| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Erina On: July 27, 2005 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. I love how you have twisted the plot of the original Inuyasha story into what you have written. I can't wait till you write more.
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 21:42 CDT
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Very Good writing- you had me glued to the edge of my sat!! Please keep it up!!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Sessy wants rin and rin alone On: July 22, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not to be flamer but Inuyasha wouldn't hit Kagome period i like the story but i can get over the fact that inu would do that well later much
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is amazing. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: July 19, 2005 08:51 CDT
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The story is moving along very well. You're doing a great job with it and I can't wait to read more. Thanks again for sharing it with us and please update soon.
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Title: About the Fic
Reviewed By: Xx_SaNgO_xX On: July 18, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice, WRITE MORE!!!.....please? *innocent voice* :P
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 12:14 CDT
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*shudders* That warning at the begining was valid! *shudders* I feel very grimy after this chapter! Well done! So this is the next twist to the storyline...will she tell InuYasha? If she did, no doubt he would willingly kill the jerk for her!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: melfire63-not logged in On: July 17, 2005 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is a great fic! u need to update as soon as possible, and yes onigumo must die!!!! plz email me when u update at white_thing_one@yahoo.com thanx a much! mel
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Title: ch 3 revised
Reviewed By: pawz On: July 16, 2005 16:36 CDT
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I must say that I approve of your revisions. Great storyline! Very original for here. Hope you get more reviews.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: July 16, 2005 14:17 CDT
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Chapter three is great. I hope to read chapter 4 later today. Thanks for updating again!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: July 15, 2005 12:43 CDT
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I look forward to reading more. I like it so far and I hope you update soon. ^_^
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Title: Harsh
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but hate that Inuyasha hurt Kagome...no more of that and I'd say you have a great story!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 19:34 CDT
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Honestly...I think it's okay that Kagome knows Inuyasha's mate's name. That part is fine. I still think she would see Kikyou in the mirror instead of 'Tomi', because I'm assuming that Kikyou and Inuyasha are close and united in your story because they both are avenging Tomi's death and are both getting revenge for Naraku's trickery, which caused Kikyou's death too and caused Inuyasha to be pinned to the tree. So Kagome is really jealous of Kikyou's and Inuyasha's closeness which she assumes has grown into love? So she'd still 'see' Kikyou in the mirror. But what I really can't swallow at all is Inuyasha hitting Kagome for any reason. Whatever else they may be feeling, they were once friends, and no matter what, Inuyasha has never deliberated hurt a human woman -- they remind him of his mother. That part -- Inuyasha actually hitting Kagome -- ruined it for me. I didn't get past it. You asked to tell you if we liked the new version. Well, yes and no. I also noticed that your AFF Version 1.0 was better then your MM.org Version 1.0 in a few word choices. Keep one master copy and always upload the same version on all sites that you post on. I liked this concept and I hope you continue with it. Still, I can't accept that Inuyasha would ever hit a human woman, and I know that Kagome would never forgive him unless he was possessed at the time since they are no longer close. I'll be glad to let you bounce ideas off me if you'd like. wj ( SoutasSister soutas.sister@gmail.com )
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 17:47 CDT
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Original and I like it so far. The scene with Inuyasha and Kagome on the roof was very good. I liked how he reacted to her scent. Does this mean he has been fighting the pull of her scent during the years after she removed Kikyou's arrow and freed him from the God Tree. Very interesting. I hope you update again very soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: firebird234 On: July 12, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like this story I hope the Author continues to write it. It will be interesting to see Kagome get Inuyasha of 50 years past to fall in love with her.
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