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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 06:42 CDT
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Sex! Ok did Omi and Ken get it on yet? When is Aya going to wack up? Love the story it's pretty intresting mental issues always are. update soon.
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Reviewed By: layla-xd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yuuuuuuui finally, finally they both got it right and slept together! *grins like a maniac* Of course the lemon is not the only reason why I enjoyed this chapter so much, but it definitely was a bonus. It´s just so great to finally have them together. At least in a physical way. But this was a huge step for both, epecially after Aya said that he wanted to repeat it, too... Yay! Oh, but to me the best scene was in the hot springs. Aya´s being invitive, touching Yohji and all, and all the time this strange blonde is there, too... He kinda scared me. I mean, italian rap?! I know Italian pop music (which is quite bad in my opinion), Italian opera and Italian Gothic/Metal music (which is pretty good^^), but I´ve never heard of italian rap... did you have a special group or artist in mind when you wrote this? Or did you just come up with something probably very unusual? Anyways, Yohji was so sweet in this chapter... he was so hesitant (he just could´nt believe this really happened, could he?^^) and kept Aya asking... Made me want to hug him. And it´s also great that Aya told Yohji of his sister. Not the whole story, but at least he _did_ tell him. Maybe more will follow, who knows... So, I really really enjoyed this chapter, I´m looking forward to the next one! You´re such an awesome writer, keep it up!
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this so much. You have captured these guys to a T. Thoroughly amazing writing. Great story.
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Title: This Is Not My Life #25
Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: June 30, 2009 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 25 was awesome! Finally, finally they get down to a point of intimacy that neither is having forced on him. I've followed this story from the beginning and I so admire the author's patience, which of course was very frustrating to me. But getting them there and in the right head space was a feat. I don't think it could have been written better by anyone else. Yohji's cynicism/sarcasm may have been brought out by anyone in his past but only Aya could fill that deep hole in him and renew his self-confidence. "You were the one I was looking for", indeed. For all their lives, these two have been each other's answer. This story rocks, Sky Rat. Hope there's more to come, but this chapter was just perfect if it's the last one. Thanks for sharing your vision of my favourite pairing. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the lemon.
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I love this story and the POV of each character. Your writing is superb, thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing your genius with us. Trudy
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Title: This is not my life chpt 23
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: February 20, 2009 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and your ability to capture the Weiss guys so perfectly. Very well written and so enjoyable. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: February 19, 2009 22:48 CST
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Poor yohji! I hope Aya comes back before Yohji does something stupid.
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Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: February 19, 2009 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First Aya comes to terms with his attraction for Yohji, but still needs Aya-chan's input. Then Yohji thinks Aya's gone for good. This is so frustrating and confusing. I wish they could just meet in the middle and get on with it. They are both so messed up, there's no way for them to be saved except by each other. Sky-Rat, your writing is excellent. You are a great storyteller and I love this story, but I am going crazy waiting for a meeting of the minds and hearts these two men have. I think they need each other, whether they stay with Weiss or not.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 31, 2008 18:09 CDT
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another great chapter! loved Aya's self-discovery.
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The decent into profanity by Aya is very logical. As he reasons out his feelings so unwillingly it is very real that he might lose control enough to start swearing. I absolutely LOVE the way you write the Weiss boys, it is so logical and real, each POV is the true tone of thinking that I would imagine each kitten engages in. So darn well done. Thank you for that it is a great piece fo writing. tutyfrty
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Title: This is not my life
Reviewed By: tutyfrty On: October 26, 2008 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful gift from the author. The POV of each of the Weiss' Kittens is so on the mark. A very enjoyable story, I just hope that Yohji and Aya find that they are good for each other and find some peace of mind.
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: October 26, 2008 00:05 CDT
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was having an frustratingly awful end to an otherwise pretty good day and prayed for just one, brief, decent weiss story to calm me down so I could sleep, and the first place I looked I found your new chapter. thank you--I needed that. love the bits of honesty about their pasts coming out here.
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Reviewed By: BLG On: October 18, 2008 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoy this fic immensely. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Glinwulf On: October 18, 2008 00:52 CDT
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Yay! Another chapter! I really enjoy this fic, though I'm eager to get back to Yohji and Aya. I'm glad Omi and Ken have finally gotten their signals straight. (Or is that NOT straight?)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 11:34 CDT
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poor ken, denial!
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