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| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Title: This is very good
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to say that this story is excellent. I do love the epic style.
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 06:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
congrats, ill vote, when i find out how to vote. -_-;;....whatever cookie you want.
| Title: WOOOOW
Reviewed By: Emily Higurashi On: February 21, 2006 21:37 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey, FarAwayEyes! I haven't been able to read the fic in a while - my computer went all whacko, long story - anyway I just read the latest chapter and I am LOVING all this protective, nuzzling stuff between Sesshy and Rin! Oh, it's adorable!!!! Sesshy sounds like my older brother with all that protective stuff and trying to kill the boy lol! You're a very good writer, btw - I was, like, gagging while reading about the boy lol Anyway keep up the good work! Great Chapter
| Reviewed By: Susy On: February 06, 2006 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi there! I ain't used to write reviews because I'm very lazy, but I decided that you're worth the work. I read more than 40 chapters in a sit. Well, actually, it took me several days, but I read them. I really enjoy your story, I think it's really original, basically because I'm not familiarized with the other show, book or whatever it is that you're using to do the crossover, although that many estrange names confuse me very much. It took me around five chapters to realize that Belgarath, the old wolf and Polgara's father was the same person. I like your fic very much, but It seems to me that Sesshomaru is very OOC, (surely you've been told that all ready) but it's really sweet to see him so affectionate towards Rin. speaking of which, as if wasn't enough for her to being a wizard and the start of her periods, now you put over her shoulders the biggest problem that women have been facing from the beginning of life: men. Although it's obvious that she's not going to be as affected as her lord will. Well, nobody told the demon lord that raising a girl was going to be a walk in the park. Right? And two observation about InuYasha. I believe that I read in one of the chapters that you said that InuYasha is 70 years old, but I've understood that the boy is almost 200, since he had around 150 years when he met Kikyo plus the 50 years that he spend sealed in the tree. Besides, I'm not comfortable with the idea that he's killed some humans. True, they deserved it. But the point is that the half demon avoids at all cost to kill humans, because as Totosai said once, to assassinate humans is something vile. And what is worse, Kagome has also killed someone, and that is impossible to understand. To vanish youkais is a thing, to kill a man is totally different. But I guess you know what you're doing. I'd like to see you include Kouga at some point, it would be hilarious to see the reaction of both rivals with Kagome's new condition. Ok. I'm in the ride and I'm going to get to the end of the journey with you. You trapped me from the very beginning and it's been terrific to follow the story. I don't think that I'll review again, because as I said at the beginning, I'm lazy and in addition to that English is not my native language and it becomes difficult to give me to understand (excuse me the spelling and grammar mistakes) but know this: YOU ROCK
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 17:34 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again, i really love this, you could be a great author,sesshoumaru's a bit possesave eh? You desueve a cookie *gives cookie*. anyway PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON *gets on hands and knees to beg*
| Title: kareemachan
Reviewed By: kareemachan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 07:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I admit that I rolled my eyes when I read your story's synopsis on the fan-fic page. I really didn't think you could mix the two stories together successfully. Boy was I wrong! But that meant when I finally did read it, I got to read what you've written so far as a whole, adding to my enjoyment. The stories do mix, the characters are nicely delineated and sustained through the story, and (blessed be!) your grammar and spelling are impeccable. Not only has this given me a new story to look forward to, but I'm going to have to go back and re-read Edding's Belgariad series again; it's been a while!
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 14:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i ment cheater at the game kagome, kagome...i just finshed the belgariad. i do think silk and miroku make very good friends . i wonder what the juggler and vella are doing...^_~...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
| Reviewed By: Kitboxer On: January 13, 2006 12:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
update.
| Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 11:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story. I hope you do well in the contest. This fic is certainly worthy of any awards it receives. You have developed the characters well and I continue to look forward to each and every update. Good luck!!
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 15:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just get better and better.....inuyasha is a cheater BAD....UPDATE SOON PLEASE.im on the last book
| Reviewed By: Sandyin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 02:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off your evil. I've stayed up till dawn the last few days reading from start to where you are now. Now I have to say at the start I was a little thrown off, but this is easily turning into one of my favorite stories, and will be reread. You've made the characters grow in several differnet ways I havn't seen before, and it's interesting how you've kept it all in line. Over all great work and I hope to read some more of it soon.
| Title: Good chapter
Reviewed By: Bate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 09:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! I really liked the way you mixed Shippo into the relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome, and the playfullness of the whole chapter... Yeah, I do believe I'll look into those books. It sounds like a cool world... And a Happy New year to you!
| Reviewed By: Bate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 23:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Absolutely love it! I haven't read/heard the original stories that you've crossed Inuyasha with, but I think it's brilliant! You write wery well, it's easy to follow the story, with a good plot, and a nice drive in it... Can barely wait for the next chapter(s)..!
| Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: December 22, 2005 19:38 PST
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oh man, that was some fantastic lime right there!!!! and i agree theyre not ready yet, im just impatient lol. Great job! And I'm so excited to see where this story will go as it approached month nine!!! :D Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the belgariad so far.im in the second book.i wont be able to rad 4 about two weeks cause im going to florida.but still UPDATE LOTS poor shippo.iv also started a new story.....now when i get back there shoould be al leats 3 new chapters.PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEE
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