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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2011 03:49 EDT
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wonderful story!!! |
Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY IT IZ AWSOME!!!!!!!! N I THINK U R AN EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!
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Title: Still
Reviewed By: Chesterzerousygirl On: June 23, 2008 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been about 2 years since I last read this story and I still like it.
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Title: Whoa...
Reviewed By: Chesterzerousygirl On: February 02, 2008 02:59 EST
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This is sad, I read this story like several years ago and thought it wasn't updated. Now I just realized it was actually complete... Loved it by the way!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 11:22 EDT
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i loved iy y'd u stop?if its writers block i know how u feel 'cuase im in one now XD well update as soon as u can
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Title: Plagerism?
Reviewed By: babyy2kawaii On: May 14, 2007 22:15 EDT
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I agree with Wolf Blossom. This story of yours shows many similarities from her story I Dare You which was posted before Cracking My Hearts, in 2005. Also, the beginning of your story has a striking resemblance to that of I Dare You. Please clear this up with Wolf Blossom. -babyy2kawaii [Wolf Blossom's Co-writer & dear friend.]
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Title: Plagerism?
Reviewed By: Wolf Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 21:47 EDT
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Hi.. I have a story posted, I Dare You, from a few years back, and I must say, that this story comes uncomfortably close to my own plot, I Dare You. The entire aspect of the game, Inuyasha getting Kagome pregnant... it matches exactly with what I did with my own story.. I would definitely appreciate an e-mail back, hoping to clear this up. Thank you. Wolf Blossom
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Title: The best ^ ^
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that your fanfic's are just plain wonderful.I have read quite a few of them and none of them have disappointed me. I wish for you to keep up the hard work on your fic's ^ ^
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Georgie On: December 26, 2006 01:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had writers block for almost 2 months. i read this story and things just started coming to me. Ive already wrote 2 poems and 3 chapters of my book. This story was wonderful and had a great story line. I hope that u continue to create stories that lift spirits like it did to me. inuyasha_lori_cat@yahoo.com , is my email. please email me any time. i think i would enjoy talking to you. btw. once again great job on the best story i have seen on this site.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 16:28 EST
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And this Inuyasha openly begs for ear rubs?
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 15:52 EDT
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kk i loved it but im not sure if that is the end of the entire fic or not...but i have just gotta say this...BARF PITT SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!...kk now that ive made that clear and the fact that i love it i dont really have anything else to say...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Knorella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 23:33 EDT
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This is a delightful story so far (I'm on chapter 6), I especially liked the lines: "Do I get a term for you?" "You could call me lord and master." That was hilarious.
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 22:59 EDT
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This story was so cute I loved it
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Title: oh good job
Reviewed By: liz34556665 On: March 10, 2006 18:07 EST
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wow! When i looked at this story i thought it would be stupied BUT i was wrong this is a very good story! Did Inuyasha have his dog ears in this story? But i loved this story!
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Title: oh good job
Reviewed By: liz34556665 On: March 10, 2006 18:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! When i looked at this story i thought it would be stupied BUT i was wrong this is a very good story! Did Inuyasha have his dog ears in this story? But i loved this story!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 23, 2006 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic ^^ the fights were good =P although the ending was extremely corny, i loved the whole story and hope you write more great stuff like this =D
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 02:51 EST
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This story is so sweet. tHEY HAVE A LITTLE daugther. I could picture what she looks like. They got married became mates and are living happily ever after.I LOVE THIS STORY!~
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: January 10, 2006 18:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the revision!
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Reviewed By: bluegirl On: December 23, 2005 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i just picked up this story today and enjoyed it very much. you portrayed the characters brilliantly. i especially liked how u made kagome stubborn in her decisions but also, not too stubborn. all of her reactions and fears had a just cause, instead of just making her freak out for something stupid. And about your paragraph at the end, i know what your saying, believe me, i see it all the time. i am a Christain and i can safely say that, yes, the majority of them are like that (hypocrits) but that is because those are the ones that have their faces stuffed so far in the Bible that they can't even hear the world around them, let alone see it. but it doesn't matter what people believe in, just stay possitive and everthing should work out! :)
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Title: About the whole religion thing...
