| "The Journey to the City of Endless Night" Reviews/Comments [ 281 ] |
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Reviewed By: YukiNoMiko On: June 10, 2006 05:35 PDT
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hey. i love this fic so much!! it's my #1 fave in all the fics i've read! inu seems a bit OOC and i thought he was a too harsh on shippo on that other chapter.. still i love it! but could pls lessen his swearwords? the way he acts in the fic, it's like inuyasha is... barbaric. so pls, could you lessen his swears?
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great chapter! It was nice to have Sessomaru's actions at the shop explained (I couldn't figure out how he would NOT know what was going on), but then to have Koga finally show up. Somehow I knew he wouldn't take Kagome being mated to InuYasha very well. Though, there at the end, I wasn't certain if he should be more frightened of Inuyasha or Poledra (or was it Polgara that was there?). And now the Voice has been outed by InuYasha's demon, no less. And will Sesshomaru have to explain how he has the power to raise the dead? What can I say except this was a really wonderful chapter, and I can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: GothicCotton On: June 08, 2006 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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Title: Vickey
Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 01:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story. I can see the buildings and the sites in my mind's eye. Much like Lord of the Rings. You are a very good writer. But I am writing because I'm sure the other fans would agree, we WANT MORE!!!Please hurry and update. Dying to know what happens next
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Title: YAY!!!!
Reviewed By: RingoSango [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is awesome!!! i love reading it even though it's taking me awhile. i love long stories. i've read many and yours to me is the best!!! keep up with the good work and i hope that you will keep writing and maybe you'll write some of your own stories.
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Reviewed By: NiffStral On: May 28, 2006 09:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! It's me, NiffStral, if for some reason you aren't reading my name. Well, since they deleted this at ff.net, I'm reviewing here. Since I told you I wouldn't review this author's note, I'm not really saying anything about the fanfic, just to tell you I'll start reviewing here. Coincedentally, I'm also talking to you right now, through MSN. Huh.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: May 24, 2006 13:42 PDT
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Congrats on graduating. It must have been very exciting. I hope that you find a job really soon with all the things happening about oursource and everything--which I think it will not have effected you. I'm greatly looking forward to reading the next chapter when it comes available.
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Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover (nsi) On: May 24, 2006 10:59 PDT
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Congrats on both graduating and on your capstone project winning first place for Best Drama!! I assumed you were busy with real life, this being the time of year for graduations and the like. Good luck in your job hunt, and I anxiously await for this adventure to continue. It's really getting good!!
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Title: Congratulations!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 21:25 PDT
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Your story has won Second Place for Best Drama Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_Drama_Fic_2 nd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Reviewed By: ganzil On: May 02, 2006 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to let you know how much I have been enjoying this fic. I almost didn't start reading this since I don't usually read crossovers, but once I opened the first page and found out it was a crossover with the Belgariad and Mallorean (which I love), I had to give your story a try. You've done a great job of integrating the two groups of characters and giving them a good storyline to work with. Your fic has the same satisfying blend of action, humor, romance and drama that makes the Eddings works so much fun to read. Thanks for writing such a well-conceived and executed fic. (And Inuyasha interacting with other characters, not to mention the dry voice, is priceless!)
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Reviewed By: DMInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NEW ATTACK, poor inu getting all confused cause of the voice, sorry i didnt review last time, my cau was up, oh iv started the malloreon i wonder what part inu play in this. DONT LEAVE ME HANGGING, UPDATE SOON *bring in truck load of snickerdoodles* got milk?
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Title: Chapter 60+
Reviewed By: WinterMoon/LaLaMoon On: April 18, 2006 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi... I've been reading your fic for awhile now. I'm liking the updates. Please. Update again soon. Moon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: April 18, 2006 17:46 PDT
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Sess-chan is still PO about that incident with Rin?? Boy can he hold a grudge. I see my Rin is showing off her new found ability. Got Inuyasha jaw on the ground. Great chapter as always update soon.
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Title: WOW! Just WOW!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy cow! That was certainly worth the wait! (though in reality, it really wasn't that long). I can't wait until we find out more about Sesshomaru/Rin - he certainly has become VERY possessive of her! And the battle, the fog, the blue Wind Scar - it was completely captivating. I could not read fast enough to see what happened. I can't wait for the next installment since it seems like things may be getting a bit exciting from here on out.
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Title: The Artist Formally Known as EmilyHigurashi
Reviewed By: FullmetalFangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:39 PDT
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Hey, FarAwayEyes! (This is EmilyHigurashi, btw. i made an account and i also wrote a fanfic about fruits basket! Please read it and review it if you have the time - i would really vaule your opinion ^^ ) Anyway, I'm getting worried 'bout you!! No rush in getting the next chapter up, I just hope you aren't too stressed out right now. Just remember your fans love you!!! Keep up the good work! :D
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