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| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] | | Pages (19): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 › » ] | Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: April 05, 2006 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well since aff is still not working properly I'll just review on here. I didn't like this chapter very much, but I just don't like Jaken. I understand though that this is filler and is necessary. And I think I've figured it out. I went back and pretty much re-read the entire story, I noticed that you made a mistake too. Inuyasha tore the scarf when he first saw Kag after she was attcked. But oh well. Anyway that voice in Inu's head, it's that damn orb isn't it? That's why it told him to talk to Garion cuz the orb talks to Garion. And I think I understand the whole thing between Sess and Rin now. Well update soon ok ja!!!
| Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:40 PDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Drama Fiction" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 01, 2006 18:51 PST
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When I read this story, I would have thought that what you just wrote was something I miss when I was watching the Inuyasha eposide on Sesshoumaru. I would have wished that they would wrote more about Inu's brother because he is such an awesome character. I was wondering did you made up Sess jounrey traveling Japan or did you read it from its creator because the way you described how he existed was so realistic that I thought I miss reading or seeing any of Inu eposides and movie (trust I seen them all in Japanese version). Great chapter as all ways and I hope the next chapter will be Sess my favorite. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 00:44 PST
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Hey Zelix. I just wanted to tell you that I remembered why I had not been reading your fic. I'm not familiar with the characters outside of Inuyasha and they were introduced so quickly that I couldn't keep them straight. So I guess that I need to read the other category or something in order to truly appreciate your fic for what it is. However, I have read everything that you have posted and really enjoyed it even though I kept getting the characters mixed up. I read it all in one sitting and remembered quite a bit from when you had first posted it on AFF. Inuyasha and Kagome need to get over their insecurities. It's beginning to feel almost narcissistic. They've made some progress, but like most humans, keep hitting the same pothole over and over again. Something needs to wake those two up before it becomes imperative that they have total and complete trust, which is where I'm sure that you are leading. Sometimes I just want to slap both of them. Hehe. See, I am getting into the characters that I know. I like the metal smith. He intrigues me. Oh, so does Rin and Sesshoumaru's relationship. Hehe, I wonder if she will change her features to look more 'womanly' now that she has discovered her new powers--which by the way are totally awesome. I like the varied powers that the other characters possess. Love the wolf. Oh my, and I loved the battle where Sesshoumaru lost it. There are a lot of places that really excited me and I will probably read up on the other characters. Love ya, Snow
| Title: goood!
Reviewed By: EmilyHigurashi On: March 29, 2006 19:28 PST
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I'm really glad about the approach you are taking toward Sessh/Rin!! I agree with it completely - at this point, i don't think they have a father/daughter relationship persay (sp?) but i definetely think they love each other a lot and you convey that love really well in your writing. I also like the idea of a romantic relationship when she is older, but for now i am content with their caring bond. I like your approach toward age too - it's not really an issue lol. I didn't think it would be, I was just wondering because some fanfic writers make the age differences really whacked and they make sessh like 70 and rin like 6 lol. anyway. great chapter! I look forward to the rest!!
| Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen On: March 27, 2006 09:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant!! I have said this before elsewhere, I will say it here, this story is epic, and daring in the crossover, and thus far a delightful read. The awards have been earned, and are well deserved. It hasn't been to my disadvantage to have not read Eddings yet, and that says so very much. The fact that I have laughed out loud and alternately found tears in my eyes, also makes my point, I believe. I understand how juggling studies and the dance with muse can be, I you have my utmost respect and admiration. (can't wait to hear Sess's self talk about the "shop situation"!) I think InuYasha is the kind of guy to buy a vacuum for his woman on her birthday... ya think? what a baka! lol... Keep up the fabulous work, Far!!
| Reviewed By: chanda (nsi) On: March 27, 2006 08:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I had two chapters to catch up with. Loved the shopping, you picked very good stores, I even took the time to check out those websites. Well, lets just say very Nice! Sorry I never got to answer you, with Silk. I don't know why I just assumed because he was a spy, but thank you for reassuring me he wasn't going to double cross them..lol. Wonderful update, I await your next chapter. Chanda
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 07:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Zelix! I remember reading some of this when you were posting on AFF. Chapter One is great. A sick Rin, a humiliated Sesshoumaru, cool new characters, and at the end (LOL), Inuyasha arrives on the scene. How much worse could it get for Sesshoumaru!? Well written. As always, your talent at description is to envy. I love that there is plenty going on and, oh how much do I love cliffies from authors that I know will update. As always, great job.---Snow
| Reviewed By: SesshomaruX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 20:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i likes dis very good. 10/10 keep going wit it DemoticGangsta
| Reviewed By: Emily Higurashi On: March 08, 2006 19:46 PST
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Awwwwwww poor inuyasha and his sensitive doggie nose!!!! That part was adorable. But, back on subject, i just have one question for you - is this going to turn into a Sessh/Rin pairing?! I dunno...it's a bit strange, but it certainly does make things more interesting, doesn't it? lol And also, at this point do you know how you are going to relate Sesshoumaru's demon age on a scale to how fast humans age? just wondering.
| Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inu, all those smells, i wonder what he and Durnik have planed for rin...i loved this chapters, then again, i love all of them. * gives snickerdoodle* now *gets on knees and bows down* PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON oh great master of fanfics
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 08, 2006 17:46 PST
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I enjoyed the chapter.It seems that Kagome see something between Rin and Sess. I wonder if she will tell Inuyasha or ask him about the "mine" dialogue of Sess in a indirect way. In another words will Kag ask Inuyasha in a roundabout way of the inu male character when it comes to taking a mate? Will the next chapter show Sess with Rin after the incident at the shop? Update soon.
| Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 08, 2006 17:46 PST
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I enjoyed the chapter.It seems that Kagome see something between Rin and Sess. I wonder if she will tell Inuyasha or ask him about the "mine" dialogue of Sess in a indirect way. In another words will Kag ask Inuyasha in a roundabout way of the inu male character when it comes to taking a mate? Will the next chapter show Sess with Rin after the incident at the shop? Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 07:52 PST
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I enjoyed the shopping but maybe I'm not visualizing the screen and sculpture very well because they strike me as very impractical for people who, currently, are nomads.
| Title: We need more!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 18:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is still one of my very favorite fics - and Oh my! Sesshomaru has gotten just a bit possesive, hasn't he? I keep waiting patiently for the next chapter. However, with the technical problems they are having at AFF, I wish you wouldn't wait so long (whine). Congratulations on your first place! You certainly deserved it. I hope you do well in the Best of 2005 - I know I've already placed my vote.
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