| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! You updated! And I see a lemon in the near future...well no duh, you only said that! Well continue to update because this story is really awesome!
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Reviewed By: demonic gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!! plz update!!
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally awesome...I love how you made Kagome into Tomi...but it didn't take but the first chapter for me to figure it out...I think you made that too easy...lol...I wonder whats going to happen next...please update soon...I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: August 07, 2005 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! Its a great story!!
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Reviewed By: paulsgirl On: August 06, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! The thing with Kagome and Tomi was a bit confusing at first but I get it now. I'm just glad her and Inuyasha are together! Please update soon!
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, i'm just confused about one thing... does Kagome become the reincarnation of herself?
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Title: Definitely kept me on edge
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed reading that. the irony of the story truly makes it very intriguing. i wasn't expecting Kagome to end up being Tomi. Inuyasha would never intentionally injure Kagome but other than that the story is great!
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Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 11:49 CDT
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I like your story and think you should update real soon!
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's getting very exicting I can't wait until the next chapter. So I gess InuYasha was still pin to the tree and Kagome found him and so on.... so that part didn't change after she fell to throw the well during the last 50 some years in the past when she was Tomi. Kikyo still pin him to the tree before she died with the jewel. I love your story it's very good. Keep up the good work until next time
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo stole the chapter with the "And I'm the walking dead" line. It would be better without the "That has to be weird for me to say that" after, though, as it's somewhat redundant. Anyway, as a more general comment, this fic is a wild ride better than Mr. Toad's.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please wirte MORE!!!!!Its getting very very very interesting! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Siriusly Insane On: July 28, 2005 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn ya! ^^ I hate cliffy's! I wanna know what happens next *whines* You were right in the beginning: I don't like this cliffy! Its worse than ALL cliffy's put together! I hope Kagome doen't hurt herself from falling in the well like that! I mean, usually, when she jumps in its feet first, but there she went backwards... She disdn't land too hard, I suppose, if she could hug Kouga! ^^
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Reviewed By: Chey On: July 28, 2005 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please do continue this story. I enjoy it greatly.
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Reviewed By: lynn_luvya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!!! But whin you wright the next chapter will you wright me at Lynn_luvya@yahoo.com so I con read it.
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