Reviewed By: Angelica_Pierce [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 11:10 EST
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I completely respect your difficulties with the church, however I have to say that an author's note at the end of a fic (that otherwise has nothing to do with religion) probably isn't the best forum to express them. I am a Christian and I can sincerely say that I was not offended by your use of the minister. There are hypocritical and hateful people in every walk of life, and I could easily see a minister who is self-righteous and arrogant taking a dim view of this particular union. I was, however, put off by the note; particularly the last bit about having 'evidence that could make any Christian doubt their faith'. I certainly don't doubt that you've had a craptastic experience or think that your thoughts are unjustified. What I'm trying to say is that I freely support your rights to express your views but am simply suggesting that you do it somewhere that isn't an Inuyasha fanfic not pertaining to religion. I hope that makes sense; I'm not trying to attack you or saying you don't have every reason to feel the way you do. I'm sorry that you've come across assholes in the Christian faith. Yes, they are there and I'm not terribly fond of them myself. ^_~ But I would point out that Christianity hardly has the market cornered… So while I'm not 'horribly offended', I must say I was surprised to find them where they were.
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Reviewed By: Serene_Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic! Your an awesome writer! imma read your other fics right now! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Bambigirl On: October 02, 2005 07:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww what a cute story!! ^_^ To be frank, what caught my attention for the story in the first place was Inuyasha and Kagome starting off really badly. I luv it when they do that lol. And he still has his ears!! Another yay. Ooh, best thing: you don't mention Kikyo as much as the other stories, which is a relief for me, since that's what most of the other authors keep on prattling about, so yuck for them and yay for you. I'd write more but it's about 7 in the morning and I haven't officially slept in more than a day. Good luck with the bastard, hope he changes...at least a little, and I hope you will continue this story, it's just too cute otherwise lol. Good-bye and good-night!! (or in my case morning)
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 18:56 EDT
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gorgeous story. :) really great job writing it!! lol. and you don't need an epilogue actually ^_^ you wrote the ending just perfectly....lol. like it was it own little epilogue. hehe...great job with the writing, and great story. i hope the your situation with the bastard is/will resolve(ing) itself. :( I'm sorry he's such a dumbass to you. :(
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Title: Review, Religion, and Bastards
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 16:02 EDT
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Religion and Bastards, amazing how often those two words come up in conversation together. First, the review. Good job, great story. I read both "I Dare You" and "Cracking My Heart". Sometimes you start off at the same place then run your own race. There are that many story lines out there unless you get totally out of character and into left field. Next, the bastard. It's too bad you can't sit him. Might do him some good to get his face planted in the ground eating dirt for awhile. Have him meet you in the park and trip him. Maybe it will teach him to think about shit before he does it. You have to remember that for as smart as men can be, there's nothing dumber on the planet. They haven't a clue, so try and work around the handicap. Last, Religion. There have been more wars fought in the name of god than for any other reason. That's religion, not faith. Faith teaches tolerence, religion teaches intolerence. If you meet someone who lives and breathes their religion, you must watch them carefully like you would someone who's VERY developmentally disabled. There's something wrong with their brain. They have lost the ability to question, and the ability to grow. Actually, Kikyo and Kagome are good examples. Kagome is Faith, and Kikyo is Religion, I don't think I could have said it any better. Don't stop writing, and I won't stop reading. Deal?
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Reviewed By: ladida On: September 22, 2005 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know first hand how much school can take up time so i'm not going to like demand that you write more but i did like this story a lot and i would be one of the first to read an update so if you could write a few more chapters i would love it and i know others would to. i love your style of writing and thanks for continuing with the story unitl there was an end, i really enjoyed it. and i hope everything works out allrite
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Title: Cracking My Heart
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 19:12 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: geat chapter
Reviewed By: dogdemonandkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon, this was a great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Toji On: September 19, 2005 08:00 EDT
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This is the first review i ever gave. i just wanted to say thank you for a good read. i need to get some sleep now seeing as how i read this fic instead of sleeping. Keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 18:09 EDT
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Glad to hear you're feeling a bit better and that you're willing to overcome this bout of yours. ^_^ This chapter was short but sweet, sometimes the strongest messages come from the least amount of words spoken. Well done! It takes a true writer to do that. I am Catholic, but I do agree with your little "rant" some people do do things and say they're doing it for the good of the church, but we all know it's a load of bullshit. If anyone's offended, they're probably too far in, or just stupidly blind. Anyway, if there is an epilogue, I'll be waiting for it, and if not, that's okay too! I love this fic any way you decide to write it or leave it. ^-^ Keep up the amazing work!!!! ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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