| "The Shadows of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 90 ] |
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 04:26 CDT
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The story is moving along nicely! That was a great chapter..
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never heard of Trinity Blood, but your writing is always great and this story (just like your others) has thoroughly ensnared me. I'm half-tempted to look up the series and see what it's about. :) I can't wait to see the rest of this story as you post the next chapters, but I'm almost sad to see that I have to wait two weeks for each of them. I'll keep my fingers crossed for early-posting surprises.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 10:47 CDT
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You are an author of extreme talent. Once again you produced a chapter of amazing quality full of the surprising deaths of favorite characters, lots of bloodshed and amazing play/interactions between the characters. (I'm beginning to think your forte is surprises of such.) I'd been wondering how Kagome was going to be reintroduced into this story after her death and all but it seems that you've found a most interesting way to input her in there where she can't really be harmed by Naraku (ghosts can't be harmed right?) but still cause him a good many headaches, which she is pretty good at. It was a shocker to have Sesshomaru die in such a... quick and upfront death. and then there is Naraku in all his villany attempting to get the empress. He's going for all the big shots. I'm curious now how Shippo will actually go about dealing with the new situation. It's most helpful that he has Kagome at his side and he is the only one to see her... so far but I wonder if Jaken will play another part into the story seeing as how he's still not only alive after meeting with Naraku but he still has Sesshomaru's sword. Any plans? Amazing and looking forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 05:02 CDT
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Another gripping chapter! This story is so filled with tension and suspense that I almost feel like I have to shake it off at the end. It just pulls me in so deep. Ya gotta love Kouga's swagger and bravado. No matter how many times he gets his butt kicked, he still thinks he take on anyone. LOL!! But Naraku killed him, too. *sigh* And then he took out the mighty Sesshoumaru! With the jewel, he's just unbelievably powerful. He almost absorbed Sesshoumaru once before, so we know he can do it. But he used his brains to trap him, too. Poor Kagome, finding out that he has the jewel after all. That has to make everything she's suffered so much worse, knowing it was in vain. And the attack on the Pope was cool! I mean, awful! ^_^ So much action in this! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 00:02 CDT
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Ok...soooooooooooooo um Kagome is a Ghost...suchs for her....man that really sucks....lets just hope she isn't stuck at the shrin like the people in beatal juice were......hehehe.........really only movie....saw it resently ....hmph.......any who....I think you are content with killing every one slowly and painfully and letting Naraku win...whats up with that hmmmmmmmm??.....I mean for the first three chapters at least all you seem to be doing is killing off all the good guys......Not that its a trully bad thing cause this is a really koo story and its definetly a twist to see the Heros struggle soooooooooo much and NOT win the battle against him......not really fare but hay! not my story...XP.....hehehe.......That Disease sounds like some serious stuff....I wander if Kagome will be able to help them....or if she can make it there in time to help them....By the way great chapter can't wait for your up day......chaw........Nyuka...XD
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 14:55 CDT
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Oh no! I hope thy find a way to save them. I can't wait for Kagome to show up with a body of her own..
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... when will kagome & shippou show up... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Kimmyco On: April 13, 2008 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to find out what happens. Could you please update faster.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 19:57 CDT
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This was a fascinating chapter! I'm a newbie to the TB universe and I think you did a fabulous job of introducing the characters and the world situation with the Methuselah. Naraku has never been portrayed as such a vicious, diabolical, and powerful villain before. I love it! The attack on Sister Kate was as horrifying as the torture and murders of Kagome and her family. And it only makes sense that Naraku would have grown in power. The action is so tense and exciting and I'm on the edge of my seat. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and to Tres and Abel meeting up with some of the Inuyasha crew. Thanks for the treat of the early post!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 20:43 CDT
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm I'm Likeing this story but Im a bit confussed...Obviously Kagoem died so how is she going to be with Abel and Tres??....I really don't know how this is going to work out but I hope you updated fast anoph for me not to freak out with a panice attack...XP...JK....but seriouly......hehe...XD............It was sooooooo crazy how you describe Kagome and her families death so thiraly with torture and brutality....I almost wanted to cry when I was Sotas turn...and when Kagome was being burned...I kept on hoping Shippo would make it to her in time...but alass I was not so lucky..........will Sesshy, Koga, and Shippo tell them more about Naraku and the Jewel?....Naraku did say that Sesshoumaru and Koga where still after him....and he didn't mention Shippo last time so I figure he doesn't consider him a threat so I think hes there too.............I can't wait for your update....XD....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:33 CDT
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Thanks for such a quick update. I love how your story is building and you're not just jumping into it but giving a history and a starting point. I honestly don't think I've read such a bad ass Naraku :D lol looking forward to the next update
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Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Un-fucking-believable! Everyone is in perfect character. The bantering between Kouga and Inu was spot on. The fight scene had so much detail that it gave me goosebumps. Why does it not suprise me of how you killed Kags and her family. You are so fucking sadistic, lol. I can't wait for the second chapter to see how things start to unfold. Sess is going to be pretty damned pissed. But I have some ideas of what is going to happen with some of the characters. I'm gonna have to run them by you to see if I'm right or wrong. Once again you've written and utterly fresh and original fic. You are the queen of originality. Wow, I'm once again completely and totally in awe of your writing ability. Fanfiction readers are truly fortunate to have you.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 11:10 CDT
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That was stunningly awesome. I loved the fact that Kagome is normal, she's not overly powerful and her "destruction" of Naraku was almost blind luck. I also liked how you built your story up. Your characters are well within character, not drastically up or down and Inuyasha and Kouga arguing is just a normal thing but it was light hearted and helped ease a little from the battle which by the way was awesome, I love a good battle scene because they can be rather hard to come by as they are either quick and sloppy or most people avoid them altogether. The death of her family was very brutal but it kept well with Naraku's character, a cold heartless being. I most definitely look forward to the building of the story and I'm especially glad to know that you've already finished writing it and will just post it in a certain schedule. I actually like that idea and should almost consider it myself before putting a story up. :D Loved it and looking forward to more of it, especially the Trinity Blood factor although your introduction to A.I. is how I'm assuming Tres' origins will be explained? Sorry for the rambling review so I'll wrap it up, you rock and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: April 03, 2008 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This first chapter is very good. I think you've done a good job of keeping everyone in character thus far, this pissing contests that were going on in the first half of the chapter really does sound just like InuYasha and Kouga. The figth scene was good, I know how brutal those can be to write, And InuYasha was right in his observations that the fight had been to easy, if it was that easy then Naraku would have died long ago. Personally I'd love to know just where and how he managed to survive and hide with no one being able to find him for so long. The way Kagome's family died was harsh, I don't think I'd care to survive and endure the memories of that. LOL, I think it would make me insane. Anyway, you did a great job and I can't wait to see the next chapter posted.
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 04:30 CDT
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It was well written, but very brutal. Killing her in the first stretch. Wow very interesting.
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