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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 19:32 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kiyana On: September 02, 2005 17:01 CDT
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Interesting. I should have anticipated bondage. Wonder if Inuyasha will have a chance to do the same in return at any point? But seriously, it just seems like Inuyasha's being dragged along at this point, what with all the references to how Kagome's becoming more sexually active and demanding (And Inuyasha not getting any of the same). At this rate, within a few chapters he'll be unable to satisfy her. ;)
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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:58 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: rawambition On: August 31, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt rate. jaime
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Reviewed By: rawambition On: August 31, 2005 20:47 CDT
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i love this story, if i had to criticize it it would be that some times you leave out words "small ones" but still they are left out, and i understand that you rush to get the chapter done for us. like i said that is the ONLY thing i can criticize. i have just one question are you going to add any shessy to the story, if so that would give another twist to the already great story. could you tell me if you are or aren't? thanks, and again "I LOVE" your story, keep up the "GREAT" job.
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Title: Aewsome lemonade!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Been reading this for awhile, glad you updated. Terrific lemon -just the right amount of S&M, heh.
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Title: reader
Reviewed By: it's sailorgirl16 On: August 11, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really funny and thanks for the props
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Reviewed By: censored On: August 11, 2005 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for a good fanfic that i usually read to be updated. I was gettin tired of just the ok crap and the non ok crap that i've been reading out of sheer boredom. PLZ! update faster this is one of the best stories that i read and i only read the best stories, unless im bored. To get me to review i either hate the story and am just flaming or i love it! Keep up the GREAT! work.
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Reviewed By: n On: August 05, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I AM DIEING HERE! *cry* just update the fricking story
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Reviewed By: sweetnothinangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfics...update again soon please!
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Reviewed By: Kiyana On: July 13, 2005 12:27 CDT
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So Kagome's planning some revenge, eh? Hopefully it's not of the 'Bow to me, manslave!' or 'If you won't do it with me, I'll go find someone who will' (Either the threat version, or the one where she actually goes and does it) varieties. I can't remember any focus on anything similar to what Kagome's feeling that Inuyasha might be going through (The increased energy, etc). Then again, I can barely remember any scenes where Inuyasha's actually got something in return (Although that could just be my bad memory :P), so that might be one reason why. It makes me wonder if you might eventually decide to have Kagome turn hanyou or youkai (I *really* hope this isn't the case...), or something.
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Reviewed By: shioo On: July 13, 2005 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just started reading your fanfiction and i think its awesome. i liked it so much that i started reading the first chappie at 10:36 pm and ihave been infront the computer reading all chapters till 3:39 am becouse i really get in the story... continue the nice work, i love your writing style and i will come back tomorrow to see if you up date the next chapter ^^, i want to know what happens next >.> *cof*exelent*cof*lemons x////x ...shio... (sorry if you dont understand my review, i dont know english perfectly, but well here you have a Mexican Fan ^^) Oh yeah i dont think they are OOC, i mean they are acting different because they revealed love for each other... but its my opinion.. dont let fuckin reviewers make you feell bad, i mean they dont even know what a fanfiction its about... it your story not theyre... byt well -___-U
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Reviewed By: shioo On: July 13, 2005 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just started reading your fanfiction and i think its awesome. i liked it so much that i started reading the first chappie at 10:36 pm and ihave been infront the computer reading all chapters till 3:39 am becouse i really get in the story... continue the nice work, i love your writing style and i will come back tomorrow to see if you up date the next chapter ^^, i want to know what happens next >.> *cof*exelent*cof*lemons x////x ...shio... (sorry if you dont understand my review, i dont know english perfectly, but well here you have a Mexican Fan ^^)
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Reviewed By: KittyKatFighter On: July 10, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY!!! P l e a s e, p l e a s e write more, it's a little OOC but that is okay with me!
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Title: Realization
Reviewed By: KireiChan* On: July 07, 2005 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! LOL Thankyou for e-mailing me at Kerochankawaii@msn.com for letting me know you updated! i just haven't had much time to get on the computer lately. but i have read chapters 15 through 24! they are ALL VERY well WRITTEN! your writing is VeRy GoOd you must update and e-mail once you do! inu/kag forever! KireiChan*
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