| "Cannot Be Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Tcutie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 00:17 EST
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Please make more chapters!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 14:33 EST
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WOW, that's a spectacular story! Very original and interesting. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 15:13 EST
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This story is awesome!!!! Im soooo impressed with ur creaticity....and u dont even have that many spelling mistakes!!!:D:D:D U have NO idea how much that annoys me.....bad spelling....Keep Writing and Write Fast/Alot.............Cheers
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic!! I'm glad I found it. This story is amazing and so rich in description. I just love that. I can't wait for Kagome and Inuyasha to have some time together without interruptions. This cliff was very evil, I can't wait to read next chapter. So you better post it soon eh! You are very talented, I even cried in a chapter..
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea! how wonderful to see that you have updated! love, of course. the purest thing. awww. all of the sparring was frikkin' great. you're so good at writing those scenes! i get so into this fic it is sad. ^_^ i wonder what sessh will have to say. will naraku be making an appearance in the near future? please update soon now that you have teased me with a new chap. *gets on knees and begs* oh man, how i love those miroku and sango moments! will he ever learn? ; )
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so inu just brings out the best in kag, huh. especially her powers. does that mean if something bad happens to inu, then her powers might be thwarted or taken away? hmmm. i luv this fic. wish i could have r/r earlier, but EVERYTHING has gotten in the way. sorry. i am so looking forward to a new chap. p.s. i miss seeing new posts for SFTS. i love that story too.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: August 12, 2005 02:31 EDT
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Awwww. Such a good chapter, I was cracking up during the beginning, very very funny. And you were, again, very clear on explaining things; we all had it backwards...interesting. I particularly liked Miroku in this chapter, he's just so...grabby *snerk*. I await your next update!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 22:31 EDT
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Well, that was a lot to digest in one go. I think I may reread it later. Well, it's good that Kagome and Inuyasha are still on speaking terms. I think the next chapter and the duo's response to the love comment.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am greatly enjoying this piece of fiction. You have done a good job of adding the elements of the original IY story to a new one of your own. It is intrigueing and makes me want to read more. One problem though. I think if you have anyone else interrupt IY and Kag I won't be able to read any more of your fiction. Why? Because my family will have officially sent me to the funny-farm. Nothing like a grown woman screaming at the computer,stomping into the kitchen, cursing to make InuYasha blush, and then stomping back to the computer to read the next chapter. But really. Really good fic. I look forward to reading more of it. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: inu-kag15(nsi) On: August 07, 2005 02:08 EDT
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Hi, love the story so far, but I have a question...is it Kirara or Kilala. I know this isn't specific to your story and I'm sorry, but I need to know, LoL. You don't have to answer...
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Reviewed By: Allis0n On: July 31, 2005 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story. its plot is so complicated, yet so simple, and i love how it all comes together. keep being your brilliant self
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Reviewed By: rav3n On: July 31, 2005 01:17 EDT
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interesting story. hope to see another chapter from you soon!
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 29, 2005 03:42 EDT
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Loed the ending! A little comic releif is a good thing. And Sango and Miroku are spies! That was interesting, a nice little twist. And Kagome can stop time and space...w-freakin-ow. Cool. I really want to read more, I hope you can update again soon!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i didn't know kag could do that! phenomenal miasmic powers. sugoi. :) i just know that your battle scenes with naraku are gonna be great. i just can't get enough of this fic. man, i had no idea it was sango and miro that were the spies. i kinda feel kags pain of betrayal on that one. good job! please post a new chap. soon. *chokes and coughs* must-have-new-updates-to-live! ;)
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Reviewed By: Happy-ness-ss On: July 27, 2005 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is so beautiful!
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