| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: Digi Advisor On: March 14, 2003 14:21 EST
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A troll I may be, but at least I know fanfic writers who can write decent fanfics WORTH reading rather than writing pointless sex or porn fics with no plot!! Get a new hobby!! |
Reviewed By: Kharon Alpua On: March 12, 2003 19:10 EST
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DooM_GazE: The British spellings of words are no less valid than the normal American ones.
Lord Archive:
Great series, I wish updates on the Domain were half as fast as here. I still have to read the last few chapters, but I love all of your work, and this is no exception.
I only wish my Future Lives stories were half as engaging or compelling as this series. Keep up the excellent work. |
Reviewed By: Foxxyman22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 03:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very good story, nice plot and very in-character.
I think the main problem is the spelling/grammer. There a few ackward sentences in this, as well as some glaring spelling/grammer mistakes.
I would suggest sending it to a prereader that actually checks for mistakes, not just comes back with "This Rocks!!" or such.
Overall, very nice. |
Reviewed By: Final_Xero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 18:47 EST
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Innnteresting... You're doing great still, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Things may have slowed a bit, but you've kept enough momentum to let us all know you're still trying. I bet you planned for that very situation from the beginning.
Well, gotta' get working on my own projects... |
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 13:24 EST
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Nice work, Archive. I am very impressed with your work. |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 07, 2003 13:18 EST
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Chapter 18:
That was a rather amusing chapter. I liked the excerpt at the end as well. I'm looking forward to when you manage to get chapter 19 up, if only because poor V-mon finally gets some action. |
Reviewed By: Izumi Ryu On: April 03, 2003 08:49 EST
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Alright, Advisor...You're just looking for something to rant about, and,personally, I don't like people like those. Every people I know that rant rant about things that happened to them, not go looking for it.
As for Archive's defense, I've read worse fics than this. At least, he tries to put SOMETHING behind it, which is why I continue to read his work. I've ran into quite a few that are just "People w/ People" and nothing else. If you want to rant to people who write those works, rant to them. Even flame my work, which I don't care, because I suck compared to Archive anyway.
You're missing the entire point of this fic, which I hate it when people do that to any work. If you can't get the point of it, then quit picking out the actions because they are happening. Archive is just one of the few people who would write work like this, which is why I respect him, as many others do.
Sorry for butting in, Archive, but people like Advisor just royally tick me off.
~~Izumi Ryu |
Reviewed By: Scarlet On: February 17, 2003 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god! That must have been the best Digimon saga I've ever read and or heard!
I practicly fainted at all the shocking twists and turns!
Dude you've got potential to make it in this bussiness.
I of course was a huge Digimon fan for about 4 years.But after rwading this I'm back with the Digi crew!
Keep writing man it's too good to lose! |
Reviewed By: boogie On: January 31, 2003 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic. You describe everything well and expecially the sex scenes are my favourite! Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: AznBud On: January 28, 2003 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a lovable romance between two would-be lovers. I'm gonna have to thank you for helping me with my own stories (even if they're a bit more erotic and comical). Your originality and creativity is actually very good, but there's a bit too much suspense until the end. Also, the setting of the story was a bit fumbled. However, a well written story that should entertain any teen. I'll challenge that award you have. Keep writing. You have talents for it.
AznBud - fellow writer |
Reviewed By: galrin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 20:54 EST
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Hello Lord Archive. Good story.
As for Takako, that's just a visiting cousin. She just read a few of the review and decided to key in her thoughts.
As for Digi-Advisor.
Egads man, you still post your reviews here? I thought you despised Lord Archive. Why are you still reading his stories? |
Reviewed By: Gpiggyking [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 09:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ingenious fic. Although there are a lot of fics out there where Kari gets pregnant, etc., your's has to be the best I've seen. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: March 16, 2003 08:52 EST
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*dies laughing* Love the Author's notes.
Great story, though I wish you'd left the NetChat scene in it's place. No matter. Looking forward to the next War Daries then |
Reviewed By: liz On: December 14, 2002 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really good and the best I have read, but no one is perfect so I am leaving room for you to improve upon. ;) Really good. I know you work really hard and I love reading your fics. Keep up the awesome work and if you feel like flaming my review my pen name is PTLiz at fanfiction.net.
-liz- |
Reviewed By: Nami On: November 14, 2002 22:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it and AWESOME fic! and Takari ROCKS!!! there is ALOT of things that prouve it too in 02. meh o well! dum flamers! they don;t know nuthin!! lol! ^-^ i am weird,,,yeah i know..meh o well! can't wait for the next chap! |
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