| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 23:04 EST
Comment/Review:
All I can say is this: Bravo! This rewrite is better than the original, but I don't need to tell you that. I got a new lemon fic in the beta-reading process, and would appreciate it if you would look over it when I post it on here. If not, I'll understand. Keep up on the great work, and congrats on that award!
-R80 |
Reviewed By: Gray Fox On: October 22, 2002 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'll go directly to the point...
Yes, even though I already read this story back when it was on FF.net I never rated it, so I'm just saying this and I think speak for a lot more: Keep Writing This!
Well, anyway, hope you can still manage a next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Griffin On: October 17, 2002 16:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awsome.
And I mean awsome. This is probably the best lemon I've ever read, if not the best fic I've read period. I read this originally on FF.net and I never reviewed it. I was about to do so, but when the time came they banned NC-17 stories *mumbles*. Anyway, I love the fic and please keep writing! Thanks for this great story. |
Reviewed By: R80 On: October 08, 2002 17:42 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good to see you're on here as well. After FF.net, i was wondering where else you'd post other than your site (where i can;t find this series) or at the Domain. This is long overdue, but i liked the latest chapter barefoot and pregnant, and i';d like to see what happens next. see ya around |
Reviewed By: DooM_GazE On: October 04, 2002 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can Honestly say that I have never read a better fic in my life, lemon or no. While your writing style is excellent, a few things grated on me. Probably if you used "Color" instead of "Colour" and whatnot. It always grates on me when people do that.
The Spelling and Grammar is almost perfect: I didn't find a single error.
The Originality is a weak point, as the whole: "Partner has child same as 'destined and they're destined to be together has been done before." But it is |
Reviewed By: The Lemon Hentai On: October 02, 2002 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fics
Its nice, and unfortionately rare, too see a lemon, or even some G rated fics for that matter, with plot. |
Reviewed By: Ludacris On: June 20, 2002 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a great story I love it. You should do one when Hikari and Tailmon have the baby that would be nice. Anyway it was a great story and my favorite chapters 13 and 14 oh yeah and chapter 5. This is one of the best lemons I ever read without feeling dirty after I read it. |
Reviewed By: axel On: June 05, 2002 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
creative use of alternate timeline and other characters that never debuted |
Reviewed By: Allimon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 14:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i REALLY liked reading allof them!they were awsome! u should write more often cause u sure are good at it!!! |
Reviewed By: Digi-Advisor On: January 29, 2002 13:31 EST
Comment/Review:
My question to you is this: Are you still working on writing a Daikari fic or did you call it off or something? What's your reply? |
Reviewed By: Rei Inverse On: January 12, 2002 12:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD!! this is great example of good fanfic writing. and I loved your Flame of the flame at the end of chap-16 (hee hee) the writer of that got what he/she deserved. they truly didn't appreciate the flavor of thisic (no pun).
you almost rank up there with skysaber, 2F, and the crew of eyrie productions! (9, 10, and 10 on overall rateings respectivly).
and I don't usually like digimon fics! (mainly becuase of the # of horibble SI's in this cattagory.) or lemons. but this is not PWP, so I don't consider it to truly to be a lemon. just Lime+
if you want to repy to this message, e-mail Rei_inverse@yahoo.com
Rei Inverse, counisure of fanfics (um about 1,200 read so far?) |
Reviewed By: NET [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 11:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you pair up the character. Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2001 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely a cut above most lemons that I've glanced at.
I'm no big fan of Digimon, but I gotta say that your declaration of characterization was very inspiring; but since I have no idea what the actual characterization is, I couldn't tell ya whether it's off or on...
Very good use of descriptive prose (at least in the first chapter, don't have time to read it all, I'm sad to say...) and Hikari's first-person rant/speech at the beginning... whew. There was only one thing missing, though: a motto. For the first chapter, I'd nominate:
"It's not the years that get you, love, it's the mileage."
-Derek Croft
I'll read the rest when I get the chance, so stay tuned! |
Reviewed By: MayokeOni On: September 28, 2001 01:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story. A hentai with a plot: A new and exciting concept! lol, just a little sarcasm. Excellent use of the characters. Really true to they're portral in the show. I'm eager to see where this is going. . .
~*MayokeOni*~ |
Reviewed By: The DJ Jester On: October 21, 2001 22:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
*blinks eyes with complete and utter loving of this fic.* THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The DJ Jester |
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