| "He Will Be Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ginny On: February 14, 2006 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
greeeaatttt stuff. are the song lyrics yours? or is it an actual recorded song?
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Reviewed By: CMM On: February 13, 2006 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you would do that to Yash. He poured his soul out to Kagome and SHE MISSED IT! It's like a betrayl. And what's with her skippin college for a deal that could, in reality, bottom out. College stays with you forever, fame is but a fleeting dream. Hojo is such a spiteful asshole. If you know someone isn't in love with you and that they and someone else you are related to, or care closely for, love eachother and would complete eachother would you really stand in the way of that? I guess I'm just rooting for Kag and Inu, but damn if Hojo isn't bastard. You keep making it seem like things will never workout, my poor little heart can't take it, and I'm sure Inu's right there with me. Please update soon, and with GOOD news. Please. CMM
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Title: He Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 13:07 CST
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WOW!! Superb job!! Another chapter well done! Kagome can't be moving in with Homo...it's just....not right in the world. I hope Kagome doesn't give InuYasha another heart attack...that would be too much. THey have to get toghether...I soooo can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: Az On: February 12, 2006 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! i was looking through your fanfics cuz inugrrrl suggested you and its now 1:07am in the morning and i've spent all day reading your fic - YOU'RE AMAZING!!!! omg! it pricked my heart so many times and left me in tears, you're an unbelievable writer! though if you don't mind me saying you need to stop moving from pass tense to present tense during paragraphs but i'm not one to judge fics on silly grammar mistakes, you're an awesome story teller and you make the emotions come to life! this is now one of my favourite fics and i'm eagerly awaiting your next update, but till then i'll be checking out your other fics, update soon!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yasha. So sad. Well this was a great update, and I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm starting to like Hojo a lot less and less nowadays.And I already read Shades of Gray. Great story too. ;-)
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Title: NOOOOO!!! SEXY C!!!! YOU'RE KILLING ME!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: February 12, 2006 03:33 CST
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This chap was so deep & i'm so damn hurt! Girl, you really did me in with this one. My InuYasha *snuggles him* kagome is on my last damn nerve! Stop falling for all of Hojo's shit! You whine about loving Inu & then he dangles some shit in front of you like a carrot in front of a horse and u soak it up like a sponge. Fucking dingleberry! Excellent chappie, sexy_C. The poetry was awesomeness & the whole chap was so damn angsty. The kinda shit ya love to hate. Well done!! 0.~
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Reviewed By: fabzz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait till u update!!!!!
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Title: Noooo!!!!
Reviewed By: Stupid IdiotB On: February 11, 2006 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooo!!!!! the story is really good, update sooner rather than later. I really want to know what happens next, and i'm sure a lot of other pepople want to know too, sooo please hurry and update soon.
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 11, 2006 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amazing! I really feel for yasha. I don't like hojo, is it just me or does it seem like he's just trying to force kaggie to love him or be with him? any way that's what i think.I realllllllllyyyyyyy love this story and hope you write more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Quisty1506 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG poor inu! are they ever gonna be together? damn hojo! *cries* great chappie,sad but great.update soon pwease? ^_^
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight not signed in at the moment because she doesn't feel like going through this every time just to write a review On: February 11, 2006 21:51 CST
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*stabs hojo repeatedly* die die DIE... can ya tell i dont like him? neway great chappie... sad chappie... man, kaggie needs 2 leave stupid hojo n go bak 2 inu!!!
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo (nsi) On: February 11, 2006 20:38 CST
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AHHH! that made my heart so sad D=. I feel like crying right now! It's so horrible, it's good. Hell. Good can't even begin to describe it. Keep up the good work! Ja ne! Ao
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Reviewed By: inuluv On: February 01, 2006 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story please update
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Title: He Will Be Loved
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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