| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: frostyshake On: August 01, 2005 23:37 EDT
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This is definitely a compelling story, though I feel Kagome deserves to get her revenge on Inuyasha. He was a cold cruel bastard. Here's hoping you get better soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 20:50 EDT
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I really don't like Inuyasha in this story. He not only cheated on Kagome, he was deliberately cruel to her while doing it. So far, he hasn't done anything to redeem himself. He went into the party at Kagome's apartment in the first chapter and was deliberately cruel to her again. He sexually assaulted her with other people in the room! It's a pattern of cruelty now. And he doesn't even love her since he has already acknowledged to himself that his instincts are telling him to take her again. And his planning to get her back is cold and calculated. There's no affection or regard for her feelings. He thinks about every move he makes in order to make Kagome *think* he has changed but by his thoughts, it is clear that he has not. I really can't see any way for Kagome to take him back without appearing to be absolutely spineless and stupid, but if you can pull it off, I salute you.
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Title: pretty good
Reviewed By: Enchanted_Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a realy good story. I'm happy that you haven't spelled every other word wrong like alot of other authors I've read have. It would be nice to hear the story from Inu's point of view more, like how he felt when he saw Kikyo, why he cheated on Kagome, stuff like that. I really love this and know that you have a constant fan for this story.
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Title: you know, this hsould definitely be the daily-update type of fic!
Reviewed By: ish On: August 01, 2005 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm astounded, i honeslty am!! i love this completely and i seriously can't wait for the next chapter, i'm antsy in my chair!!! poor Kagome, and poor inuyasha as well! i sympathize both situations, the pregnant single girl with a baby-daddy who cheted on her, the guy who realizes what he lost and wants it back because he didn't have a reason to trust before and now he does. its beautiful, really. i commend you on your stupendous job, and i'm sure the next update will be as amazing as your first couple of chapters. i can not wait!
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Reviewed By: Little Owl On: July 31, 2005 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INUYASHA IS A BLOODY JERK. Making out with Kikyo after he used Kagome like that and didn't even feel ashamed!!!!!! Kagome and Sango's fury is very enjoyable especially if aimed at a certain two timing jerk. Though i didn't really understand the reason why Inu cheated on Kags so cruelly in the first place if he liked dating her??? Please please continue!!!!!
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Title: COOOOOOL
Reviewed By: KOGASGIRL132 On: July 31, 2005 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS VERY UNIQUE AND INTERESTING! UPDATE SOON! I'M CRAVING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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Reviewed By: Sagittariusgr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 22:05 EDT
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That was good update soon
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Reviewed By: Foamyfun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 17:30 EDT
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i love it! great beginning! update soon!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 31, 2005 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I hope Kagome makes Inuyasha pay dearly for what he did to her. Please update as soon as you can. I really want to see where you take this.
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!! I love this! It rocks!!
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Reviewed By: Jessi Mae On: July 31, 2005 05:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! ASAP! this story is great......wait, more than great.
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Reviewed By: Biteswhenprovoked [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 04:45 EDT
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damn i love this. i dont think i've read anything like this and i read a lot. please update.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. I like how you have Kagome not going back to Inuyasha. She should make him pay. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 02:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved your story please write more chapters soon. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes. thanks
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Title: PLEASE!!! I'm desperate!
Reviewed By: yuni On: July 31, 2005 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why?! It was getting so good. Please hurry up and update it.
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