| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 23:03 CDT
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noooo!!! you fucking bastard don't leave a good story hanging like that!! *lets out a deep breath* sorry about that. but yeah this is a real good story. don't take the fucking bastard part offensivly. i say it to everyone, they are normal conversation words to me. you have a great head on those shoulders of yours. keep it up.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Zach On: August 22, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i must say if she died in the past it doesnt matter because she is from the future, so she still died after she was born, just that she was born again because time passed back to when she was born, think of it like a loop as BACK TO THE FUTURE, as you said b4...i just think time doesnt matter, the person's lifeline does...(like if u come from the future to interact with urself, if the future you dies the past one doesnt so its not much different, just that in this case the future one is in the farther past because of the well) does that make any sense? ur story seems fine 2 me, not confusing at all lol story is really great, i cant wait 2 read the rest of it, i know ur busy tho so no rush..
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Reviewed By: Inu/Kag,Mir/San,Sess/Rin 4ever On: August 20, 2005 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God,I never told that Kagome would be going something like that. Please hurry up and write a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: August 19, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods! You must update soon please i must know what happens next. This is a great story update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 13:04 CDT
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Okay, yeah, I guess I pretty much feel the same way as MiSz_InU, so please try to get over the writer's block soon.
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 04:03 CDT
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oh man, i was so looking forward to reading a new chapter but i understand. just dont take TOO long ^_^ great story
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter can't wait till you write the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! You updated! And I see a lemon in the near future...well no duh, you only said that! Well continue to update because this story is really awesome!
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Reviewed By: demonic gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!! plz update!!
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally awesome...I love how you made Kagome into Tomi...but it didn't take but the first chapter for me to figure it out...I think you made that too easy...lol...I wonder whats going to happen next...please update soon...I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: August 07, 2005 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! Its a great story!!
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Reviewed By: paulsgirl On: August 06, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! The thing with Kagome and Tomi was a bit confusing at first but I get it now. I'm just glad her and Inuyasha are together! Please update soon!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 23:03 CDT
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I love it, i'm just confused about one thing... does Kagome become the reincarnation of herself?
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Title: Definitely kept me on edge
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed reading that. the irony of the story truly makes it very intriguing. i wasn't expecting Kagome to end up being Tomi. Inuyasha would never intentionally injure Kagome but other than that the story is great!
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