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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 18:25 CDT
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Wow what a great chapter! The emotions in it were very well portrayed.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 13:06 CDT
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I really liked this chapter. Really, really liked. The Tres/Kagome factor of this chapter was awesome and the growing development between them was fabulous. Now I really look forward to when Abel gets his turn. :D
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
T^T My review wasn't posted!! *kicks mm.org* Retard! T^T *3rd try* >< So thanks for answering my question. I'm glad the Yu Yu boys would have made it. It's a little weird to think of them dying because of some bomb (especially with what most of them have been through). They at least deserve to die in some horrific, days-long battle. But the makai does seem lke a great hiding place. Hmm... I wonder who else was/could have been hiding there... *cough*Naraku*cough* Well, the earthquake sucked, as do the resulting injuries, but at least Kagome and Tres got to spend some time together. I mean, they didn't talk much, but they DID get to know each other better. Now, Abel's turn! ...Or are you going to let the Tres-Kagome thing solidify [a bit more]? Either way, I sense some serious tension and more than a little jealousy coming along. I do have another question. Was it wise to have Kagome and Tres go to the hot spring so soon after the quake? The basin of the tub could have shifted and allowed sulfur into the pool, producing more steam and making the water highly acidic (that scene from Date's Peak was real (though the elapsing/given time was sped up)). Even when the hot spring isn't very close to the actual volcano, it can still be effected. ...Just wondering... So uh... great progression. There was more, but I can't remember exactly what I said. Either way, *gives you cookie* loved the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next update. *wavies* JA! ~Animefeak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! *gives you a cookie* I liked the Inuysha - Tres interaction in this one. A nice brake from the past. Let's us focus on the guys a little more. ^^ Especially since I don't think Inuyasha'll be getting too much attention in this one. Great Hiei-doll and Yusuke cameos too. *steals and squeezes Hiei doll* So cuuute! ^o^ It is a little weird that the gun shop would be in a more populated area, though the neighborhood Yusuke lives/goes to school in isn't to nice, so that's one excuse. In any case, I'm glad they found the ammunition they needed. Hopefully you'll have them get them back to the past safely and without interruption (though with your twists)... Well, I hope everything with you is well and I'm looking forward to the next update. ^^ Ja mata~! *wavies* Random Q: I know it's a cameo, but for arguments sake, did/would Hiei, Yusuke, Kurama and the rest have lived through the war and/or to the re-Colonization of Rome? Just wondering... ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 13:53 CDT
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Awesome chapter, it was especially great how Inuyasha was the one that had to inform/lead Tres to understand his feelings towards Kagome. It was especially awkward for the poor Hanyou because he most definitely is the worst with the whole understanding emotions thing. I was almost expecting a blind leading the blind but he seemed to do a pretty good job of it if Tres' actions are anything to go by. I also loved the cameo of Yusuke. That was funny and unexpected. Beautiful chapter and I look forward to the next- wonder if Tres and Able will ever get a rosary.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 01:52 CDT
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lol...Inu you so funny....lol...Ya know out of all the people that could try to explain that to father Tres Inu may be the best choice considering he knew about what happened, but at the same time I was soooooo sure he would never do something like that.....I was sooooo not Inu ya know....I though Father Nightrode was going to some how bring it up eventruly but guess I was wrong...thankyou for proving me wrong I hate pradictible story lines even if I love then too...weird right?.........any ways I can't believe that father Tres found what he needed...so is he takeing the gun he found and the amunition of the gun he has now with him? or just the amunition?.....well I guess I'll have to find out later...............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
always been a fan, just a lousy reviewer ;) This story holds your usual mastery of language and storyline, darkness, tongue in cheek mischief and dramatic turns. This story actually had me going off to discover a new series i was unfamiliar with, and one i found I enjoyed quite a lot. I did have a bit of a coughing fit over the cameo appearance of our dear yusuke, and I have to admit, there have been a few times and a few tales of yours that earn you the same "can't drink tea while reading" award as madmiko ;)
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 02:34 CDT
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Poor Tres is so confused he's going to have a hard time getting a hang of it all for awhile and I can only imagine the conversation that'd go between Tres and Abel about his problem... maybe it should be Miroku *waggles eyebrows* that would definitely be a way to corrupt the man. I loved the chapter by the way, Abel went to Crusnik form and we already had a pleasant battle. I loved it and look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 01:46 CDT
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lol.....Ya know how you said that after Miroku burned the surtra the guys got closer to Kagome....hehe..I...I just could help thing of a magnetic line conencting them....where ever Kagome went they where forcibly pulled that direction....lol....It's funnier in my mind I promise....lol....and that Reaction Tres had to Kagome...funny stuff my friend...lol....gosh I can just picture that ackward conversation between Nightrode and Tres....."well I think its time we had the talk about the birds and the bees"......lol....hehehe.....I hope you can work in that little informative lession some where in the next chapter....hehe....Oh wait you already have it written write so I just wait to see if is there....XD.................................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:36 CDT
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hoorah! Another amazing chapter, you're truly fantastic. I'm really looking forward to Tres' development as a human now and any other plots and twists and turns you have prepared
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 23:40 CDT
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yay for father Tres saving the day....I'm glad you have regular update I gives me something to look forward to (beside graduating, all seinor activities and starting college/a Jop) Ya know I think Inuyasha is alot more sensitive then he would like to admit if he gets upset for her not noticing how worried he was.....and that fact that he though she was brushing him off to get the Boar...How else should she have told him...sheeesh......I'm glad you are stick with the reolism in the fact that BOTH father Tres and Kagome are feteaged from getting a new body....that reminds me if Father Tres' main weapon is the gun and he no longer has his shield of a metalic body, What is he going to do when he runs out of bulets?....hmmmmmm maybe they could get Totosi to fashin something for him......which also remindes me when is Sesshoumaru and Koga going to come into the story again???...well I guess I'll have to wait....untill then...................Nyuka...XD
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 01:01 CDT
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Yet another terrific chapter! Poor father Nightroad, -- worried about showing up in the Feudal Era naked! LOL!! And Tres really had no idea at all what all was involved in being human. Having a dream, feeling hunger, his first headache. What did he let himself in for? I loved the explanation of the bond the necklace gives Inuyasha to Kagome. And Miroku was so quick to latch onto the fact that the bond between her and the two priests was different because it didn't require an object to be in effect, -- it's internal and therefore permanent. I love the way you're writing Miroku, -- showing his intelligence and true powers instead of making him a clown. And you've got Inu down pat, too. Everything he says is spot on in-character. I giggled when he told Kag to "quit flirting" when she was smiling at the two priests and how satisfied he was to get her attention back on himself, even if she was irritated with him. you did a great job having Abel explain vampires in his time, and I liked the reactions of Inu and Sango. Then when he told them he was a Crusnik, which means he feeds on other vampires, -- Inu's thoughts about how trustworthy could he be if he eats his own kind really were a nice touch. The attack by the boar and Tres ending up carrying Kag was interesting. I liked the way you pointed out that she didn't mind like she had with Inu because Tres didn't treat her like she was weak and stupid. I love the way she feels comfortable with him. ^_~ Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 21:52 CDT
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This one is doing well. You've put enough info about Trinity Blood in here that those of us who know nothing about it can get the gist of it enough to figure out a bit about the universe. I don't really know where you are going with the android turned human. I would think he would lose all his power and not be all that helpful to the group.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that their quest has begun as well as the arguments and fights... wonder what will happen along the way... kinda curious but something must happen to inuyasha in this story if kagome is paired with abel/tres instead of being with inuyasha?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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