| "A Changed Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Title: Chapter Sixteen
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:47 CST
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Good chapter. Not having extensive knowledge of the IY series I have to wonder is Sesshoumaru really so powerful? Youko is by no means a pushover and for Sesshoumaru's aura to outshine the kitsunes has to be something to behold. Of course it makes me go back to the age old question of who would win in a fight between the two of them. I just can't see Youko being overpowered by another demon. Of course, at the end of the series Kurama had to be stupid and forsake that side of him to live as a human but we won't get into that ;)
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Title: Chapter Fifteen
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:39 CST
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Something that Youko is going to have to realize and accept is that Kagome has the final decision on who she wants to be with, Youkai law be damned. I think it will be a stretch for her to accept anyone other than Hiei at this point and if Youko tries to force his intensions in there she will feel the discord occuring between him and Hiei and that will only make her regress back to where they are trying to work her away from. Inuyasha has certainly done a number on her, he'd be doing well to remember that. Good job.
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Title: Chapter Fourteen
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:33 CST
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Good job on looking into Hiei's very of mating. I believe there would have to be an exceptional bond between him and any other person, male or female in order for him to even begin to consider such a thing. For him to be looking at Kagome in that fashion definitely points to a solid foundation of emotions he has for her. His need to be near her will only help strengthen that I believe.
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Title: Chapter Thirteen
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:25 CST
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Sesshoumaru is going to be one very unhappy Taiyoukai. Especially if Rin and Kagome have become as close as it seems. I would think Sesshoumaru is going to have to shield the girl from what exactly happened to the Miko. He wouldn't want her view of the world tainted by what could have happened, especially since it was his half brother that did so.
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Title: Chapter Twelve
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:19 CST
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Nice touch on having Hiei use the Jagan to block the memories from her, though he might have wanted to allow them to resurface a bit more slowly. It probably would have been a bit easier for her to take instead of all at once. Its going to take a very long time for her to become accustomed to allowing anyone to touch her now I think, except perhaps Hiei since she has such a strong connection to him now through what has occured. Even if she was asleep, she would still feel his presence soothing her the entire time.
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Title: Chapter Eleven
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:13 CST
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Well that confrontation went better than it could have. After Shippo's breakdown I was concerned that Sango and Miroku would attack first and ask questions later. Inuyasha is going to have people lined up all wanting to take his head by the time this is finished.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:06 CST
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As I read this I'm slightly surprised that Hiei would tell them to leave Inuyasha alive. Though he doesn't exactly know of her tendency to forgive any indescretion shown to her. If it were Yukina on the other hand that this had happened to, Inuyasha would have been butchered on the spot no matter if she had pleaded for his life to be spared. Still, its good to see that Hiei is considering what her feelings on the matter would be, though I have to believe even if Kagome were to have said let him live I am sure one of the boys would have made certain that Inuyasha met up with some sort of accident in the future. Good chapter, nicely done on painting the picture. I could actually see the way the blood spattered upon the ground as he ripped his claws into her.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 23:00 CST
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And the true nature of the idiot surfaces. Why must he insist that he can have them both? I think one of the last episodes I watched Inuyasha actually asked Miroku if he could have two women and Kagome heard him. The idiot. And then to try provoking Hiei, surely he can feel the power levels coming off of the hiyoukai. If he can't then his senses are dead. I just know his stupidity is going to manifest in even greater levels now.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:50 CST
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Inuyasha isn't going to like this one bit. Not one bit at all. It seems that Youko needs to calm down a bit, he's beginning to remind me of Shippo on a sugar high. Perhaps some valium for him so Hiei and Kagome can have some time to themselves without worrying about him interrupting them. Then again, a two by four for Inuyasha's head is in order as well. And you have a point about Kouga, his constant proclaimations of love and devotion for Kagome are so... so.. blatantly false, it amazes me that Kagome hasn't beaten him about the head until he wisened up.
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Title: Chapter Seven
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:43 CST
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Now thats typical of Yusuke and Kuwabara, fighting where they have no business doing so. They are lucky Kagome didn't throw them outside to settle their differences. I cannot imagine how the two of them could be so disrespectful, but then this is those two we are talking about. Luckily she was able to do something about Hiei's temper before it got out of control. It's nice to see they are connecting.
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Title: Chapter Six
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:37 CST
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Well, there you have it. Hiei's equivilant of knocking. It's a good thing that Kagome has some control over her energy, otherwise she might have purified him without wanting to with that little display of his. It's good to see that Koenma has been watching her. It seems unrealistic to me in so many other fics that he wouldn't have noticed her as soon as she began actively using her powers. He might be dense but he's not that dense. Good chapter, my only issue is Kuwabara's proposition to Kagome. Once he meets Yukina in the series he never looks toward another woman or asks her out. Good job otherwise.
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Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:30 CST
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I have to ask where in the timeline for YYH this story is set. Is it after the Makai tournement? How old is Kurama at this point and will he be leaving home soon. If I remember correctly, this is either a Hiei/Kag or a Hiei/Kag/Kurama and it leaves me to wonder that if Kurama is going to be a part of the pairing how his family is going to react to him dating/getting engaged/married (Whichever) if he is still so young. Or he could already be out of school and just staying with his mother for other reasons and she won't care when Kagome gets introduced? Either way it was just something I was wondering. I can't wait to see how Shiori reacts to Kagome whenever they get around to meeting.
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Title: Chapter Four
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:24 CST
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I have to thank you for the way you write Hiei. Most of the fics out there are so horrible, they make him out to be some sort of caveman wannabe. You know the type, where he can't read, write or speak besides the occasional "hn". He has no working knowledge of any of the modern technologies of the human world, never mind that they have cities in the Makai that could rival anything in the Ningenkai. Stories like that irritate me and it makes me want to shoot the author. You're doing a good job with him.
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:18 CST
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There are times I think that Hiei has enough curiosity that he should have been born a kitsune. Then again, I say the same thing about Kagome with her playfulness as demonstrated by her little test of the boys. Nice work.
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Title: Chapter Two
Reviewed By: Fallen Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 22:11 CST
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I'm glad to see that you had the guys knowing exactly what a miko is instead of the same tired old line of "whats a miko?" that you see in so many other fics. Miko's are still very much a part of japanese religon even if they don't have the same sort of power that Kagome carries. I like her playful side in this.
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