| "All by myself" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 04, 2002 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! nothing spectacular, you say? HA!!! that was INCREDIBLE!!!!! you are an awesome writer. you wrote vegeta's perspective BEAUTIFULLY!!!! there may not have been a whole bunch of action, but for a writer as good as you are, it's not necessary. PEACHY KEEN AND ALL THAT GOOD STUFF!!!! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl On: June 01, 2002 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last line was wonderful! It gave me the chills!!! You really outdid yourself on this Ember, pat yourself on the back! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 10:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well girl, you've done it again! You never cease to amaze me (it was even better the second time around! lol) I really do love this chapter...you already know all about it. ;) And, again, you're very welcome...after all, what am I good for if you don't send me stuff to read? (Besides embarrassing you, rotfl!) |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 08:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Vegeta decided to stay |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 31, 2002 05:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG this is what I call incredible awesomeness. You are talented beyond belief and you should be proud of yourself and this story. BRAVO!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 07:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
good God.... you are incredible! truly incredible! that was such an eloquently written story.. you make us v/b writers proud :)! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 21, 2002 00:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow! you are an incredibly taleented writer! that last chapter was beautifully done. i love your choice of song for it. i love linkin park too! the songs you chose fit so well for what you wrote, it was brilliant!
you should definitely write another chapter (please!) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 20, 2002 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliantly written! Fantastic! Awesome! Excellent! And it was dame good too. Wow, did you capture their attitudes or what!! Please add on more chap to kinda wrap it up. I can't say enough about this fic. Great job Ember!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades (too lazy to sign in) On: May 20, 2002 16:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
*Jaw drop* Oh wow Ember-chan! This was probably the best one! I know I've said that before, but this time I really mean it! Of course I loved it, with good reason. I could feel the tension and the anger just as if I was the one Vegeta was yelling at. Pure and total coolness. ~_^ |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 13:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hellz yeah you should add another chapter girl. You can't leave us without one!!!!! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowzers! That was really great! I do think you need to write another chapter, kinda with Bulma and Vegeta making up, and getting past this terrible time. |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 08:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a very good job on this one |
Reviewed By: Elly_Leaverton [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very IC |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know I was just listening to Linkin Park? Wow, we have so much in common...
Love this story, always will. Later! |
Reviewed By: Jay On: April 26, 2002 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You stick to his character so wonderfully! I wonder if Vegeta needs to be taught a little lesson? Maybe making him jealous? That might do the trick. After all, how much rejection can one woman stand. I say that Bulma oughta teach him a lesson or two. |
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