| "Cannot Be Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading the first few chaps and i had to pull myself away to review. i didn't want to wait until the last posted chap. this fic is so good! i haven't found any spelling or grammar errors as of yet, and to me, that is pretty important to the flow of a story. this is probably one of the most original storlines i have ever ran across. i am eager to get back and read the remainder of it. it seems as though you update often, so i'll be looking forward to those new chaps as well. keep up the good work. your story rox.;)
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 On: June 06, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally love it. Please update.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 06, 2005 03:56 EDT
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Wow, now that was hot. That was really good. The end was kind of ominous, is that more plot? This chapter was really emotional, it was written excellently. I love your style, I really think your talented. Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: demonlore On: June 04, 2005 23:12 EDT
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Oh Miroku when is he not being such a pervert. HMMM I wonder what Inuyasha will do once he discovers Kagome missing.
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Reviewed By: twinkiepie On: June 04, 2005 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just knew Kagome would climb out the window, although I am surprised it took her a while before deciding to rebel.
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Reviewed By: SNST BLVD On: June 04, 2005 22:09 EDT
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Ha Ha Ha that was just to funny!! I love Miroku, bless his hentai ass! ;)
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 04, 2005 02:35 EDT
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Great chapter! I just love how you write Kagome, I was really laughing by the end there. And good ol' Miroku. You write him wonderfully, too. Loved this chapter, a very fun read. I hope you continue to update, I look forward to them!
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Reviewed By: gemstone456 On: June 02, 2005 01:16 EDT
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Damn, so close! Why did Sango have to interrupt them!
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Reviewed By: journey's end On: June 02, 2005 00:45 EDT
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Wow, that was a very hot scene! Woohoo boy I cannot wait for the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh humina humina! You a master of sexual tension. I just found this story today and read through it all and I LOVE IT!! I hope you're having as much fun writing this story as we are reading it.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 01, 2005 03:00 EDT
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Awesome. You just have to love desperate hanyus...Wonderfully done, your story just completely draws me it. Its very compelling. I like your style, and you have excellent grammer :). I'm glad you plan to finish the story, I would be heart-broken if you didnt! I hope you continue to write and post!
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Reviewed By: elvishears On: June 01, 2005 01:40 EDT
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So Kagome is seeing people's auras? How interesting.
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Reviewed By: EAP again On: May 31, 2005 07:45 EDT
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Sorry to double review, but I cut/pasted the part about Sueric from another reveiw on accident, my apologies. I still think its an awesome story though :). Again, you're a good writer. Sorry again for being a lame-brain.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: May 31, 2005 07:34 EDT
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I foound you through Sueric's site, and I'm so happy I did! I'm really liking this story, I think your an excellent writer, and you thought up great plot. I think my favorite part so far was the chase over the red clovers (not to mention the 2 kisses...Humminah humminah). I hope you keep writing and posting, I look forward to more chapters!
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Reviewed By: EMERALD STONE On: May 27, 2005 00:44 EDT
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So what did happen to Kagome when she blacked out? And what is the deal with Midoriko? I am interested to find out more about this situation.
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