 58, who knows how happy Gojyo and Goku are going to be? So, I do want to say that I'm interested in how you're going to tie this up. If you plan on going one way or qanother, I hope you write an alternate ending. Because I do want to see Gojyo and Goku stay together, but at the same time I'm a regular 39 fan, and I'm just waiting for Sanzo to make some kind of move on Goku. So, again, I hope that you write an alternative ending. Or, you could write a story that mimicked this one, only from Sanzo or Hakkai's point of veiw. I would so read that, even being against 38. (Angst fest, much?) I love what you're doing and I hope you continue. ^___^ My email is inu_yasha_rox_@hotmail.com if you would like anything. I know it's cheesy. I've had it for years.
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Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 10:28 CDT
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Heheh... Another wonderful chapter (half a chapter?). I find it amusing how Gojyo's still worried about the whole pregnancy thing, even if only a little. Despite the fact that he knows it was a dream and could never happen. Hmm, I wonder... What would a child born of only one parent and a... spring... look like? o_O; Like the parents? *pictures mini Sanzos and Gokus running around* XD Even if it was a dream... It's still a funny idea... Heheh, so, yeah o.o; Back to this chapter. I love how Goku's still so embarassed and such. And only thinks with his stomach. Where you ended was priceless. Even after that Goku still wants food. It's cute. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the fantastic work.
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Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 12:38 CDT
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Ack! o_o This is such an interesting story! XD An interesting pairing, with VERY interesting things happening. So did evil-goddess-lady give Gojyo a bad dream, or what? That still confuses me a bit, but it seems like she was just being her evil self and doing things to get someone beat up. :P Either way, the idea of pregnant Goku and/or Sanzo is hilarious. Sanzo already acts like he's PMSing all the time, I can only imagine how horrible it'd be to see him a full nine months pregnant! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! I still want to see him finally admit to calling Goku "pretty baby" since he says that alot. And I'm uber curious as to why he's saying it, and why he can't remember saying it. XD You're not done writing, right? O_O I'll cry if this is it. (There's no "tbc..." at the end of this chapter, don't scare me like this)
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Reviewed By: yagi-san On: June 26, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just rereading the fic and had to tell you just how much I love it. Definitely one of my top 10 favorite fics ever (out of millions and millions no less XD). I love your style and originality. I really don't think I could enjoy other Saiyuki fics as much after this fic because it's just so good. Still, chapters 18 and 19 freaked me out. Totally random! XD I can't wait for more chapters! ^^
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 04, 2007 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I took me 3 days to get threw all of your story and it was a most enjoyable 3 days ^-^ Awsome story,c ant wait to see what happends next!
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Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 02:06 CST
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Hi! I tend to read your fic on adultfanfic but just in case you can't read your reviews, decided to do mine on fanfic .... so glad to see an update on this fic which I have really enjyed reading. This and the previous chapt were a bit werid and OC but quite fun to read and sort of like a break in the whole epic. Hopefully, your muse is back and you're ready to go. Eagerly awaiting for you to write more great chapts.
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Title: chapter 19
Reviewed By: Sokasato On: January 25, 2007 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an update!! Thank you soooo much!! It was pretty funny that the whole thing was a dream. Poor Gojyo. LOL.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, I like this updated chapter 19 better than the first version - it flows better. I am glad all of the pregnancy stuff was just a dream - that really got freaky at the end there when Sanzo and Goku went into the Spring of Maidenhood. It was nice to see that even though Gojyo was freaked out by what was happening, he was still very much the concerned lover. I wonder if part of this dream came from the chapter where the condom broke...? Maybe a little guilt trickled in somehow. But it was a great chapter, and I hope you get over your writer's block soon - I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: January 24, 2007 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! Thoroughly enjoyable, if a little bizarre. Looking forward to your next update.
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