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Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 04:42 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2011-2/june-2011/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=98 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=98 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Title: Congrats!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2011 14:19 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. |
Title: Awesome story so far!!!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2011 01:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! This is REALLY good so far!....."sigh"......Kagome and Inuyasha misunderstand each other so much....He thinks she thinks he's a filthy hanyo but he forgets that Rin a mother to her is going to give birth to a hanyo so right there is stinkin thinkin. and kagome now thinks he only wanted her as a mate because of her being Sesshoumaru daughter again she never left sesshoumarus safety and was protected sheltered from the dangers of the world and also Naraku...again stinkin thinkin on her part as well. |
Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME STORY!!!I loved it so much!!!!please finish your other story!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2008 08:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story!! You have an amazing gift to write great stories! Deep and filled with everything to make you feel like you never want it to end because it's so good! I really admire the way you see life and it's intricacies. I look forward to read more of your stories!! Please continue to write and gift us with something new again!! Best wishes and much love: Midcat.
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Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: October 24, 2008 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your imagination knows no bounds! I really liked this story, especially the way that you ended it. Beautifully written! I'm just hoping that the other ones that you are writing will soon be finished, also. I'll be waiting to read them once they are complete.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 01:40 EDT
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Awwww...it took me 2 days to read it all but it was so worth it...I am a huge fan once again...XD...amazing story and great writing..it all flowed very well and I was constantly rushing to my cmputer whenever i got home to read it...and update soon on Demons Witin Us...i cant wait for that...and hope everything is going well with your family...best wishes
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart21 On: September 11, 2007 13:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! You did a great job of keeping me guessing and interested from start to end. I think you did a great job of keeping everyone in character which can be hard to do. I hope you will continue to write!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 07:10 EDT
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I cannot put into words how much i feel for this story. My God woman, do you realize how well you sum up life and existance in your stories? I cried when the Shikon no Tama was talking about existnace, I cried when Kagome was confused about what she was, I cried when They tried to express their feelings, I even cried from frustration when Inuyasha and Kagome would fight. This is truely a remarkable story. It's a life altering story as well. I feel changed, different, with new perspectives on life. DAMN, this story almost defines that never ending question, why are we here, our purpose in life. I know you like to dig up fossils and such, but have you ever thought of writing a story based on your views of everything spiritual? *wipes the drying tears from my face* Keep up the inspiring work, I look forward to all you create. ~Autumn
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My GOSH!!!! I felt so much heart break in Chapter 28 and 29. Oh man she knew she was gonna die and she did!!!!! 10's across the board for this story. I mean, your story made me cry, that's how good it was. Oh gosh you should definately change the names and all that jazz and then publish it. But anyway it was sooooooo good. I still can't believe it made me cry! Great job at creating this story. Marvolous, Wonderful!!!!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou very much for writing this story it was wonderful to read. I hope you never quit writing. This story was very original, it was nothing like any other story that I have read and the ending was a total shock. I really wasn't expecting any thing like what happened. I am very glad that I found you and your stories. Happy writing, Emily.
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 16:19 EDT
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I just finished reading this story start to finish! all I can say is WOW!! what a great story. I loved the thought that you put into it and I could feel all the emotions that you placed in it. I cried and Laughed and was even mad at sess. way to go what an amazing story! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:20 EDT
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i just started reading this fic. I love the thought of sess being kags dad!! chap 4 made me CRY!!!! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 18:21 EST
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Chapter 12: This is a cumulative review... kinda, since I am too lazy to review every single chapter. I was wondering about a few things. For example: Why does she have to choose between Sesshomarou and Inuyasha? Is there only one that is good? I really like how Kikyou is a 'good guy.' I always saw her as deluded, somehow. Like she believed what she did was right, even though it wasn't really. One thing I do not understand - Why is Midoriko such a "bad guy?" I guess I'll find out later...
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 04:16 EST
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Okay... so I stayed up til 3 am reading your story. It was fantastic! SO wonderful :o) I was freaking out thinking that you killed of Kagome. *whew* anyways, great job :o) I can't wait for the updates on your other fics!
