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Title: MOOOORE
Reviewed By: Genjoe On: June 09, 2009 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue with the re-write! I love this fic when I first fond it, and I really like how you're fleshing it out more in the re-write. For all that is holy forge ahead!
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Title: Nooooooo
Reviewed By: JWDR08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave 10's across the board cause I like the Plot, very few spelling fubar, and all around best ddamn Shinji - OC pairing I've read to date. oh and one more thing. please continue this. it would be a shame to see it end where it is now!
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Title: WHYYYYYY
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe this was never finished =( I started reading this yesterday only to find out you quit over a year ago! Bad author, BAD! Give me more!
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Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 12:41 CST
Comment/Review:
An Angel at the worst possible time. Worse still it's THAT beast of an Angel to boot...I hope Motowa and Shinji can get out of this one safely. Keep writing, this story is great!
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! You're right, for that chapter ending you are a bastard, but we love ya anyways. Just kidding. I can imagine Shinji getting in his EVA, walking straight up to the offending Angel, and totally going off on it worse than any "Berzerk mode" could, saying things like "You BASTARD! You're the one who made me miss getting some NOOKIE! You Must DIE!!!!" followed by an hour long of enough cursing that'd make a sailor blush. Haha. But besides all that, I thank you for another glorious episode, and wish you a merry xmas. May visions of Unit 01 dressed as Santa dance in your head (hopefully not ON your head...) ;-)
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Reviewed By: Hakun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only just started reading these and I'm already addicted to them. Its amazing hope well writen it is. I must've been hard to make Motowa fit into it so easily. Hope the chapters get even better
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Title: Excellant...excellant
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 00:52 CST
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Hey hey! My apologies for not leaving a review in soo long. Life catches up with you sooner or later, and at the moment, life's way ahead of me. At least one thing hasn't changed, and that's the quality of what you're writing. Excellant, excellant work on the chapters that I have missed reviews on. I thought the lemon scenes (both, actually), fit both Ikari and Shimano perfectly. You've done an awesome job with Shimano, by the way. Rarely is an original character characterized to the point where they feel like they're naturally part of that universe. Keep it up, I'm sure we're all waiting for the next update! d('')b
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Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 23:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
No offence meant, but...massive? Hardly. :)
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:35 CDT
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Hey, been awhile since I've dropped a line here. Good job! Seriously excellant stuff. I'm pleased to see that the plot is coming along nicely. Can't wait to see more, and read on how all these other situations are being tied into one another. Peace, and kep on writing! d('')b
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Title: ch. 13, 14, & 15
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really moving along now and the plot is starting to become somewhat clear. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: recent chapters
Reviewed By: JErosion On: September 03, 2005 22:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn never saw that coming, and with the 13th coming up with one pilot out, this will get messy,
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Title: Oops again...
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 21:02 CDT
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If I keep missing your updates like this, sooner or later I'm gonna forget you keep writing this stuff! Good thing I remembered now. Impressive updates to say the least. Congratulations - you've managed to suck me into this story again. Concerning Asuma's current state, I don't know what to say about the whole issue. The plot derailment could be very good, or very bad depending on how you look at it. Personally, I like it, it gives me a feel for what else is going on in this story's universe, and also provides reasons for some stuff that's going on. Keep it up, can't wait to see more!
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Shinji didn't care. A distant part of him wondered why he took the Second's death so hard, and he attempted to think about that for a while before giving up." This confuses me...the rest of the chapter doesn't indicate she's dead...
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Reviewed By: Karandil On: August 30, 2005 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have introduced a strange development to your story, and I look forward to seeing how you are going to link the two parts together. How are you going to wrrite a disabled Asuka, unable to even breathe on her own ? Is she going to continue piloting Eva, even more fanatically since it now is the only way she has of experiencing mobility ? If you keep writing, I will keep reading. Oh, and the two guys are from Lain, yes ?
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Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 (not logged in) On: August 23, 2005 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice chapter. I'm excited in seeing what happens next!
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