| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting events... not much info between kagome & kikyo's talk... who was kikyo talking to... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: fluffydemongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 02:07 CDT
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holy shit thats my kind of story. i like how kikyo is kind of a hoe and her and miroku have a thing going on. i also like how everyone is hanging out togeather and not killing each other. my only critisism so far is that koga should have had like a super hissy fit when he herd that inu and kags were mates. by the way alot of the storys i read don't really have many humorus moments but in about every chapter i laugh out loud multiple times. i think youre a great writer and should update SOON. P.S i live on updates. please feed me!
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Reviewed By: LizzzA On: June 20, 2009 03:52 CDT
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Ahh! Now I'll have to be checking up on this story everyday...crazy good cliffhanger! :) please update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Please pdate! this story is amazing! i read all 17 chapters in a couple of hours! i really want to know more...please continue and update!! this Fic is FANTASTIC!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why can I picture Kikyou in short shorts (with black sun glasses for some reason...) its kinda disturbing that I visualise it so well. great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... certain events havejust gotten complicated... lots of action and drama... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness...I thought you died! I hope you finish this wonderfull story.
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 20:43 CDT
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Hi! I'm glad that you updated, I love this fic so far! However, I think there may be a missing chapter between chapters 6 and 7... both have the same chapter contents but different titles. Mispost, maybe? Please update as soon as you are able! Thanks for sharing this!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 03:24 CST
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i cant wait till u update ^-^
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Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: October 26, 2007 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is wonderful. Totally orginal. I like it alot. Keep going. I can't wait to see how this will all play out. Two thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: kittenclaws [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story heck I love all your stories. I have been reading this story since last year and it get better everytime for the simple fact that it is different from all the rest. I get so tired of the same old same but with your stories thats not a problem. I am not going to beg you to update because I hate it when people do that. All I wanted to say was great story awesome plot loves it laterz
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: April 09, 2006 02:44 CDT
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Never Mind I think I figured it out. Okay first we have the Original Timeline back 553 years Were the timeline is the same as the Tv Show one and my guess is that Kikyo falls out of love with Onigumo and develops feelings for Inuyasha because there is no Tomiko. Then we have the timetravel timeline were Original Kagome timetravels and in this timeline Tomiko is not known and the timeline goes like the Show, and Original Kagome cuts her hair because she doesn't want to be associated with Kikyo and wants to be herself, then the well sends her back 553 years. Were we now have the Altered Original timeline were Tomiko is known and she stays away from Onigumo and causes Inuyasha to fall for her, which means that Kikyo will not fall out of love with Onigumo and develop feelings for Inuyasha because he now has someone. And kills Kagome and (now this is were I figure how Kagome can be a reincarnation of herself) and since Kagome is in the past her Soul gets rerouted back into the now Altered Kagome. Were we now have the Altered Timetravel Line because now Inuyasha is not pining for Kikyo but his lost mate Tomiko, and now he treats Kagome differently, and she feels she has no identity were this she cuts her hair not to look like Kikyo but to have her own identity. And then the well sends her back in time to the Altered Original timeline. Were she now creates an Altered-Altered Original timeline becasue she doesn't avoid Onigumo and lets Inuyasha claim her and this time Naraku has, unlike the Altered Original timeline Naraku,now desires Tomiko/Kagome but she survives her encounter with Naraku and gets sent back the Altered Timetravel timeline. Which now becomes the Altered-Altered Timetravel timeline because the memories become updated with what she has done in the Altered-Altered Original timeline. Thats like 6 Timelines interwoven together or maybe 5. Sorry the computer didn't load it correctly
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: April 09, 2006 02:42 CDT
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Never Mind I think I figured it out. Okay first we have the Original Timeline back 553 years Were the timeline is the same as the Tv Show one and my guess is that Kikyo falls out of love with Onigumo and develops feelings for Inuyasha because there is no Tomiko. Then we have the timetravel timeline were Original Kagome timetravels and in this timeline Tomiko is not known and the timeline goes like the Show, and Original Kagome cuts her hair because she doesn't want to be associated with Kikyo and wants to be herself, then the well sends her back 553 years. Were we now have the Altered Original timeline were Tomiko is known and she stays away from Onigumo and causes Inuyasha to fall for her, which means that Kikyo will not fall out of love with Onigumo and develop feelings for Inuyasha because he now has someone. And kills Kagome and (now this is were I figure how Kagome can be a reincarnation of herself) and since Kagome is in the past her Soul gets rerouted back into the now Altered Kagome. Were we now have the Altered Timetravel Line because now Inuyasha is not pining for Kikyo but his lost mate Tomiko, and now he treats Kagome differently, and she feels she has no identity were this she cuts her hair not to look like Kikyo but to have her own identity. And then the well sends her back in time to the Altered Original timeline. Were she now creates an Altered-Altered Original timeline becasue she doesn't avoid Onigumo and lets Inuyasha claim her and this time Naraku has, unlike the Altered Original timeline Naraku,now desires Tomiko/Kagome but she survives her encounter with Naraku and gets sent back the Altered Timetravel timeline. Which now becomes the Altered-Altered Timetravel timeline because the memories become updated with what she has done in the Altered-Altered Original timeline. Thats like 6 Timelines interwoven together or maybe 5.
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: March 25, 2006 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused about how Kagome can be a reincarnation of Herself. I can understand going through time the first time but why would her previous self cut her hair if that previous self never heard of 'Tomi' the first time and wouldn't the events before her previous self going back in time an extra 50 years be slightly different than the current Kagome experienced. *blinks and shakes head* This time paradox thing is so confusing like if how if Kagome got Inuyasha's ageing ability and got stuck in the Fuedal Era and lives to the modern time which means until the other Kagome got stuck there would be two Kagome's.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 14:21 CST
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Sesshomaru subsists entirely on dry martinis.
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