| "He Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap u updated! lol.took me FOREVER to get on my laptop.Great chapters,lovin the fic.keep up the good work! P.S. Inu is so fluckin HOT lol.update soon k sexy c? ^_^
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Reviewed By: naomi-nicole On: January 03, 2006 22:01 CST
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This is such a great story and i thought it was sweet and heartbreaking the way Inuyasha had a heart attack. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: EnvyEyes@ On: January 02, 2006 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to write so more Inuyasha and Kagome need to be together and why at make Kagome stronger I'm not flaming you but please do it.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight (nsi) On: January 02, 2006 00:46 CST
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whew...nice mir/san action...man...even though it's dead winter...I might need to turn on the AC...man that was hott!!! can't wait for your next update!!!
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Reviewed By: Ared On: January 01, 2006 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't think of this as a flame or anything, it is actual criticism for your work. I thought your story would have been more enjoyable if Kagome would actually start speaking her mind like the woman she supposedly is. In your story, you make her out to be a sexual fiend, and only sex sustains her, as well as physical attraction. You make her out to be stuck up and ungrateful for the life she was given. I find your style of writing to be interesting even without the sex in the chapter, so stop calling it lame and just practice more on your details and descriptions, they are not "LAME", okay? Also, you might want to check your grammar and spelling because they are becoming atrocious. The characters are also OOC. I think no character should be OOC because the names of these characters are based on a story Takahashi created, in which case the characteristics of these characters should be kept consistent. One more thing, Kagome should be a stronger character, because when I started reading the first chapter of this fic, I got the notion that she WAS a strong person, but the way you've made her really disappointed me. Please strengthen her character. Thank you. Otherwise, I thought your story was pretty interesting.
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Title: Bring in 2006 with a review!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 01:26 CST
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Do that shit girl! Sango & Miro was getting their swerve on, lol. But you know we're feenin' to know what InuYasha's going through. Ungh. So much damn drama!! Thanks for the righteous shout out too, you rawk! Happy new year & all the very best for 2006!!!
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Reviewed By: jazzyfazz On: December 31, 2005 01:23 CST
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Ohhh I want Inuyasha and Kagome to be together! Plz update sooooonnn!!!
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 14:21 CST
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god if the drama is on the way get on with it already!!!!!! TT_TT *twitch* must. . .read. . .more
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Title: .......
Reviewed By: agoobwah On: December 29, 2005 11:15 CST
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OMG UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 03:22 CST
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Nah even though it was a weal filler chapter it was still pretty darn good. Great writing, and I can't wait for the drama to come in the upcoming chapters. Luv ur story!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 27, 2005 18:06 CST
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Kags better get her crap together! Hell, the last time there was a game, he had her behind the bleachers! She needs a little more of that :P A joy as always Sexy C, i'm ready for the drama!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: darkmoon_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! i was squealing i love the ficcy so much!!! So clad you finally decided to updat...i've been following the fic sence the begining Lol. And good god...i almost freaked i thought that was the end! I love the orignal pairings...thought you did a Kag/Houj Well Keep up the good work and i'll be looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Momiji'sGurlie On: December 20, 2005 18:28 CST
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O.O OMG Nooooooo dont have them get married!!! Inu is supposed to be with Kagome >.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Darksaint On: December 19, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is Drama, Drama and more Drama and guess what I love it! I really do hope Hojo does marry Kagome, I knew there was so much more than just a nice boy. Poor Inuyasha I hope he will be okay. Please update real soon your fan, Darksaint
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Reviewed By: EK! On: December 11, 2005 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
REST ON THE FACT! NO! I gotta know what happens! KAG AND HOJO CAN'T GET MARRIED! She clearly needs Inuyasha and despite the fact I believe you'll make it right, it's wrong to tease this way! Update soon, I'm dying.
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