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Reviewed By: Emily Grace On: March 28, 2021 11:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely in my top 3 favourite fics ever! I really hope you are
going to continue writing the sequel “Chaos Theory.” Such good
writing!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: haine21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2012 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great one shot! One of the longest oneshots I've ever read, to be sure, but also one of the best! I liked how Inuyasha and Kagome stayed in character all throughout the story, and that a final sex scene was not forced at the end. That made the story realistic to me, since it stayed true to the fact that Kagome was thinking all about Inuyasha's needs all the while. I sincerely hope that you would continue this though, since there are still some loose ends to be tied for both of them. Here's to hoping for a sequel in the future! Cheers! |
Reviewed By: hootowl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2011 16:24 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i read this way back when you first posted and i can't remember if i ever left a review so... i thought i'd leave one now. i loved it. i still love it. i'm still holding out hope for a continuation. i keep thinking that if i check back often enough, something else will show up and i'll do a little dance and squeal like the little fangirl i can be. |
Title: Awesomeness Deserves a Sequel!
Reviewed By: Barachan22 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 12:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved this fic for a long time. I think it would be amazing if you wrote a sequel!
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Reviewed By: MinneMandy On: April 07, 2008 02:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Good story. I don't think it needs a sequel. It fairly stands on its own. What's dissapointing is that Kagome never found out that Inuyasha loves her. Well, it's fairly obvious, but not for her, I guess. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 12:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it. it was one of those fics that aren't completely sexual because it had an emotional half to it that made it more like a story. I would love a sequel. PLEASE!^_^
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 12:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply amazing story! You should write a sequel so all your readers can find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 23:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man..YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! lol. I really thought this was the best story I've read in a very long time - if not the best I've ever read! You portrayed Inuyasha's feeligs so well...made my heart cry out for the poor guy. Your lemon was deliciously wonderful, I need more!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: thecatzpajamas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 22:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cannot express to you exactly how much i want you to write a sequel. this was SOOO well written (and your quote at the end was PERFECT! XD). it's 12:40 am, and i can't sleep because i'm all excited from your story! i want them to hump like bunnies, dammit! PRONTO! also, i liked how you put the story into one long oneshot. you managed to have a steady flow of events while keeping the story interesting (and not overly-detailed) the entire way through. good job! (and i EXPECT a sequel!) keep your muse happy! -thecatzpajamas
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy On: February 22, 2007 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome story. You wrote their personalies perfectly. When I was done, I was disappointed that you didn't write any other stories. The specific details of every movement made me image that I was watching a movie in my mind. I so think of ways in my mind to get them to kiss, but I could never write it in words the way you so did like you created the characters yourself. PLEASE DO A SEQUEL. I'd like to read them get together again and consume their relationship completely and for Inuyasha to tell Kagome that he loves her. I will keep checking. You are a great writer. BRAVO! AND APPLAUSE!!
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:45 PST
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I love this story. You've really captured their personalities, and made a beautifully elaborate piece. Please please please please please do a sequel!!! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: February 22, 2007 15:12 PST
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I so need a sequel!!!!!! That was hot, I just wish they had sex. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to take cold shower.
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Title: one of the best oneshots I've ever read!!!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 14:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
super great story. I also liked the back story! I liked the fact that it wasn't just a lemon just for the sake of a lemon, but that it had a back story as well. I would really like to see more of the story addressing kagome's insecurities or maybe a longer fic. This was a well thought out story with good discription with ouver describing! way to go!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you! Putting all the other one-shots to shame. You definitely have some magic up your sleeves for mixing a whole torrent of emotions into a short piece and making it flippin' fantastic! I have to say that I loved the insecurities brought up in Inuyasha's life because it made the rest of the piece so much more emotionally rich. I think Kagome handled the situation beautifully. I'm sure many of us can relate to her self-consciousness and body image problems, but in the end it was wonderful how Inuyasha's naivete about everything healed her emotional distress. I also loved your ability to write in some much detail, his leg was this way, her hand was here, because I think that there is so much more to the human touch than simply going straight for the instant gratification. It was hard to see Kagome's emotional distress at the end, wondering if he would love her. I truly hope you do write a sequel to this and it would no doubt be just as great or better. Excellent writing, some of the best I've seen in a long time! ;) Three cheers!
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