| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: NET [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 11:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you pair up the character. Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2001 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely a cut above most lemons that I've glanced at.
I'm no big fan of Digimon, but I gotta say that your declaration of characterization was very inspiring; but since I have no idea what the actual characterization is, I couldn't tell ya whether it's off or on...
Very good use of descriptive prose (at least in the first chapter, don't have time to read it all, I'm sad to say...) and Hikari's first-person rant/speech at the beginning... whew. There was only one thing missing, though: a motto. For the first chapter, I'd nominate:
"It's not the years that get you, love, it's the mileage."
-Derek Croft
I'll read the rest when I get the chance, so stay tuned! |
Reviewed By: MayokeOni On: September 28, 2001 01:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story. A hentai with a plot: A new and exciting concept! lol, just a little sarcasm. Excellent use of the characters. Really true to they're portral in the show. I'm eager to see where this is going. . .
~*MayokeOni*~ |
Reviewed By: The DJ Jester On: October 21, 2001 22:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
*blinks eyes with complete and utter loving of this fic.* THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The DJ Jester |
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