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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 11:47 CDT
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I'm glad to see another update. This is definitely a good read!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 06:37 CDT
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Ah Inuyasha is so emotionally stunted. This was another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 02:49 CDT
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You are the coolest author in the world lol. Your ability to update so fast is like some hero talent or something. I loved this chapter, now the fun begins from here on out. Hunting Narakue we will go!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 00:10 CDT
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That was so depressing but at the same time I can't help feel happy that every one understands now....sigh*....though I don't know how the well would work...You'd think it would creat a time worp or something.....and what if they find Naraku How will the absolutly surtain that he is dead for good....How do they know it not all if vain.....and what about the jewel...since its disapeard wouldn't it just appear back in Lady Kate...(that was her name right?)....Gosh this is why I hate time travel it just too confussing....personaly I think it would have been a lot easier to understand if the well did let them through any more and History was just rewriten...insted of all this time warp stuff that is extremly confussing....lol.....but ya know what I could care less I just can't wait to see how it all works out in the end....XD.....Nyuka
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Title: Elena
Reviewed By: Dark Vixin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story alot so far and I hope that you can update soon. It is a very good story. Thanks! ~~~~Kit~~~~
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 14:38 CDT
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A lot of stuff happened in here that I wasnt expecting although I wasn't very surprised either with your ability to throw grand surprises at your readers. It was a fantastic chapter and I was relieved to see you had answered the question of time and how it'll be changed if they succeed in the past, time is such a tricky thing after all. Loved it look forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 01:42 CDT
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great update but really sad... sad for shippo since he'll be losing kagome again... but at least kagome got a body and was able to go back in time to stop naraku with tres & abel's help... wonder how tres will adjust with being human... who and what will they find in the past... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 15:56 CDT
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Wow that was a sad way to end the chapter....sheesh couldn't leave it happy could you lol.....soon it won't even matter because the future (as far as I know) will change so yaaaa....gosh this is definently going to be interesting....ya know what I think...I think after all the stuff in the past you should have a fast forward to the future of how everything worked out ya know....I think that would be kneet....well any ways I'm glad Kagome got a new body, I feel bad for the shikon and the Goshibu....I'm mean spiritual entitys should not have to experence such pain and the the tree was willting thats just so sad ....it shouldn't be aloud to happen.....its sad...but ya know what I think things are going to work out ok.....because I don't think you could do that gain....all that pain I was hard to read once...but I'm going to keep and open mind...expect the unexpected is always a good way to think of stuff..so ya I shall be awaiting you next update.....................Nyuka *meow*
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 15:11 CDT
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Oh my! Wow that was intense. I can't to see how Tres takes to being human.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: DudettRin101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! I can't wait 'till you update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SKnFS-nli On: April 25, 2008 10:28 CDT
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Once again you present an amazing chapter for reading pleasure. I was amused by Abel's confusion of talking to a person he couldn't see. As always you keep a perfect pace to your story without jumping suddenly and rushingly into anything. You're story is awesome and I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 21:47 CDT
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you.........you...............DANG IT WHY DID YOU DO THAT .......you just love the torture of a cliff hanger don't you .....Your soooooooooooo mean....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....With that plea they have to help her they just have to dang it....sigh.......any ways I think she could heal the Pope and Abals sister too.....ummmmmmmmmmmmm....ya I thought it was really koo that Abal could hear her that was kinda funny when he didn't know who was talking...just alittle hummar in the sea of sarrow I suppose........and poor Jaken he may be a annoying little imp but its not really nice to say so outright.....not that he seems to care any ways...hmph....welllllll..ummmmmmmmmm...I hope Kagome gets a body and Naraku dies...untill next time...............Nyuka
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Title: Staggering Approval
Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*staggers back* GAh! Way to make a gut wrenching chapter! I desperately want some Kagome loving and understanding here! She needs a big hug and cuddle! Some physical contact at least, it was so sad when Shippou couldn't comfort her! And Naraku needs a butt kicking! (Ps: How did the jewel start to purify? Was it because Kagome got emotional or something? Became aware of further surroundings and the jewel's existence?). As always you write one hell of a story. Looking forward to the rest. My only peeve is that I want more Kagome. But I'm sure you understand that particular fixation. Is she going to cure the two of their disease from that monster thingy? *squirms in seast* I really can't wait for your update when it happens!
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Title: Not signed in.
Reviewed By: Adorkablebanana On: April 23, 2008 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, Ryu! I loved it! You are one of my all time faves!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 13:56 CDT
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Awesome! The tone and pace of chapter four is so different from the first three, but no less compelling. I loved the way you incorporated Jaken into Shippou's venture and had him be the one to prod him into being more like Sesshoumaru when it comes to getting what he wants. His explanation of what he hopes to be able to do to get Kagome a body was very helpful and intriguing. And I liked it that Father nightroad was able to hear her voice. Her meeting with Caterina was very well-written and her heartfelt plea at the end was so very much in character. You did a great job of re-telling the story from the past, too, without it being boring at all, even though it's something we're all familiar with. Nice job!!
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