| "A Changed Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Title: I have come from AFF to haunt you!
Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 23:09 CDT
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It's about time I finally get to read a new chapter. ^^ Or is it two? Oh, how dead my brain is right now! *pout* At any rate, I'm here and registered. I'll start keeping a close watch on you for updates, dearie.
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: hiei_kagome_youko_yusuke_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update very soon ok Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: forevrxazn On: April 14, 2006 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont reely care for grammar or spelling unless i cant reely understand the story and im not sure what style of riting meens The originality is great and i loved the story! i love how all those guys love the same grl!(thats just how i am...i love these type of love problems) haha nyways keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very organized in the way your write, and I like that!! I REALLY liked how you...er, how can I say it? OH! Developed the story! I'm getting all hyper and excited because this is going to be more a less like the orginal Naraku problem, ne? Well... except that the 'new' one is stronger! He ate chocolate, I'm sure... Anyway! The point is that I LOVE this story and really ReAlLy REALLY want you to continue! Update soon onegai! Ja ne =3
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Reviewed By: miko-lee On: March 06, 2006 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great!! update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache(1987) On: March 01, 2006 20:03 CST
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for updating, I really LOVE this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ryu Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:17 CST
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OMG!!!!! PLOT TWIST! i gotta hand it to ya, never have i read someone transforming shippo like that. kudos! you are a talented writer, and i admire your work. keep up the good work, and i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 01, 2006 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story and hope that you will continue to write. Please write soon. I really want to know what happens next. I hope that the pairing will be youko/hiei/kag/sess. That will be really fun.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 04:52 CST
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I love the story!!! I really hope it Hiei/Kurama/Kagome/Sesshomaru I think it would be perfect for this fic! Love how Shippo transformed too! I LOVE IT!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: gcdv(nli) On: February 25, 2006 17:10 CST
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bout time!lol, sike na, gud 1!
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Reviewed By: w1ckedhart@aol.com On: February 25, 2006 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what in the SEVEN HELLS!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!??!??!?!?!??!!??!?!?!?!?!?[ aifushuidghufybfijdhfiudHSFIUhdfINHdk assmfkmlkfjosifdjiujfoisjnf'[ kfdaiugvhreuithiurwahtguiefohg8yuhfgiuhZSODYUFHsdFbhjdsfjhbdshk bfshdhfshkfsu hsufdkuhkfsouosoujq3rg76 t236 ARGH! i can't even type correctly - my typing skilsa are fleeing and i hope yto78 can read this messafe because i am too excited to care and WOW! sesshy loves kagome (i only called him that bc for the lifke of me i won't ve able to type his name correctly) and shippou is grown up so suddnely! EXCIIIIIIIIIITEMEEEEEEEENT!!!!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY XD Shippo is so awesome. I love it plz update asap. Oh and I hope you make it a Hiei/Youko/Sess/Kag pairing ^^U Weird I know but it's so awesome =p
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Title: chap 18
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 00:11 CST
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this story just captures my attention more and more each chapter i read. please update soon
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Title: Chapter Eighteen
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 00:03 CST
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Yes, it seems she will have nightmares for a very long time. I feel the need to ask, are you planning on adding Sesshoumaru to the pairing? I'm... mixed on that idea if you are but of course it is your fic. A large part of my hesitation on it is the extreme possiessiveness of all three demons. Hiei might be willing to share a mate with Kurama but I believe it would only be because of their history together. The same would apply to Youko concerning Hiei. Sesshoumaru though is a complete wild card and no matter how I look at it I can't see him being willing to share. He just seems... far to possessive to even consider such a thing. Perhaps it's just me. I could be wrong, just my perspective. I'm sure whatever you wish to do with it will work out fine though. Shippo's transformation was a nice surprise, completely unexpected. Who better than to take vengaence then a son on behalf of his mother. You are an excellent writer and I am glad to see that you're working on this fic once more. I look forward to reading more of this story and I hope you continue to update.
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Title: Chapter Seventeen
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:52 CST
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Sango is definitely a good choice to help Kagome get over the issues she has with her scars. Kami knows that the exterminator has enough of them on her own. Somehow I don't see Hiei nor Youko looking at the scars Kagome carries with distain, it's a testimate of what she has lived through and overcome. Eventually she'll come to accept that as well but I think those two will need to remind her of that freqnuently so she will begin to believe it.
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