| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 08:25 EDT
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i dont care what anyone else says, your work is way diffrent then 'i dare you'. The two of you even have your own writing styles. Personally i love your story and its on my favorits list. So with that said i also wanted to say that i love your story and cant wait till you update next-which i do hope is soon-. so ill go now and stop repeting myself. JA!! I hope that your feeling better by the way.
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Reviewed By: Prb651991 On: August 04, 2005 07:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that it was a good way to end it i cant wait to read the next chappie
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 00:20 EDT
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I am loving this story. It is so beautifully written and the plot is very original. I've never a read a fic where she got preganant AFTER the break up. Also, hte realtionship between Kagome and InuYasha is very cute. Anyways, good luck and I wish you prosperity. ^_^!
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Title: loven it!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is different from all the othere's i have read and i got to say it is Awsome!! i cant wait for your next chapter. P.S. hope you feel better soon :-)
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Reviewed By: Lynny On: August 03, 2005 23:58 EDT
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this fic is great...you got creativness in ur head ^_^. but yeah the first chappy did remind me alot of I Dare You (not the rest though) but still, it's good
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Reviewed By: kaogmeinuxx On: August 03, 2005 23:40 EDT
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you fic is just like I Dare You from another author... are you copying or something? its exactly like it.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 23:23 EDT
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ooh I love your story! It's so sweet! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Title: Great start
Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: August 03, 2005 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I think this is so cute so far. I hope Kagome does accept him, but I always love to see little obsticals along the way!! I love it hun keep it up! :)
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Title: guh, stupid kikyou!
Reviewed By: ish On: August 02, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe her! and poor inuyasha, another bad situation caused by her... i cant wait to find out how he gets out of this one!
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Title: Oh come on where's the fourth chapter
Reviewed By: verkalovesyou... On: August 02, 2005 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg dude write the fourth chapter i can't wait lol you stuff is great i love how easy it is to read your writing if you ever have spare time please read one of mine called *finally together* love your stories verkalovesyou
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Reviewed By: lil_kags(sammi) On: August 02, 2005 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. i dont kno if u update on fanfic.net...but newayz..PLZ u need 2 make kag forgive inu..:(..(stupid kikyo)..sry..well plz update soon great chap. -lotz of peace n happiness- l8z
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww poor kagome I like version better its erally good
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Reviewed By: frostyshake On: August 01, 2005 23:37 EDT
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This is definitely a compelling story, though I feel Kagome deserves to get her revenge on Inuyasha. He was a cold cruel bastard. Here's hoping you get better soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 20:50 EDT
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I really don't like Inuyasha in this story. He not only cheated on Kagome, he was deliberately cruel to her while doing it. So far, he hasn't done anything to redeem himself. He went into the party at Kagome's apartment in the first chapter and was deliberately cruel to her again. He sexually assaulted her with other people in the room! It's a pattern of cruelty now. And he doesn't even love her since he has already acknowledged to himself that his instincts are telling him to take her again. And his planning to get her back is cold and calculated. There's no affection or regard for her feelings. He thinks about every move he makes in order to make Kagome *think* he has changed but by his thoughts, it is clear that he has not. I really can't see any way for Kagome to take him back without appearing to be absolutely spineless and stupid, but if you can pull it off, I salute you.
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Title: pretty good
Reviewed By: Enchanted_Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a realy good story. I'm happy that you haven't spelled every other word wrong like alot of other authors I've read have. It would be nice to hear the story from Inu's point of view more, like how he felt when he saw Kikyo, why he cheated on Kagome, stuff like that. I really love this and know that you have a constant fan for this story.
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