| "A Changed Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 20:44 CDT
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Excellent chapter! I think that Sango should be the one to kill Inuyasha and then Kikyo saves him or something. Thanks for the quick update! If you have time, please check out my story.
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Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 20:29 CDT
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LONG LIVE HIEI AND KAGOME! may they bare many children and prosper. lol. i really love your hiei - he's not a pansy, like he usually turns out when a romantic fic centered on him is written, rather he is painfully befuddled on how he feels. i like how you show that he is not just a killing machine or a hopelessly lost child... but both. and i like how kagome brings that out in him... it's delicious. he's unaware to the point of anger of what he could feel for anyone, especially kagome. your hiei is on the path to telling yukina that he's her brother... and wow... i wrote a lot about how i appreciate your hiei. really i just wanted to tell you i love your fic and to update soon. ::shrugs:: cest la vi.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:45 CDT
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moore you have got to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMFG.
Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as it says in the title - OMFG! this fic is AWESOME! jesus christ, please update ... i can scarcely type from the greatness of it. ...seriuoously. lol. please plepasep lpeae. HIEI + KAGOME = WONDERFUL.
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Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 17:29 CDT
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pleas make this yoko kagome by update love it
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is wow. this is such a good story. i can't wait for you to write more!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn,I don't know what to say.... But... Damn I guess I want to see what happens next... Its dark But I liked how you wrote it I hope they kick Inu's ass
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 11:33 CDT
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OMG poor Kag thank god that Hiei and the others got there in time and i cant wait to see what happends to Kag and what happends to Inu so you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 07:07 CDT
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I really love this fic...I also loved the dark twist, you don't see many fics with that. They usually have Inuyasha beaten righyt thenand there, without turning him into the antagonist. What you did was beautiful. I'd like to see a love triangle between Hiei, Kurama (both sides), and Kagome, please? I'm gonna do one like that soon.
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Reviewed By: xmarix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man... this is a REALLY good story! I demand you update ASAP...
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 07:21 CDT
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Yay! Excellent chappie, very good! More soon please! And, is this a love triangle fic?
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Title: Review Chapter Eight
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. I'm very glad that you updated. I think it's slightly confusing how you kept jumping back in time to show Kurama's perspective of events. If you ever edit this, why don't you take all the Kurama POV stuff that relates to things that happened in chapter seven, and put that at the beginning. Then, that way, you can go back and forth between the kitchen scene and Kuama's POV things that are happenning at the same time. It would be a lot less confusing. ............ Not that I wasn't able to grasp what was going on, but it got in the way of my enjoyment of your story. I like what you've had happen here so far, and I'm wondering how you'll handle the romantic triangle between Hiei, Kagome and Kurama. If it's a threesome, I think it could work out for the best for all parties involved. If it's not a threesome, then please, oh please, go with a Hiei/Kagome pairing. Also, please draw out the confrontation with Inuyasha as much as possible. Also, don't skimp and just say that Kagome told them all about herself and her jouney. I don't think that she'd be that careless. Afterwards, she could eventually let Hiei into her mind, but I think she'd have to explain about Tsubaki and get over that fear first. Kagome does not have the best of luck concerning her mental privacy. ... ... ... ... Anyway, I look forward to reading much more, so keep up the good work. >>>>Luck! Kin-chan Pandun.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell Who wouldn't want to touch Hei *He is just a character* *Girl Shaking her head* Please update soon I want to be kag... *S* Just Kidding.
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! another chappie!!! keep writing! I can't wait for them to meet Inu Yasha! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 18:14 CDT
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wow so good plz update*kinda speechless sry*
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