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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:45 PST
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I love this story. You've really captured their personalities, and made a beautifully elaborate piece. Please please please please please do a sequel!!! PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: February 22, 2007 15:12 PST
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I so need a sequel!!!!!! That was hot, I just wish they had sex. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to take cold shower.
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Title: one of the best oneshots I've ever read!!!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 14:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
super great story. I also liked the back story! I liked the fact that it wasn't just a lemon just for the sake of a lemon, but that it had a back story as well. I would really like to see more of the story addressing kagome's insecurities or maybe a longer fic. This was a well thought out story with good discription with ouver describing! way to go!!!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you! Putting all the other one-shots to shame. You definitely have some magic up your sleeves for mixing a whole torrent of emotions into a short piece and making it flippin' fantastic! I have to say that I loved the insecurities brought up in Inuyasha's life because it made the rest of the piece so much more emotionally rich. I think Kagome handled the situation beautifully. I'm sure many of us can relate to her self-consciousness and body image problems, but in the end it was wonderful how Inuyasha's naivete about everything healed her emotional distress. I also loved your ability to write in some much detail, his leg was this way, her hand was here, because I think that there is so much more to the human touch than simply going straight for the instant gratification. It was hard to see Kagome's emotional distress at the end, wondering if he would love her. I truly hope you do write a sequel to this and it would no doubt be just as great or better. Excellent writing, some of the best I've seen in a long time! ;) Three cheers!
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. I just stumbled across this for the first time and I am so glad I did. You handled the sex both very realistically and very tastefully--something that in my short time reading Inuyasha fanfiction, I've discovered is very rare. And I love the fact that you saw that Kagome would have much more knowledge about sex than Inuyasha. I also loved the banter between the two, which really was both sexy, sweet, and hysterical to read. Great job, and please write more!
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. I just stumbled across this for the first time and I am so glad I did. You handled the sex both very realistically and very tastefully--something that in my short time reading Inuyasha fanfiction, I've discovered is very rare. And I love the fact that you saw that Kagome would have much more knowledge about sex than Inuyasha. I also loved the banter between the two, which really was both sexy, sweet, and hysterical to read. Great job, and please write more!
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 20:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you wrote this fic a long time ago, but I just read it for the first time and enjoyed it, so I thought I'd review. I've been reading a lot of IY fic lately, but most of it isn't really quality stuff. Despite the fact that this is a PWP, you managed to make it very touching (no pun intended) and true to the personalities and relationship of the characters. I think you did a great job, and I eagerly went to look to see if you'd written more stuff. I guess I'll have to be happy with this, which is more than enough. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write it for our enjoyment.
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Reviewed By: Rapsodie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 11:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and not just because it has sex involved in it. You've really captured both Inuyasha and Kagome's personality here, showing how much that Inuyasha is actually vulnerable. Kagome's the only one that can actually get to him and read him. I hope that you make a sequal to this and if you do I'll be reading and reviewing again.
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 13:48 PDT
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SEQUEL!!! plsplspls
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Reviewed By: fprincessmirei On: July 26, 2006 12:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequel please!
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Reviewed By: FUCKING GREAT!! On: April 08, 2006 17:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY!! please please please please....PLEASE TIMES A MILLION...make a sequel...i'm so waiting:):)
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: Piett600 On: March 12, 2006 02:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just wow. Your fic was visceral, sexy and true to the individuals within. It really doesn't get any better than this, and I've been reading and writing fanfiction for longer than I care to remember. I can only hope and pray that you find it in your heart to write a sequel. If not for your readers, then for Inuyasha and Kagome themselves. The poor things.
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Title: Question
Reviewed By: NordicaVB not signed in I guess On: February 28, 2006 19:37 PST
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At the end of your story you mention a sequel, is that still possible? I'm only curious because I really enjoyed your story and would like to see what happens next (especially since you write so well). I'm not pushing for a sequel, I just want to know if I should give up hope (since I'll admit that I occasionally check to see if you have posted anything new). If not, I would like to say thanks for such an enjoyable read!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 17:13 PDT
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....wow.... hun, that was beautiful!! :) hot and steamy but with just the right amount of love and affection. :) great job. and i DO want a sequel!!! please please please continue this! :)
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 14:37 PDT
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SOOOOOO GOOD!!! OMG....and I loved the ending! I hope you write a sequel....but if you don't, please write more....you're awesome! I loved how Inu was so innocent about the whole sex issue and didn't know anything, even with instincts. I loved it! Keep writing!!!
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