| "His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: meme!!!(1katie1) On: April 27, 2005 14:10 EDT
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yay! we get the best of both worlds!!! :D great job!
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 02:29 EDT
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*frustrated at ending* *loves story*
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Reviewed By: meme!!! On: April 27, 2005 01:20 EDT
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noooooooo! keep kagsys human!!! plzplzplz... i'll still read if she doesn't, but LET HER STAY HUMAN!!! lol ;) good chapter (this is 1katie1)
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! It's just screams cute everywhere. One of the things about this story that is so rare is Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationship, I love how they get along…one can never find a fic with their relationship like this. Poor Shippo, why did he have to be traumatized so? The spell was activated when Kagome had the dream, right? I don't understand all this talk about mates being sensitive…what the hell do they mean?! The situation whit Inuyasha sleeping with Sesshomaru and Kagome is no big deal. Just think of it like this, Kagome's bed is an over-sized dog bed and Sesshomaru, Kagome, Inuyasha and Shippo are pups sharing a bed. That's the picture I get when I read it, I mean Sesshomaru is Inuyasha's old brother and Kagome is his younger sister with Shippo being their pup. Why was Kagome the only one to stay human? It doesn't make sense. Why did Sango and Miroku say as dog demons? I am so glad Kikyo finally got what was coming to her! And what happened to Naraku and the jewel shards? I can't wait to see what they do to Jaken. Please update soon! I look forward to reading more of this great story!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 23:41 EDT
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I am so glad that Inuyasha was able to help Shippo. It's really important that they continue their relationship. And I think that his mate needs to learn about his relationship with Kagome. That kind of thing shouldn't be keep out. It the way relationships work. No secrets like this. But other than that great chapter. Can't wait for more, later.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:14 EDT
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Very engaging!!! I'm a bit lost on the Kag/Sess part, but that's okay. Poor Shippo!! *cries* Evil evil bitch!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 13:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks fo the chapter, keep on writing
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 11:11 EDT
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Sniff, Poor Shippou. I don't think anyone is going to escape this fic without some kind of emotional scars. This story has transcended anything I've read before delving into the pyschological implications of the past and present hardships. You're doing a great job and can only hope that Shippou at least accepts what his parents have to say even if he can't understand it. Something like that will take years to get over I think. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Sakurakessho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 04:15 EDT
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Yay! Good Story! Keep up the great writing. Poor Shippou! I wouldn't want to forget that poor thing. *takes Shippou and cuddles him*
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 01:08 EDT
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I am putting a tissue box right here for this story. This chapter was to heart wrenching. I hope that they convince Shippo that they do love him and would fight for their memories to stay. Love the story, keep this going, later.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: parsnip [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 12:09 EDT
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Woot! I'm all caught up again! I'm almost glad that I fell behind because I would have hated seeing my fav character go through so much heartache. I hope Shippou is safe and sound and won't be to harsh on everyone when they find him/he wakes up.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 00:39 EDT
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Well, I am glad that the end of all that. Now to just get Shippo back and safe. Course I wonder what will his reaction be? Update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Sarah_0895 On: April 22, 2005 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it is the best one i have ever read!It is even better because you come out with a new chapter everyday and they aren't short.Please keep on writing!
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