| "Red Digivice Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: Long time reader On: May 05, 2013 22:42 EDT
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Oh wow...it's been some time since I've read this, and I see it's been updated. Hopefully, we'll get another update sooner than 2015? ;) But seriously, I liked this most recent chapter....it kind of focuses less on the sex and more on the character psyches . Regarding the previous chapter, the one thing that stuck out was the Joe/Mimi/Micheal threesome. I think there could be some very good character backstory to work in how Mimi cares for both Micheal and Joe....especially since I have a hunch that Hikari won't be the only pregnant Chosen by the end of this series. |
Title: Yay a new chapter!
Reviewed By: anoncomp On: November 30, 2012 14:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read the new chapter yet, but I just wanted to comment saying how glad I am this got updated for the first time in almost 3 years. So damn happy. Hard to believe I started reading this over 10 years ago. |
Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: knowall7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2012 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an enjoyable story to read. I hope you continue it soon. I would love to see what else happens to the Chosens' lives especially Hikari and Takeru becoming parents. |
Title: Review
Reviewed By: Maighdayln On: November 01, 2011 09:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but im really looking forward to seeing Hikari having her baby and the good times and struggles TK and Hikari have with that. I also want to see where Tai and Sora's relationship leads amazing writing btw :)Also i feel sorry for Matt having the one person he loves loving someone else and having that slammed in your face everyday :( |
Title: All Good...
Reviewed By: TakeruAddiction On: July 25, 2011 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reaaaaaaaally loved this fic, well parts of it anyway... Although I might say that some Daisuke bits were disturbing in many ways, I mean Jeez he can be so horny some times... However, the Takari moments were just fantastic, what can day... I ADORE TAKERU, ahahaha. Although, you really need to update !!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dcis1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2011 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about for your next chapter you mack it about Miyako explore her lesbien or bisex nature with a girl from class you would never think she was into that stuff,make the girl nerdy but with a great body that you can't in her school uniform. Well I hope you like the idea.from dcis1@Yahoo.com |
Title: Great as ever
Reviewed By: COMP239 On: September 08, 2010 04:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For those of you wondering if you should bother reading this: YES. It is incredibly satisfying and has built up a dense continuity around it that is just as entertaining. Out of all the TV/Comic/Fanfic series I am following right now I hope this reaches concludes more than any other. I have been waiting years to find out what happens to Hikari, Takeru and the others and I am just as invested as ever.
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Reviewed By: BLACKMAN On: May 02, 2010 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's like the slumberparty chapter with games and sex but no girl with girl and Mimi with the powers of an empath and yet she didn't Know Micheal's feelings for her were more then a crush but he realy loved her,that tells me that either she's not good at her powers or Micheal is confused about his feelings.It dose happen You know.Oh and to be fair Jyou should have threesome with Mimi and Another Girl.Just to be fair. NEXT TIME!
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Dephs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank god for the update. It's been far too long since an update and I can't wait for War Dairies to update either. I had kind of given up hope, but I was incredibly happy to see this. Keep on working and I hope to see an update soon! Dephs
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: December 30, 2009 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Digimon isn't that interesting to me, but your storyverse is interesting, especially with its serious tone. Thanks for the time and effort
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: guy1988 On: December 25, 2009 13:21 EST
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Wow... his finally updated after this long. This is truly a Christmas miracle.
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Title: Waiting patiently for more
Reviewed By: digitalmeister [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 17:36 EDT
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I have been a fan since a friend of mine showed me this series when shortly before I graduated High School. I would love to see the end to it, if at all possible! What else can I say other than this is an amazing work!
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Title: E>matt
Reviewed By: sick gay XD On: November 10, 2008 12:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
matt is gay,that im gay too,nothing wrong with gays.its like the best way of putting him,but cody should get a bigger part and david should have....nvm,loldirty though,lol,anyway,TK and kari best veiw,or should i say mr and mrs kamiya,i would have loved to see matt and the bi guy from his band get together...sick twisted mind of mine likes yaoi,so what...
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Title: Reminder
Reviewed By: metaletemon27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This series popped back into my head, so I went back and read my favorite parts again. What a shame you've left it for dead. I would finish it myself if I wasn't presently occupied with life. I guess I should beg you to finish. A phenomenal series such as this is too special to leave hanging. Any sort of closure would leave me satisfied. I'm down on all fours. End it, please! I beg of you, my Lord!
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Title: Does not forgive!
Reviewed By: Annonymous On: May 02, 2007 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Chosen aren't horny sluts. They're underaged children. Fighting in a war doesn't mean they're ready to have sex and have babies. Justifying their behavior by saying everyone in Japan does it is bull. Do you happen to have articles about the affects of fighting in a war has on children with Digital Monsters and the affects that has on their psyche? What about having naturally unusually colored hair and eyes? What about sweatdrops and stress marks and all that? Way to kill characterization for the sake of sex. I'll give this to you though: you put more thought into excusing everyone having sex out of character far better than nearly all other PWP lemon writer's I've seen. Must be why this story's so popular: a plot loaded with enough sex and BS to blind most people to the glaring flaws. Random group of teenagers in an article =/= characters in an anime that's supposed to be larger than life. Lol internets?
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