| "The Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 147 ] |
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 15:29 CST
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This is totally a hiei/kag fic... right? right!? tell me i'm right! This is so an awesome story. plz update asap. And we want a lemon.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 01:29 CST
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I love Hiei's reaction to waking up, I really do. I could soooo easily see the others dumping him in a cheesy hotel like he thought. Probably after getting him drunk and taking plenty of pictures in order to use for blackmail. Now they both have some alone time though they aren't in the best of shape. Certainly time enough to talk and get to know each other better. Im positive Hiei has a lot of questions for her. Awesome chapter, can't wait to read more. I do hope you update soon. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 01:18 CST
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I must mourn now for a while, the almighty Hiei is dead *Sheds tear of sorrow* But you're bringing him back right? Right?! Can't have much of a Hiei/Kag story is one of the main players stays dead LOL Very good chapter, damned evil cliffhanger though. Lucky for me this isn't the last chapter posted so far LOL keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 00:51 CST
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This is such an evil chapter. I have to wonder what is going through each of the guys minds as they are listening to the girls arguing back and forth. Surely Hiei is rethinking his stand on killing Kagome for being responsible in this. Another very good chapter :)
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 00:27 CST
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I really like the way that Sesshoumaru and Mukuro are traveling together, I'm hoping that you intend on making those two into a pairing. I don't think that is one I've seen before really. I suspect the shit is about to hit the fan quite literally now that everyone has had someone important taken. This is guaranteed to be a violent, bloody battle. Great work
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 00:10 CST
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I'm curious as to just how Kagome would be able to get herself out of that one at the police dept. I'm sure that she did some mighty creative thinking. I like how you are portraying Kurama as well. It's so refreshing to see him as something akin to normal and not a sex starved pervert that's taken one too many hits of speed. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 23:39 CST
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That `…Aww, shit.' from Yusuke cracks me up each and every time. I envision just why Keiko believes he is asking her and invaribly it either involved another girlfriend on the side or a cross dressing toushin. Nice to see that Kagome already has our little firefly intrigued, I'm sure he's just going to become even more curious about her as time passes. He's probably right not to mention Shippo to Youko. I can only imagine how the kitsune would react.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 23:00 CST
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You know, Shizuru is my favorite out of the YYH girls with Yukina following a close second. It's good to see that she and Kagome are getting along so well. The first meeting with Yusuke went really well too, you gave him just the right among of sensitivity not to push the issue when she didn't completely answer his question.
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a free evening so I decided to reread your story. I've been lax in reviewing, much to my dismay so I vow to make it up to you here and now by reviewing each and every chapter. I don't know if I have said it before but in case I haven't, I love the way you are portraying Kuwabara in this fic. I think you have the best handle on him out of the crossover authors I have read so far.
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Reviewed By: xxbritnexx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last chapter made me cry! You know the part when Kagome first used the Kaze no Kizu, when " Invisible arms wrapped around her waist from behind and unseen lips pressed against her cheek" I cried so much.
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awsome. Very original in my opinion. Not many stories depict kikyo as the most evil of foes and most helpless as well. I cant wait to find out what happens next. please update soon. : )
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_yoko_4ever_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry bout that, it was really late when I finished readig, so 'wow' was pretty much all I could come up with at the time. Now let me say that I absolutely, positively ADORE this story. I swear it's one of the best I've read since I started reading fan-fics. It's also the first Inuyasha Yu Yu Hakusho crossover I've read. I admit I was a bit skeptical when I first saw it, but I'm glad I decided to read it. Even though I'm a die hard yusuke/Kagome/karama fan, I wouldn't want Kagome with any other character from Yu Yu than Hiei, so thanks for not stickin her with Kuwabara (Even though I adore him). I just have one question, and it came to me as I finished reading the last chapter. Sesshoumaru's still alive...why didn't he bring Inuyasha and the others back to life? Just wondering. Please Please Please (Yes, I'm begging you here) Please update soon!!! I really can't tell you how much I love this story. ^.^
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry bout that, it was really late when I finished readig, so 'wow' was pretty much all I could come up with at the time. Now let me say that I absolutely, positively ADORE this story. I swear it's one of the best I've read since I started reading fan-fics. It's also the first Inuyasha Yu Yu Hakusho crossover I've read. I admit I was a bit skeptical when I first saw it, but I'm glad I decided to read it. Even though I'm a die hard Inu/Kag fan, I wouldn't want Kagome with any other character from Yu Yu than Hiei, so thanks for not stickin her with Kuwabara (Even though I adore him). I just have one question, and it came to me as I finished reading the last chapter. Sesshoumaru's still alive...why didn't he bring Inuyasha and the others back to life? Just wondering. Please Please Please (Yes, I'm begging you here) Please update soon!!! I really can't tell you how much I love this story. ^.^
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: February 19, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow
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Title: I Love It!
Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 22:36 CST
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This is a fantastically written story, with a marvelous storyline. Not only is it wonderfully written but it also features two of my favorite animes/mangas ever. Yu Yu Hakusho and Inuyasha. You've done a great job.
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