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"His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ]
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 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 06, 2005 20:46 EDT
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I didn't think she had actually gotten that far away. The poor girl. I am glad that Kouga did as Kaede told him to do. Now I hope that Sesshoumaru can patch this up. And bring back the Kagome we all love. Later.
 Reviewed By: katie(nsi)  On: May 06, 2005 17:57 EDT
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wow, so he knows. i hope he gets to her fast enough, and can convince her to stop blaming herself. and while all this has been happening, wheres rin and shippo? OH YEAH! they're back in Kagome's time!lol i almost forgot. great chapter!
 Reviewed By: Kristie  On: May 06, 2005 00:49 EDT
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OMG I love this story and i cant believe what you did to Kag, I cant even do that to her in my stories well anyways i love it and I cant wait to see what Sessy does so you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 23:45 EDT
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*still crying*
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 22:51 EDT
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I think Sesshoumaru need to corner Inuyasha and the others to find out what is wrong with Kagome. Because she isn't going to tell him. I hope you get Kagome back to something more normal in the next chapter. This Kagome is really hard to read about. And she didn't do anything to feel remorse for. Please update soon, later.
 Reviewed By: katie(nsi)  On: May 05, 2005 21:04 EDT
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:O 2 updates in 1 day?? *hands you a box of pocky* i was to lazy to bake a cake, and pocky seemed like the easiest solution:P i hate cliffies! that was one to me... *throws tomatoe* you better keep updating, or else you'll see me on the front page of the newspaper.. "young girl suffers serious withdrawal" :P
 Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 (nsi)  On: May 05, 2005 20:17 EDT
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I feel sorry for Kagome I know she thinks it is her fault I wish Inuyasha would just tell him already great chapter I hope to see more soon be well :: bows:: ^^;; Ran-Chan
 Reviewed By: katie(nsi)  On: May 05, 2005 19:13 EDT
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wow... another great chapter! :D wow... will she tell him? will inuyasha tell him?? will anybody tell him??
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 16:32 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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*drowns in a pool tears*
 Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 13:01 EDT
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I can see why the last chapter would be a difficult one to write. You were able to write in so much confusion and despair into it. You've done a great job tieing in the emotional trauma of this fic that it truly has been an eye-opening experience. You hear about these types of things happenenig all the time, but sometimes we, the innocent bystander, never think about what the victim is going through and how even the tiniest brush with even one of these events can scar another deeply. Thank-you, and I hope Kagome opens up soon.
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2005 22:15 EDT
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There's one problem with Kagome's plan. Everyone know her to well. Especially Inuyasha. And with him knowing what happened, she's not going to be able to hide it. It's sad when girls in her position think this way. It's not their fault. It is never their fault. Hope you update soon, later.
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2005 16:41 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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*crys eyes out*
 Reviewed By: 1katie1 (nsi)  On: May 04, 2005 14:28 EDT
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*gasp* 2 updates in 1 day??? wow!! i've decided you deserve virtual cakes instead of cookies... *hands you a huge cake* :D keep up with the pace!
 Reviewed By: 1katie1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2005 22:32 EDT
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teehee!! i luv it!! keep up with the pace!! *showers wolf with tons of virtual cookies* :D lol, so Kashu isn't lonly? now, just out of curiosity, in a lot of stories, mikos human blood does not count, so their children would be full youkai... will u be unique? or go with the flow?? either's good for me, i'd LUV it either way!!
 Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2005 22:17 EDT
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I must say that its about time someone got her mother involved. Although there is one other story I remember reading that had her dating Kagome's doctor. Any ways, good job. Although I might sugest going a little slower with their relationship. Don't rush these things. It makes the story longer and much more enjoyable. Other than that I love this and can't wait for more.
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