| "Cracking My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 19:24 EDT
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First off, I hope you're alright. I realize we only have an author-reader and vice versa relationship, but if you need someone to talk, my MSN and yahooIM are on my prof page. Depression's a bitch, but it's easier when you talk to someone. Second off, *mmm hentai* loved it. lol. Keep up the awesome work!!!! ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 11:48 EDT
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man, that chapter 11 was a total lemon...you sure like them, don't you?
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: AW555 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, and if you need someone to talk to just check my profile and it has my email and IMing places or should lol so if you need a friend you can always talk to me. I'm having a hard time with school too. I'm going to a new school and no one likes what I like so they would think I'm a loser if I said what I liked lol anyway enough of my rambling, I love this story, and take your time with updating. You updating is less is better then no updating at all.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to let you know i loved your update. keep up the good work and please post another chapter again soon.
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 17:45 EDT
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really cutsy
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 15:40 EDT
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hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon. thanks
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Title: Update!
Reviewed By: inuyasha_lover5209 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^____________________________________^PLEASEEEE!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! o^.^o
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 22:13 EDT
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Good chapter! Well done!!!! I can't wait until next chapter (hahaha, hentai thoughts ...) *sigh*
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 06:45 EDT
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Hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Mallie3 (not logged in) On: August 19, 2005 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes this was a very short chapter but it was still cute! I love when people put little fights in their stories thats what makes them more intresting nice job luv!
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Reviewed By: Porscha On: August 14, 2005 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say that I really love your fic. I only just began reading inuyasha fan fiction and yours is the best one yet. I look forward to future chapters. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: mystery_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your one of the few authors who can balence emotions, romance & drama honestly i love the inuKag pairing im not going to lie but the way you have been writeing and showing Kagomes apprehension to being his mate or to marry him in fear by doubting him is realistic a little resistance makes the heart grow fonder no? haha great story keep up the work
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: August 12, 2005 21:02 EDT
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I thought Hyu was only a few weeks old. Newborn babies don't watch movies or talk or reach for their parents. Their coordination and vision are not fully developed. They don't even roll over on their own until a few months old and don't crawl until after about five months. And Kagome herself would not be recovered enough after giving birth to have sex for at least five or six weeks. Even if Hyu is six weeks old, what you have described is not realistic.
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Title: NICE!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an update!! and a great update it was. anyway keep up the good work and please dont make us wait to long for the next chapter.
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Title: Well Done!!!!
Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done!!!! I'm quite enjoying this so far. You're bringing in the right amount of romance and drama into this fic to evenly balance it out. I love it! I'm happy that you didn't make Inuyasha a total bastard and Kagome a total suck. (I just adore my Inu-chan SO SO much! ^_^ and I absolutely hate it when Kagome is totally weak, so to speak and a sap) Keep up the awesome work!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next in this brilliant concoction of yours! Clarissa Ann Mirko P.S. Thanks for reviewing With or Without You!!!! I'll be updating soon!
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