| "His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: May 17, 2005 08:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Meefmonster On: May 12, 2005 23:49 EDT
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Hmm...Kagome having new siblings? Go for it!! if not I'm happy to see Mama get some luvin!! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sarah Bayless On: May 12, 2005 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes you should make Kashu pregnant kagome could have a little sister or brother ^-^ Love your stories keep writing!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 20:50 EDT
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hmm I think that it would be possible for Kashu to be pregnant, she seems young enough yet and healthy not to mention any added strength and life from her new mate. It would be cute! Excelent job as the stry progresses! I'm loving it!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 19:32 EDT
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Yes that was short, but not bad. And about her getting pregnant. Well, maybe. After Kagome gets over the shock, I think it would be great for them. Something along the lines of making their relationship stronger. Can't wait for more, later.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 13:58 EDT
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Lovely chapter. You made my mouth water in thinking of chocolate fondue, something I haven't had the pleasure of having for to many years now. It's just something a college student cannot indulge in all that often. Still, lovely chapter. I also wanted to say that I was quite happy that Maika and Kagome were able to bond over their past and so were able to open up a little to each other. It was quite moving actually. As always, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ama_tori(nsi) On: May 09, 2005 23:09 EDT
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loved it!!! the chapters just keep getting better and better!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: ama_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 15:11 EDT
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hey, this is 1katie1 mediaminer deleted my account for no reason, at least, they didn't give me one, so i will now be reviewing under this username (ama_tori) {it roughly means bitchy bird} i'll still keep up with the story! awesome job so far! :D
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 11:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! great chapter and to top it of Im reviewer number 100 keep going you're doing great Be well and never be discouraged Luf Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^
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Reviewed By: katie(nsi) On: May 07, 2005 01:11 EDT
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YAY FLUFF!!!! omg i love this chapter!! i think it's the best one yet! *dies* i hope that talk helped heal kagome's wounds.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 00:52 EDT
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All I can say is 'its about time.' I am glad that Sesshoumaru was able to get her to admit it. I was wonder if what happened to Maika hadn't been about the same time. Would Kagome have kept her blame as long as she did? Can't wait for more, update soon.
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 00:36 EDT
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The poor girl. I couldn't imagine having to go through what she has. At least Sesshoumaru was able to help her get past the first step. Acceptance of what happened and that she was not at fault for it. Keep up the wonderful writing. You're showing us a view of life few writers have the courage to do.
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