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| "The Shadows of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] | | Pages (6): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2009 08:11 CST
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good ending. serious hell on wheels to get there, but good ending. Loved it. Thank you for a great read and I'll be reading it over and over as time passes as I do with all my favorites. DD
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I can't believe this story is finished. It feels finished, but it doesn't. I don't know. Maybe because the ending has strayed so far from the original plot of the fic... Well, either way, I loved 'The Shadows of Time'. I'm really just happy that you were able to finish it. *gives you a cookie* While a longer story is always welcome, I don't really think it's necessary to delve into Tres, Abe and Kagome's situation anymore than you already have. The relationship is complicated to say the least and you addressed some core issues and led them on their way to solving it. It leaves us on a happy/optimistic note and that's definitely appreciated. ^^ Thank you for another great story Ryukotsusei! *bows* I'm looking forward to reading your next adventure. Though, as with Trinity Blood, I will have to read up on this "Dark-Hunter" series you'll be using for a cross over, I'm sure it'll be very entertaining. Hope you enjoyed Turkey Day and that you have a Merry Christmas/Happy Holidays! ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Reviewed By: Avid Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! *throws confetti* I'm so glad you were able to update The Shadow of Time! ^o^ Even better, the baby was born! ^o^ *coos at Daichi* Why don't we do stand up labor anymore? They seem way more effective... Blah. In any case, with any luck Kagome's house is almost done and with it everything can start rolling/falling into place again. The three lovebirds need to work out their issues, but the baby creates a problem, no? No magical fixes in sight, but I"m sure you'll be kind to us and let Kagome, Abel and Tres work through everything (or leave it with them working through their relationship issues), right? Of course you will. *give you a cookie* So umm... No rush on the ending. We can wait for RL (DX) to cool down for a few months. But I hope all's well in your neck of the woods. Til next time! JA MATA! *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl ^^
| Reviewed By: jesswolf22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story
| Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will agree with kagome.. labor sucks!!! i thought is was funny when abel says hold your hands outs, and the baby bites inuyasha.... i do believe he is a crusnik.. snickering... i thinks Daichi is adorable and i know abel is going to be a great papa!!
| Reviewed By: jesswolf22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update
| Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 13:26 CDT
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Congratulations! Your story has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Action/Adventure for the first quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the rest of the nominations, seconding, and voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com. Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 15:59 CDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hazzah! Abel is back! ^o^ I'm glad. Now we can start the healing process. Right? I really don't know what to think about this story and where it's headed. Looking at your track record, I'd say this fic will end on a more "realistic"ly happy note, but I'm getting a bad feeling about this pregnancy. Let's just hope you're feeling nice. Either way, I'm both sad and excited that The Shadow of Time is ending soon. I want this to go on, but I wanna know what'll happen. Le sigh. Well... Good luck with the rest of the fic. I'll be waiting impatiently, as usual, for my notification. Ja mata!
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 17:41 CST
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YOSH! Abel's back and taking on the responsibilities he should have waited to hear about in the first place. I honestly don't think Tres gets it yet, nor is he as in control of his jealousy as he wants everyone to think he is. They still have a lot to work out, but some of those issues will have to wait till after Kagome has the energy to beat their heads together. Lord knows I know InuYasha is tired of playing babysitter to that trio. Bravo to another well written chapter. Very vivid imagry used! DD
| Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 20:28 CST
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Congratulations Ryukotsusei - your story The Shadows of Time has been nominated at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008 for the following categories: Best Action/Adventure, Best Characterization, Best Drama, and Best Serial. This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! Sesshys_Jaded_Samuri
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2008 11:24 CST
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The more I read, the more I want to smack Abel upside the head. But that would be all I'd do. I'm sure InuYasha would do more. LOL. Thank you for a well written chapter for Christmas. I enjoyed it and the story you're woven for us all.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 12:06 CST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 06:31 CST
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YAY!! about time someone dragged that dope's ass back. Couldn't he feel her weakening over the link? That was why it was there wasn't it. To help those two knuckleheads know when she wasn't feeling well, or was in danger?
| Reviewed By: snipn18 On: December 03, 2008 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it n i cant wait till its done if its not already...what is the link so the eng dubbed of trinity blood...my email is snipern18@hotmail.com...please n thank u
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