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Reviewed By: bmatsea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... looking forward to more for this story
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Title: Ch4
Reviewed By: forechunkukee (nsi) On: August 02, 2005 00:16 CDT
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Wow...I'm impressed. You actually seem to be taking the time to write out a real story, rather than bring out a tasteless lemon. I liked the way you wrote from Motowo's point of view this chapter. Gives the story a bit of depth, as it shows her thought processes and feelings concerning Ikari. Lol, I don't know if you meant to portray her this way, but she seems to be a borderline nymphomaniac. (How do you end up masturbating without knowing it?) The citrus itself I feel was very well written out. Don't change a thing, it was awesome! I would like to see how this develops: is she really falling for Ikari, or is she a victim of her own desires? Very nice, keep it up. You got my vote. d('')b
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 22:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sexxxy. :)
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Reviewed By: JErosion On: July 31, 2005 23:24 CDT
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I really like this story. Motowa is one of the more likable and interesting ACCs in Eva fanfiction I've read. And it should be noted that 'Massive Attack' makes excellent music to screw to.
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Title: I Need More!
Reviewed By: Papascalius On: July 13, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first OC fic I've actually enjoyed. Actually, It's better than most non-OC fics I've read. PLEASE keep writing. This is a great fic, so keep it going.
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Title: hurry up
Reviewed By: The FMA On: July 13, 2005 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this isnt a review this a telling you to hurry up with your new chapter plz
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Title: Right on!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, awesome job so far! I love your style of writing. Beauty in simplicity as they say (simple don't mean simplistic =P). Your grammar/spelling are right up there with no mistakes I could catch. This story is a nice break from the Ikari/Sohryu norm (I personally prefer Ikari/Ayanami) and its well written to boot! Keep this up, can't wait to see an update. Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Kargan3033 On: July 04, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An intresting fic you have here, I like the interaction between Shinji and Motowa and there taste in music. I hope to see more of this fic and soon
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Title: Me Like
Reviewed By: AnimeFanJ On: July 03, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a great start to your fic. Dan't wait for more. One of my favorites so far...then again...anything with Asuka having stuff turned back on her is good by me. For once some original characters. Way to go man!
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Reviewed By: Oldwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I can honestly say this is a very good start. I'm intrquied at what the future holds for Shinji and his girlfriend.
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Title: Promising
Reviewed By: darkfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 22:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you've got quite the promising start with the setup so far. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: The FMA On: June 24, 2005 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it does have promise and i think that it will go far and will be a great fic becuase it is o original
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: Taro MD On: June 23, 2005 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has got some promise... Yes, yes it does.
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Reviewed By: Knight2 On: June 23, 2005 04:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seems very good. It's nice to find fic like this when trying to get break from normal Shinji/Asuka or Shinji/Rei fics.
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Title: First Three Chapters
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. I can't wait until it heats up some more. :)
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