| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 11:49 CDT
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I like your story and think you should update real soon!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's getting very exicting I can't wait until the next chapter. So I gess InuYasha was still pin to the tree and Kagome found him and so on.... so that part didn't change after she fell to throw the well during the last 50 some years in the past when she was Tomi. Kikyo still pin him to the tree before she died with the jewel. I love your story it's very good. Keep up the good work until next time
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo stole the chapter with the "And I'm the walking dead" line. It would be better without the "That has to be weird for me to say that" after, though, as it's somewhat redundant. Anyway, as a more general comment, this fic is a wild ride better than Mr. Toad's.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please wirte MORE!!!!!Its getting very very very interesting! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Siriusly Insane On: July 28, 2005 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn ya! ^^ I hate cliffy's! I wanna know what happens next *whines* You were right in the beginning: I don't like this cliffy! Its worse than ALL cliffy's put together! I hope Kagome doen't hurt herself from falling in the well like that! I mean, usually, when she jumps in its feet first, but there she went backwards... She disdn't land too hard, I suppose, if she could hug Kouga! ^^
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Reviewed By: Chey On: July 28, 2005 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please do continue this story. I enjoy it greatly.
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Reviewed By: lynn_luvya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!!! But whin you wright the next chapter will you wright me at Lynn_luvya@yahoo.com so I con read it.
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Reviewed By: Erina On: July 27, 2005 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. I love how you have twisted the plot of the original Inuyasha story into what you have written. I can't wait till you write more.
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 21:42 CDT
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Very Good writing- you had me glued to the edge of my sat!! Please keep it up!!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Sessy wants rin and rin alone On: July 22, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not to be flamer but Inuyasha wouldn't hit Kagome period i like the story but i can get over the fact that inu would do that well later much
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is amazing. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: July 19, 2005 08:51 CDT
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The story is moving along very well. You're doing a great job with it and I can't wait to read more. Thanks again for sharing it with us and please update soon.
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Title: About the Fic
Reviewed By: Xx_SaNgO_xX On: July 18, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice, WRITE MORE!!!.....please? *innocent voice* :P
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 12:14 CDT
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*shudders* That warning at the begining was valid! *shudders* I feel very grimy after this chapter! Well done! So this is the next twist to the storyline...will she tell InuYasha? If she did, no doubt he would willingly kill the jerk for her!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: melfire63-not logged in On: July 17, 2005 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is a great fic! u need to update as soon as possible, and yes onigumo must die!!!! plz email me when u update at white_thing_one@yahoo.com thanx a much! mel
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