| "Cannot Be Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dave Man [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 13:34 EDT
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Yeah, great story. Keep updating!
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Reviewed By: tinytot On: May 18, 2005 01:25 EDT
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Cool story, and I agree with miko's death, it looks like Kagome doesn't need the sit spell to get Inuyasha to submit to her. I guess we all know who the alpha leader is in this pairing.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 18, 2005 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty funny story. I can totally see Kagome jumping out of the window to avoid math class.
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Reviewed By: miko's death On: May 18, 2005 01:09 EDT
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Hey are you going to incorporate the prayer beads that have the sit incantation? Although it doesn't look like she really needs one. Ha even without the rosary she can still make Inu sit.
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Reviewed By: trainwreck On: May 18, 2005 00:15 EDT
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Oh no what's happening to Kagome! I cannot wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: fembot On: May 17, 2005 14:18 EDT
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I've never seen this kind of twist before. Kagome as Seshomaru's daughter? Nice touch. Can't wait to see what'll happen.
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Reviewed By: NightstarAngel On: May 17, 2005 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! I can't wait for you to update soon. Don't stop writting you are very good. I'm recomending you to my friends. Hope to see you soon. ;>
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Reviewed By: lazy tomato On: May 17, 2005 02:48 EDT
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I hope you know my friend forced me to read this.... and I have to say I enjoyed it immensely.I am curious about something though? Are Miroku and Sango going to appear in this story?
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Reviewed By: tortellini loaf On: May 17, 2005 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I have to admit it,I am glad my roomate forced me to read this fic. Amidst final exams, this story was able to cheer me up and forget about studying for a few minutes.I cannot wait for the next installment. I'll be sure to tell others about this story.
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Reviewed By: fallen_anchor On: May 16, 2005 03:27 EDT
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I love how you made Kagome an independant person. It's nice to see a fan-fiction that doesn't portray her as a weak girl. I can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: frostyshake On: May 15, 2005 23:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Oh my god that was priceless! Kagome hitting him with a rock, ha ha ha. You are definately a great author.
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Reviewed By: tornadotrail On: May 15, 2005 03:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a great story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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