| "All by myself" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2011 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, those are some harsh words spoken by vegeta. It made me sad reading it. Love this fic. |
Reviewed By: aliccolo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written. I am just in awe of your talent, your writing is just so amazing. Thank you for giving us readers this wonderful gift.
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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! I know this story has been finished for some years now, but I just discovered it. I have to say I'd been reading some of your stuff lately, but this is my favorite so far. I think you did a wonderful work with the POV's, and the one about Mirai Trunks was a very nice addition. But mainly, I think you did a very accurate Vegeta, so passionate inside but cold and cruel in his actions, haunted by the fact of realizing his attraction towards a life so different to everything he has known. And it fits in the story. Emotional, but keeping the characters. Great.
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Title: Best fic I've read in a LONG time!
Reviewed By: raccly er 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm reviewing in this chap, for all of the chaps in this fic. First off, I loved this fic! I love how its so in character, mysterious,gets you thinking,the suspence, ( the lemons)action, drama, EVERYTHING! Though, I can edmit that at points of the fic, I hade truble understanding what was going on, cuz of how it was writen in...ritals I guess you could say.lol. But other then that, Your a really great writer! i'd love ta read more of your work! ~raccly er 17
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Reviewed By: BogusRed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 08:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Ember, I really enjoyed this fic. I'm glad you didn't just leave it at two chapters. Thank you for sharing your talents with us. I'll be off now to read more :D
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy On: November 15, 2004 07:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story i've read soo many vegeta and bulma get togethers that i get bored of the cliche. However i chanced upon your version and decided to give it a try. It was amazing the insight you gave into vegetas thoughts and feelings were so believable i found my mind being transported to the anime version of DBZ. For instance when you described the moment after cell was defeated i recieved an image of vegeta hanging distraught in the air after the rest of the Z fighters have gone to the lookout. You shed light on the miriad of emotions he must have felt at that moment. A brilliant story Venus
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 23:13 EST
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ooh, I'm all vehclemped! *snif* it's just chock full of bittersweet goodness. *squeal* I just love it when Veggie's all moody. Oh wait, that would be like, always! |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 13:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't stop reading it! Terrific! Even with the small mistake on Likin Park lyric, but it's all right... Grat JOB!
mikky_r2@yahoo.com.br |
Reviewed By: bulma2002_67501 On: February 20, 2003 13:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so sweet that I got shivers down the back of my spine. |
Reviewed By: Hunny On: May 04, 2003 19:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I just had to let you know how impressed I was by your writing. There are very few fics out there that really show the writer has talent. You're story telling was amazing and I'm thrilled you have a vocabulary to move the reader through all the emotions of the characters, as well as the depth of the plot. I'll be looking for more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Amazing job. I mean... really. I can't believe how well it was written. Usually in fics, there's a variation in writing style and I'll have my favorite chapters that the author really went all out in their writing. Not with this fic. ALL the chapters stood out on their own! I liked how you let us know how Vegeta felt, but let him keep his dignity and his pride. And his POV after the Cell fight... WOW! The Trunks chapter was very cute... and original. And I totally loved how you gave Bulma some depth, especially in her POV chapter after Cell. Not to mention that the lemons were outstanding! Very creative... never seen any like them. VERY original work you have here. I love it!! I can't wait to read more from you. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Natz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 14:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shivers* I am trembling while I write this. Well, it's really hard for me to express how good reading chapter 5. One step closer. That song describes so much of my own emotions that it is scary. I can scream those words right now and feel the tears pressing down from the insides of my eyes. Just wanted to let you know how much it ment to me. |
Reviewed By: Amora On: October 02, 2002 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it
it was beautiful
i would love to read another one of ur stories |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow tis is a get fic..I ..I ......I was cryin I am surpissed I havn't drowned yet.... The salty water fro my tears is draining though.. My mom is kinda mad to but she'll get ver it Great story |
Reviewed By: scar On: June 26, 2002 12:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!! I finally knoe what happens in chap. 5+6! i read the first 4 on ff.net...
so happy am i, so wierd it is to be the saiyan no ouji...
wahtevr!
-scar |
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