| "All by myself" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fanilia On: January 04, 2002 08:10 EST
Comment/Review:
Told you I'd be back. What I said in the post and more. Both POV were very well written to give me the sense of the emotions of both. I liked the ceiling vs what the same old bed would have been. It did added a sense of danger to the scene. I will read some of the other fictions you have written since I like the style of this one. |
Reviewed By: D-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most intelligently written, yet dramatic fics that I have ever read. The two POVs provide a perfect foil and keep the reader at the edge of their toes and full of emotion.
BRAVO!
~D-chan
Email: AlloraColleen@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Isshi ( ransurotto@hotmail.com ) On: January 02, 2002 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!! You did it again Ember!! ^_^ You have to write more!! You can't leave us at that!! *Grins*
Keep up the great work! *^_^* [Your still a genius writter!] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 26, 2001 18:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was absolutely awesome. You made me feel like I was experiencing everything that they were going thru. Absolute genius. I think I reviewed the first chapter on FFN, but I'm not sure (too much turkey), and I'm too damn lazy to go looking for it right now. Anyway, great stuff, like everything else you've done. Keep on writing. Peace |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 14:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sad, but well written! I felt her saddness and pain as I read the flashback. You did a fantastic job on this, pat yourself on the back! And please do email when you update! (gokusgirl_2000@yahoo.com) |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 08:04 EST
Comment/Review:
wow! that was good! :) keep it up! vegeta was SO in character it broke my heart |
Reviewed By: bballin On: December 14, 2001 20:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geez, what's up vegeta's ass? this is very realistic to the dbz world. i love it!! keep it going!! |
Reviewed By: me On: December 14, 2001 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, you know what? i want more...excellent!!! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2001 23:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i especially liked all the hentai parts. it was very entertaining...i wish i could think of parts like that...by the way who's song was that?
Either i missed it or u didn't mention it. Hope to see da next chapter!!
Email: majinsk8rvegeta@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: connie On: December 11, 2001 22:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww, this is soo sad, i can't believe vegeta said that to bulma at the end, and then he threw her clothes at her and told her to leave. that's him definitely, the characters aren't ooc which is something i really like, and you portray them very realistically. hmm, now i'm wondering, if you'll explain his thinking in the next chapter. Surely he didn't mean to hurt her. and is he coming back? well anyway great job. hurry with the next chapter! |
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