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Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: November 29, 2006 22:39 EST
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OMGWTFBBQ! My eyes are all watery. That was SO good. I just spent my whole shift reading this one! Loved it.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 23, 2006 04:00 EDT
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okay now that i've reread this and spent the better part of an hour bawling i fear when you say a chapter coming up is angsty. i think it was safer for my sanity to discover this fic after it was complete. i don't think my sanity would have survived!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Brittani On: September 22, 2006 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you a 20 but seeing as how it wont let me... i guess that you get a 10. I have never read something that made me cry,laugh,get angry,and become closer to the characters. I adore this story so much that i spent 2 days locked up in my room reading over and over. I just thought I would let you know how much your stories have made me come to love InuYasha even more. Thank you again, Brittani
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 21:05 EDT
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awwwwwww so sweet...a lil deep and confuzing for me but oh well...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: lola bear On: June 25, 2006 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was honestly that best written story i have ever read in my life, and i read a lot. Everything was amazing, the plot, the story line, just even the way you worded things. When i was reading the story, i almost felt like i was one of the characters in the story, i could feel their emotions and see what they saw. Man, i dont think i have every cried, laughed, and felt so much love well reading a story before. For a while i thought that you were going to give the story a very sad ending, but in the end you fixed everything and it all turned out perfect. You honestly have a gift for writting. I cant believe how many times i skipped this story becuase it didnt have many reviews, how stupid i was lol. But anyways great job and keep up the amazing work. Bye
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Charlianneaeaea On: April 18, 2006 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap, That was one of the best fucs I ever read, youv mad skills
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Reviewed By: L On: April 09, 2006 18:30 EDT
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That was it? Hehe. Alright, you confused the hell out of me more than once in this story. But it was still a good story. If you do go back and revise, I would shorten those long-winded and confusing speeches at inappropriate times, like when they're in the middle of a battle, and clarify a bit when you're explaining about the Shikon. I can understand a celestial being talking in half-riddles cuz it's like secretive and mystical and stuff, but Sesshomaru explaining it and me still being confused made me feel retarded. And I'm not stupid. I've said confused like three times, well now four, in this short review. I guess I could replace a few with 'befuddled' or 'discombabulated' or something, but I'm too lazy. And I don't mean to discourage you form writing, because you really have good ideas and thoughts and stuff, it's just (and I totally understand this) when you have something figured out in your head and you can't put it into words and then it comes out all distorted so that you can hardly even recognize it and then you end up babbling (much like I'm doing now). It happens to all of us. This review has turned out so wrong. I don't blame you if you never want to read my stories or do and then leave a reallly mean review on it like 'you tell me all this crap and then you write that stinking pile?' Yeah. That would suck. Anyway, I'm gonna shut up now. You are a very creative writer and I'm still waiting for more Search for the Shikon which was what introduced me to Cannot Be Broken. Update that soon please? Sorry if this came out the wrong way and I made you mad or sad cuz I didn't mean to. Maybe I shouldn't even send this... No, I've just spent five minutes writing it, it's getting sent. I'll just go argue with myself for a little longer by myself. Yeah. See ya.
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Reviewed By: gentle_whispers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 21:39 EDT
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i spent all day yesterday reading this story! awesome! and i just LOVE the epilogue. love love love!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a beautiful story. reading this was such a pleasure! at times i did feel a bit lost, but coincidentally, one of the characters would be lost as well and i'd get a simpler explanation through that. i really got into this fic and was always excited to see updates. i'm so shocked when you say this is the first thing you've written. it's done with such attention to detail and the storyline is completely original. this will definitely be one of my all time fave fics. thanks again for writing it and i hope to see more from SFTS soon. that one seems like so much fun. i can't wait. take care!
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Reviewed By: koniko chan On: March 08, 2006 23:05 EST
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AWWWWWWWWWWW the ending was soooo cute! Very nice story. I love how you portrayed kagomes sprit throughout the story it was very nice to see. oh and the first meeting between kag and Inu has to be my favorite part of the story. ^^ anyways thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah. i have finally, somewhat, figured it out. you are a genius. did you know that? i am so ready for the next chap, i cannot contain myself. what will inu do? will he sacrifice himself for her. will kagome merge with naraku?? please update when you can. i seriously can't wait. *hugs your magnificent mind*
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Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 03:17 EST
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I just choked on my soda. WHAT?!!Kagome sacrificed herself and you just end it there? You need to hurry up. Did Sesshy get killed, because he was about to be and then you cut away. Cause he has the tesaiga and that can bring back all his peeps including Kagome. But if she comes back, will she still be the shikon? Oh, wait. Tensaiga can only bring back people. And most of his army was demons. Never mind. But he can still bring back Kagome. If he's still alive. You know what? Just update and take all the creative liberties you want with it, cause I want a happy ending and I don't care about the logistics.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing. the descriptiveness was perfect. it was like I was there watching it all happen. the pain she felt as she saw the people she loved be killed was so intense. you wrote the battle scenes so well. i could see naraku's evil smiles and ugh. i hate him. i can only hope that her self sacrifice will be enough to save inu. about everyone/everything else, i don't know what you have planned, but you always deliver. this chap was depressing and violent, however, i still enjoyed it immensely. it had to happen. i also liked the whole thing with kagome and the imps from hell. it reminded me of sess and how he can, well could, swipe them with his sword to heal. very nice. i hope to see what happens next soon. i'm hooked as always.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 18:08 EST
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I love this story, it's so well thought out and the descriptions and details, are amazing! Your an amazing writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter1 Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh. how can i stand it?! i feel inuyasha's pain way too vivdly. and kagome's as well. i hope it's not their last kiss. naraku cannot win. : ( your descriptiveness is incredibly realistic. i have a special place in my heart for this fic. i am eager to see what happens in the next chap like you wouldn't believe! i hope life is treating you well and would like to wish you a happy new year... even tho i'm a bit late. ^.^ thanks for the update.
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