| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 12:23 CDT
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excellent...i especially like the fact that Kagomes mom walked in on them...keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl (nli) On: September 06, 2005 17:46 CDT
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biggest embarrasment ever, mom walking in on something like that....wow, update again soon please.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 (not logged in) On: September 06, 2005 15:57 CDT
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omg....that most have been horrible...her mom walking in on them right before they climax...lol...that was so funny...I can't wait for the next chapter...update soon...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: Pryia On: August 27, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story and i hope you update angin soon but i just want to say danm you didn't have to do Kikiyo that way in chapter11 you made her like a super hoe. But anyway love you story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: August 26, 2005 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Kikyo is a little slut.Keep write your story is getting interesting.Not that it already wasn't being your own reincarnation sound kinda cool.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 18:07 CDT
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really good fic, update again soon please
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Reviewed By: either or On: August 26, 2005 16:31 CDT
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you sick bastard lol
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Title: WOWWW
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU(nli) On: August 25, 2005 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*picks up jaw that had dropped onto the floor* THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING.
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 23:03 CDT
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noooo!!! you fucking bastard don't leave a good story hanging like that!! *lets out a deep breath* sorry about that. but yeah this is a real good story. don't take the fucking bastard part offensivly. i say it to everyone, they are normal conversation words to me. you have a great head on those shoulders of yours. keep it up.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Zach On: August 22, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i must say if she died in the past it doesnt matter because she is from the future, so she still died after she was born, just that she was born again because time passed back to when she was born, think of it like a loop as BACK TO THE FUTURE, as you said b4...i just think time doesnt matter, the person's lifeline does...(like if u come from the future to interact with urself, if the future you dies the past one doesnt so its not much different, just that in this case the future one is in the farther past because of the well) does that make any sense? ur story seems fine 2 me, not confusing at all lol story is really great, i cant wait 2 read the rest of it, i know ur busy tho so no rush..
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Reviewed By: Inu/Kag,Mir/San,Sess/Rin 4ever On: August 20, 2005 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God,I never told that Kagome would be going something like that. Please hurry up and write a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: August 19, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods! You must update soon please i must know what happens next. This is a great story update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 13:04 CDT
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Okay, yeah, I guess I pretty much feel the same way as MiSz_InU, so please try to get over the writer's block soon.
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: MiSz_InU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 04:03 CDT
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oh man, i was so looking forward to reading a new chapter but i understand. just dont take TOO long ^_^ great story
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter can't wait till you write the new chapter.
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