| "His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maimaimai On: April 10, 2011 16:13 EDT
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Fantastic work, wish you would write more! other writers need to take a lesson or two from you! |
Reviewed By: MeigumiSan On: April 10, 2011 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have such a fantastic way of writing! I LOVE this fanfictions! I read it when you first wrote it and now i'm reading it for the second time years later. and I STILL enjoy it :) Thank you so much for actually making it like literature. other writers just throw conversations and make weak plots together, you made it real. I never want to stop reading! Keep up the wonderful work |
Reviewed By: Naru_Fluffy_ZuZu_Koga_Miroku_Bankotsu_Jakotsu_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the most enjoyable piece of literature I have ever read since The Lord of the Rings. This story is both touching and amusing as well as it makes me cry. It is a beautifully written story and I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IS the best Sess/Kag story, I love every chapter, but I don't understand why you stopped? I wish you could continue! I definitely added this to my favorites!
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Title: his little girl
Reviewed By: IcePrincesss [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Un-freakin'-believable! This has to be one of the best Inu fics I've ever read! That being said, I would like to address a few things. First, I was vaguely disturbed at the sheer amount of sexual violence which occurred, especially the acts forced upon the child, Rin. Rapefics repulse me and as a rule I avoid them. I greatly appreciate that you made an effort to post warnings of upcoming content of such a nature so that I might mentally prepare myself to read them. That is definitely a first for me, but nonetheless I read them because I thought the story as a whole would be worth it (and you certainly did not disappoint). Moving on. Obviously you are aware that Hojo was completely out of character. I'm the first to admit that I was never a fan of Hojo and find him to be excruciatingly annoying. But the fact remains that he is a kind, if naieve, boy with a shy and unassuming personality. He is utterly incapably of such actions. Anyway, thanks for such a great tale!
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Title: His Little Girl
Reviewed By: FranklinBe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!!!!!!! I would give you an overall rating of 1 million but it only goes to 10. You are my favorite author that I have read their story so far. I love the way that you kept Sesshomaru in character but then you gradually got him into a nicer and more passionate Sesshomaru. I also love the descriptions of the changes they go through and the lemon scenes. I love the way you describe everything so thourouly that makes it seem real and as if you are there. I can't wait to read the sequal which I will start after I finish writing this review. Maybe you could read my story(s) Love's Path and A New Life and tell me what I can do to make it better. Arigatou. By the way do you want to write these kind of stories when you are older? It would be a great profession for you. Never give up. Keep up the good work. You're awesome!!! I love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: curly 211 On: August 29, 2005 22:40 EDT
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I loved it!!! My only thought is that Jaken should have suffered more. I'm gonna start on the sequal right away! ^^
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever On: August 27, 2005 14:58 EDT
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i don't normally flame but ......... i'm speechless ... look at my nickname and you'll know why
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Title: Graet!!!
Reviewed By: LovelyAngel On: July 19, 2005 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really interesting. I couldn't stop reading it , it was addicting,well cant wait for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: May 27, 2005 18:09 EDT
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AAAACK!! you're ending it!! *searches madly for sequl* lol great job on the whole story!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 19:02 EDT
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Oh a sequel, cool!!! I can't wait^_^!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Parsnip (nsi) On: May 26, 2005 13:48 EDT
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I think that you choose a fitting place for this to end. In a way it started with Rin and it ended with Rin. It was a great read, and i hope your sequel is as much a success as this one. Thanks for touching on subjects that few have the courage and the knowledge to write about.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 20:59 EDT
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I imagine it is hard to place the stoic mask on after having removed it for months. I like that Rin still tried to reason that Jaken hadn't meant to be mean to her. But it is heart breaking to read her world being changed. Unfortunatly that is the way of life. Growing up is hard. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* (knowing me there should be a duh there) On: May 17, 2005 22:18 EDT
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lol i was going to say 'when is she going to find out that inuyasha killed her family' but then i reailized that was frum the wrong fanfic, so then i was like 'wow that was a good chapter cuz jaken died' and then i was like 'it was also good because... it was from this author' and then i was like 'all these chapters are good' lol, i'm hyper right now, toodle loo, (keep it up :D)
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