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Reviewed By: Yuuyu On: March 06, 2010 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Digging through vaults of "old" fanfiction can crop up diamonds. I really enjoyed this. First I tried at guessing what Nabiki needed the money for, but I really couldn't have expected that! You also managed to open my eyes to the likeness of several characters, none of them are OOC, really, and that's a very sobering thought. Well, it's also a kick in the shin of Takahashi. I just have one thing flowing through my head at the moment, what would the next meeting between the sisters be like? "I know about what happened, thank you."? Anyway, great work.
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Reviewed By: Riverburn On: July 05, 2008 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is simply amazing. Somehow, you've kept everyone character, but took a comlete different spin on it. I'm still dazzled by the strange mental ways I have to take to make this story work, and it works (though does this means Kasumi stays young, as does her father?). I've taken the liberty of giving you a 10 on originality, because it simply is unlike anything I've read before (safe for that one fic "happily maried"). I'm going to spread your fanfic a bit if you don't mind :). Cheers
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Reviewed By: dogbertcarroll [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Excellent work. It was surprising and enjoyable. I especially liked how Nabiki just walked out rather then learn the reason behind everything, as it really wasn't important to her anyway.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 10:21 CST
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THat was a pretty neat story. Thanks for the repost so us older readers could get a look. As a plus, Ryoga now DOES make sense, as does Akane. Still, this had to be a strange mental exercise to make it work. *shrugs* Oh well. Anyway, thanks for the story. *Morphs head into Samus's helmet* See you next game.
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Reviewed By: call me tomo On: May 30, 2006 01:12 CDT
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so she's gay? and does rannma still exost or is it just... poof? ... time paradoxes... makes me think if that would replay over and over *sigh* very good anywho...
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Title: Jolly good!
Reviewed By: lilkitsu On: September 16, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, while I would really like closure with ryoga, you really 'weaved' a good yarn. Reminds me of a book, "gates of anubis", or something like that. Anyway, excellent story, I wish there was a bit more to it. And would expecially like to see a sequal, if that could be done.
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Reviewed By: dana_san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting and mysterious - bizarre! Neat concept, neat conclusion - unexpected actually. I guess Ryoga was too clueless to be given a choice, which surprised me pleasantly.
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Reviewed By: BallPoint On: September 04, 2005 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate reading mystery stories, so I just skipped to the end (read chapter 1 and 8). Still, I enjoyed your story and I'm looking forward to reading your next work.
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the interesting read. I really enjoyed this story and hope that you do decide to write a sequel. I hated to see it end, but as endings go, this one was pretty good. Til next time.
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Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool! I can't wait to see more.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Hurricane_tiger@hotmail.com On: August 04, 2005 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JEEEZ! So that means nabiki never existed? Then what was his basis for picking her? I understand ....I think. But its just sad if theres no Nabiki. Maybe Ranma And Nabiki will be seperated by the antidote. And Nabiki will say "I felt this would help you understand me." Its awesome. I get it. But I dont like Nabiki not being real.
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Title: Okay. That was tricky.
Reviewed By: jesdynf On: July 27, 2005 20:19 CDT
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I rarely see tricky temporal loops explained so concisely. You've done very well.
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Reviewed By: anonim1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good plot, good writing style, no errors, no stupid logic, no bashing, no OOC,etc. Very good.I hope for more stories from you.
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Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, in the beginning I really didn't know what to say. But this last chapter (I do hope it's not THE last one for this story) explained everything. THe idea is brilliant and so is the realisation. I like twists like this... The only question now is ... what will happen when Ranma/Nabiki return to his true form... what of Nabiki? Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:37 CDT
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This is fairly good, and has a definate sense of plot. You do seem to know where you are going with this story, which is always good. Your writing style is reader-pleasing, which is also plus. However, what you might want to do now is flesh it out more. Perhaps show more of what is going on that just what relates to Nabiki. It will give the reader a bigger picture to look at.
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