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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was a little sooner than expected (though completely appreciated). At least they started the talk. Hopefully, Abel and Kagome will be able to have some time alone to hash this thing out completely. And poor Tres. They need to talk to and "help" him out. Poor baby... DX Do I need to tell you how good this chapter was? The best kind of update, is a lemony fresh one. Thanks! ^^ *claps* Loving this story more and more each chapter. I'm hoping you'll focus a little more on the training though (or have their abilities coincided as much as possible?). Gotta be ready for a surprise attack! Looking forward to a new chapter. I really want to see how this situation (the A+K+T as well as the group tension) will work itself out. *punches Sango* SO~ Hope everything is well, and uh... 'Til next time? *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your story Please Update soon! I can't wait to read more!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 18:32 CDT
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Great chapter! With one of the problems solved, of course more drama must erupt. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 16:32 CDT
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Oh my gosh that was one of the more embearassing chapters I've read *blush* gosh I can't believe that talk between Miroku and Tres....and poor Abel I can't believe he thinks he can't be with her.....but at the same time the situcation does seem hopless in his favor in a regular situation but Kagome has feelings for both of them .....does that meen she really will have two lovers?.........................wait a minute is this hardly the most importanting at the moment??...I mean shouldn't they be tring to find Naraku not galabanting aroung tring to see who is in love with who...gosh its rediculous just thinking about it.........but speaking about that I wander when Koga will show up.....I'm supprized he hasen't yet....hopefully he gives up on Kagome when he find the love mess she is in......oh well updaty soon.................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 01:05 CDT
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This was an awesome chapter. I especially loved Miroku giving Tres advice. That was a part I had been hoping for but wasn't sure was going to happen. It was also really neat how Tres once again grew in character, I'm beginning to really enjoy watching his progression into humanization but the whole part with Abel was a bit of a downer. I feel bad for him and look forward to a chapter of Kag/Abel heart-to-heart or another Abel-Inuyasha talk. Inuyasha is definitely grown and I like this portrayal of him a lot.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok first I'm jumping for joy, Tres and Kagome FINALLY Kissed! But awww Able, don't give up fight or no wait scratch that, talk to Kagome. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
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Title: sqeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 04:48 CDT
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Wow you've really put some strain on Father Nightroad. I can't imagine Kagome taking him distancing himself very well. She will blame herself. Great chapter! Thanks for updating so consistently.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 23:17 CDT
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Stupid snakes .....personaly I don't see how my friend can like them so much.....well I don't actrully HATE them persay....I just would want to get bit by one...XD....I can't believe that whole Tres sitting on Kagome thing came up again....I wander what Jinengi things about that ....I think is hillarious really....but I feel bad for Tres he has all these feelings and he doesn't know what to do with them...I mean look he was ratiating Jealousy and had know idea what the feeling was....seirously...XD...though I sure things are far from being done.....XD...........................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Avidusreader On: June 23, 2008 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it love it love it. I love all your fics.I do wish you would update faster but I understand your once a week policy. I Liked the reaction that Tres had when Abel came up with a way to get Kagome to drink the herbal remedy. And Jinenji I love that you brought him back in to the story and he seams so IC here I love it. Oh the group reaction upon learning that Tres was laying on Kagome and shippou's innocent rambelings on the subject were priceless. any comments send to (Name) at Yahoo dot com
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 13:22 CDT
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I loved this. I was expecting a little more of a reaction from Tres when Abel fed her mouth-to-mouth but to know that he was feeling the jealousy and anger is enough for now. It was another remarkable chapter and I find myself looking forward to each week when there will be a new post. I especially love how everything is like a growing mystery. Things keep piling up and nothing is adding together. Where will it all end? I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 05:00 CDT
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Reviewed By: RubyScarlett [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, the story is really good so far. You write beautifully I actually wasn't expecting some of the things that you wrote. Continue on as you've done. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hazzah! A double update! Well... These two chapters were interesting. >< I'm just glad you didn't end with a cliff hanger. Thanks. *gives you a cookie* Damn Naraku. Where did he get this dream power from?! >< Now that I think about it, the earthquake-demon attack setup was a bit coincidental... *le sigh* Poor Kagome... Being poisoned and *shudders* having to cut out the muscle. X_x Hopefully, her wound will heal correctly now that they've treated it. I DO wonder what effect the blood will have on her though. Hopefully, she won't be getting any cravings (though Kagome's a miko, it might not be completely correctly purified because of her current condition). Oh! Nice job incorporating Jinenji like that too! ^^ I find that he's very overlooked in the land of fan fictions (aside from SF, of course). So uh... Again -- great chapters. I love the way this story is progressing so far (both plot and character-wise). I hope that everything else with you is well ad I am, as always, looking forward to the next update(s). JA MATA! And a Happy Father's Day (where applicable)! ^^;;; *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 01:24 CDT
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Exciting, Naraku can enter through dreams now? He's a man of various influences and resources but somehow I wasn' expecting that. I'm also kind of excited that you're brining Jinenji into this. I also enjoyed Tres' outburst in ths chapter. So far you've shown that yes he does have different emotions and he's still trying to sort through him but Tres angry was rather interesting. Once again you've provided an awesome chapter and I'm so thankful. It's great and the fact that Inuyasha has grown up so much in this in only so little time says that he has done a lot of thinking and is becoming more mature instead of the angry young man that he was. I look forward to more Tres/Kagome/Abel interactions and when you finally bring Sesshomaru and Kouga into this. Now that would/will be exciting.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 00:27 CDT
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ya thats what he thinks, Inuyasha was right, they are going to be soooooooooooo sore the next morning....it'll be almost comical I think, able to travel my butt, lol....so when is the Able side of the relationship going to progess and how is Kagome going to have a relationship with both of them none the less one of them considering the worry that the bode could be what causes their feelings....I'm sure it will be a real treat to see how you get his story to progress but for the time being those two need to get healed as soon as possible so hopefully Jinengi can help...and when is Koga going to come in to the picture I'm pritty sure that he is still obsest with Kagome so it really will be an interesting incounter...I bet the now wizer Kagome could deal with him alot better..hehehe....any who update soon.....Nyuka
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