| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: Firetiger14213 On: September 18, 2005 16:59 EDT
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I agree with you on all that christian stuff, If you wanna talk and rant and rave about it with me that be cool ^^ Hula_girl7000@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: September 18, 2005 11:49 EDT
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good place to end it off, I luv the fic. ^^ I should inttroduce you to my friend Jana, she thinks that if you don't believe in her religion, you're headed for hell....she all but told me that when I tole her that I was Jewish
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Reviewed By: SUGI On: September 18, 2005 04:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOKIN GOOD UPDATE SOON
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Title: loved it
Reviewed By: xXxanimefangirlxXx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. I hope you post the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu Yashsa luvr On: September 11, 2005 00:03 EDT
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I loved your story. I liked how Inuyasha went from a real badass bastard to a sweet and caring mate. I hope you and your friend work things out.
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Title: Hold the damn phones!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. I mean REALLY good. I love the chemistry between Inu & kags. I read the whole thing before I decided to comment. First, I read *I Dare You* as well (very good fic) and although there are a FEW similiarities, this one is still very different and very good. Chap 11...I loved it. I love your lemons...they're sexy. I hope you continue, you're doing a great job. On a side note, I am currently throwing big ROUND sunkist oranges at your *friend* for making you upset & they're bouncing off his head. ^-^ Feel better chica & we'll be here whenever you're ready to continue. InuGrrrl
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Title: ch. 12 good but short
Reviewed By: justchillin1357 On: September 07, 2005 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was pretty good but short. I hope you feel better and make the wedding soon. I'm getting anxious.
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Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK THAT YOUR STORY IS A GREAT AND I HOPE NO PRAY THAT U KEEP GOING
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Title: Cracking My Heart
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 19:13 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 18:51 EDT
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Another chapter well done. I do hope you feel better soon; again, the offer still stands, if you need to talk, msn and yahoo are on my prof. But yes, no pressure for you to update from me, I perfectly understand how you're feeling. Anyway, I liked this chapter. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!!!! ~Claire
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Sweetstuff On: September 07, 2005 00:00 EDT
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Omg no...u cant stop now...but i do feel sorry for u and all... sorry about that happening...so when do u think that u would beable to write next?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 23:22 EDT
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*squee* I luv your fic, and I didn't even really think about 'I dare you' untill you mentioned it, and your fic, the only thing the same is that it starts out with a game of truth or dare (more or less) but other than that, two different fics. Your fic's really good, update again soon please. (note, flamers can be logged in when they flame, just see a commet for my fic 'you must die' but he got a not nice responce)
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Title: Cracking My Heart
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 20:35 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:08 EDT
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Hey i loved your new chap i hope you update reall soon
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Reviewed By: Liz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 02:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man, buck up! This chapter was just what I needed--I know what its like be back in school. As far as your shitty friend, tell them to fuck off--if they have you that down, let em go! I truely heart this story and despite some other stories with a similar premise, this is the only one that gets me in the gut. You make a depressed goth's day brighten up when you update: fight the youthful depression of a college student and keep this baby coming!
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